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2022 Topical Tournament
Length: 40 Lines

GRR POW (38%) Lost

Ranked #-- This Month (#-- All Time)

Crew: ANBU Black Ops

Reppin: Bronx, New York, United States

Óðinn (62%) Won

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Topical Champion
A Celtic Bard

Ranked #-- This Month (#81 All Time)

Crew: DedSec

Reppin: Ireland

GRR POW

<div>I woke up in a tight space, eyes wandering.. all I see is black as they spread. Then punch a hole through the coffin, & after it shreds.. my “hand rises up from the ground” like “back from the dead!” damn I feel like a old kid, oh shit.. atleast I got death out the way, now the rest of my days should be filled with blessings & grace. Benjamin Button resemblance, if you look me dead in the face. But I only get younger & younger so I don’t stress, I have faith!</div>
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<div>Years past.. I got kicked out my nursing home, cause they see I’m not turning old. I checked my pension & realized the amount was worthless so.. instead of going to search for loans, I started working a 9 to 5! Cause it’s hurting, tryna survive. My life insurance don’t got a dime. So I offer my service where I’m assigned, in hopes of splurging from all this grind! This working stuff got me tired! I’m tryna stay tough to the wire, but honestly.. I can’t wait till I’m young enough to retire!</div>
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<div>Started searching with hopes to find.. a woman that’s worth it to be my bride & finally found the most perfect up in my eyes. But those years flew by.. now I’m a virgin with open mind, lurking most of the time, surfing for hoes & vibes!</div>
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<div>Yeah, this is the sequel. Once I got to college, I tried to drink with my people. But since I’m not 21 anymore.. buying alcohol is illegal! High school through 1st grade was a breeze through! But the bullies made kindergarten so evil! So thank god, I’m ending with preschool! Now my old ass is giving babysitters a hard time, but they get paid for this shit.. so I figure, it’s all fine!</div>
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<div>Damn I get younger & younger, my whole fam starts to wonder.. what’s wrong with my health. The doctor scans & just stutters.. tries his best plans, as I suffer. He glance & discovers, how bad I’m becoming. But before he could save me.. I die in the hands of my mother!</div>
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<div>Living is amazing but it sucks that you end in a hearse. So it’s up to you to decide, if it’s a gift or a curse. In life, the only thing certain is death. So living backwards serves as a test & allows your journey to work at it’s best!</div>
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<div>Hopefully my story change how ya viewing shit, cause I’m tryna send a message & I hope I get through with it. Always keeping the end in mind may sound like it’s cruelly sick.. but it’s the best advice, cause death teaches us how to truly live!</div>
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Óðinn

<div>Eyes open to tapering dreams,</div>
<div>Wavering scenes turn to neighboring screams/</div>
<div>Drowning in the crack of some steel,</div>
<div>As my head bounces back off the wheel/</div>
<div>Thinking my teeth hurts, as my wife</div>
<div>enters the car through the window, feet first/</div>
<div>Legs untangling from behind her bum,</div>
<div>While teeth return to my gums/</div>
<div>The car begins to reshape as other pieces are remade/</div>
<div>The engine lifts an moves from my mangled lap,</div>
<div>My ribcage, organs and legs are scrambled back,</div>
<div>As the pedals retract/</div>
<div>The cars in reverse,</div>
<div>back thinking <em>“what could be worse?”</em></div>
<div>As loose change that was once shrapnel,</div>
<div>Is dislodge from my adams apple,</div>
<div>And returning to the cup holder,</div>
<div>While rethinking how our love is over/</div>
<div>My wife’s neck bones click into place,</div>
<div>As road debri is flicked from her face/</div>
<div>The windscreen forms back into one piece, as</div>
<div>Trailing bits of glass leave her eyes,</div>
<div>she’s forced into her seat,</div>
<div>whaling fists retreat to her sides,</div>
<div>her voice hoarse as she shrieks:</div>
<div><em>“shit of piece a be always you’ll why Thats”</em></div>
<div>I exclaim:</div>
<div><em>"mother your like just, whore a You’re"</em></div>
<div>As I’m un-snatching her phone,</div>
<div><em>“?yet off you dropped he has Or”</em></div>
<div><em>“?him with still you Are”</em></div>
<div>And unreading the message/</div>
<div><em>“?texting you Who”</em></div>
<div>I ask after seeing eggplants in her windows reflection/</div>
<div>Rage dwindling down,</div>
<div>Now thinking ‘bout how she’s gonna love this weekend vacay,</div>
<div>How she’s been working so hard,</div>
<div>even on weekends to make pay/</div>
<div>She deserves a break from all the overtime she’s been doing,</div>
<div>When this whole time it was another man she was persuing/</div>

