Topic: You & your crew are lost at sea & encounter an unknown deadly creature.

Verses are due by 9/29/22 at 11:59pm EST.

Both done a great job here. Entertaining reads on both sides and nice approaches with the Topic. I enjoyed my winners approach more here as well as the story and picture he painted. Best of luck to whoever goes through. 

Apologies for the wonky formatting. Wouldn't fit in under 40 in the way I wanted it. Good luck Row!

Topic: You & your crew are lost at sea & encounter an unknown deadly creature.

typo: This fate is the crudest.

another typo: so a leader. sorry

One came with a very different set up than what I've seen, which was original . The other came with some solid elements & imagery.

went with the verse I felt was on topic more & structured better

Both had a good verse, I enjoyed reading this topic. Enfinite I liked your approach of a therapy session, that was cool. I felt Row had a really nice flow and everything came together nicely. Really difficult to choose between the two both had really good story elements. Hard to choose but I had to. Fair vote in, no hate.

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Enfinite that was dope dude. That read so easily & I dig the format you went with. I feel like you did an amazing job setting the stage. The rhymes you wove into the narrative were smooth as hell & you didn't sacrifice anything to make something work. It just flowed. Solid drop. 

Row answered 100%. Easily read without sacrificing quality of the narrative to make the rhymes. & the rhymes were good af. The narrative was well painted & executed. I feel like yours with regards to the topic hit the nail more on the head. 

This was a great read overall, pretty tough pick. Both brought some A game, props.

This was dope, great verses from both. Battle of the round for sure.

enjoyed this one a lot, I like the storytelling an imagery, both had some good burts of bars Ima go with Row cause I like the story an rhymes more. GB FV !!

Both were on point in every category but ones approach was more unique and that's they won it for me.

Fire read..for me the best of this round by far..each line had me in suspense and wondering what is gonna happen next..I hate reading but both you drew me in..like dam.,this by far the most difficult to choose from..both ya win in my books and definitely no losers on this spiff ..this could be a toss up,.both written excellent...one was a little more suspense for me,.salute and good luck to whoever advances. And can't wait to read the next round to whoever makes it to the next round.. 10s all around the board,.good shit fellas

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This is a nice and interesting read from both sides.

One had such an interesting approach to it, and the other had some great storytelling methods. 

If I truly break it down to coverage of the topic, I would go with Row. But if I break it down to creativity and just an interesting method/enjoyment of reading through it I would probably go with En. 

Torn at the moment. I'll probably read through them 5 more times and come to a decision.