Voting has ended for this battle (battle finished on 2022-09-29 23:01:11).

Phroxen <LoD>
Moderator
2x Grand Champion
One Bar Legend
Cypher Champion
Concept Champion
One Bar Champion

Topic: Your life in reverse.

Verses are due by 9/29/22 at 11:59pm EST.

Posted on: 2022-09-26 00:24:54

Óðinn <DedSec>
Admin
Topical Champion
A Celtic Bard

Topic: Your life in reverse.

Posted on: 2022-09-26 15:02:15

Affinity <Asgard>	Asgard! Posted on: 2022-09-30 00:08:43
Row <ANBU> 2x Topical Champion 2x One Bar Champion Concept Champion Tag Team Champion LBT Champion	Ops! Posted on: 2022-09-30 08:16:45
Enfinite <AC's>	This was a solid read. Both did a really good job and had two different approaches. I simply went for the individuals piece that I vibed more with, it could really go either way Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2022-09-30 09:26:58
S A L T	Felt more substance in one. The story had me more engaged. Both had some solid ideas but the cleaner execution decided this one for me. GRR, feel like you took on a story that was tough to solidly condense into 40 lines or less. You got the assignment & you stuck to it. I think you could've added some more emotion or something outside the lines to it than kind of going over life's bullet points. Rhymes were sound though & it flowed well. I love how Odin picked a small incident that you can go in depth with while painting a bigger portrait. Flow was clean, rhymes were clean, idea was good. Constructively I think you could've done more to paint the picture but I think you got the job done. Both probably could've thrown some more metaphors or wordplay or something but the story was told. It was a solid read overall. Gb. Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2022-09-30 15:18:22
Masked-Reaper Grand Champion Cypher Champion Scheme Champion	Both started off with some great imagery and on topic. Both fell off towards the end, one more than the other. Went with the verse I felt was stronger overall on the topic. good job both, enjoyed both verses Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2022-09-30 15:25:04
LitHits	Hm...I like it a lot. But, I like Óðinn's better because it shows a lot more influential depth into the real world and how much hate there is in it. Posted on: 2022-09-30 21:25:58
GodTheReptilian <AC's> OtherWordly	This was a pretty dope battle, both offerings were commendable...the storyline line in one, as for resurrecting himself...to a story told backwards (as I've experimented with the same, years ago..so I completely understand the level of difficulty involved)...which is as almost equally difficult, to tell a story from the grave site to your mother's womb. This was more difficult to vote on. As for the angle, both rightfully deserved more space to complete the entirety of their ideas...I would have like to hear more..as both of your approaches were significantly different. I felt one edge it on the creativity level. Blessings, fairs in! 10/10 for sure! 👽 Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2022-10-02 12:35:14
G3P0 <WANTED>	Both had different approaches with the concept one just executed it better andhad a better take on the topic Ggz to both Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2022-10-03 04:15:44
Phe <AC's> One Bar King	This is by far my favorite topic of the tourney so far. 1 did a death to birth type of verse and the other did a situational type of verse.. I was feeling my choices verse because it was more detailed and caught my attention right from the beginning Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2022-10-03 20:19:44
Flako Boom	Wow.great read on both sides..this is difficult cause you both did great..both you stuck with the topic ver well..one. Was a bit more vivid with the picture painted and the other had a good message.. I got my winner..this could be very close in this round... Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2022-10-03 21:01:09
PENetrateUnoW <NewRep>	This was super fucking close. Excellent battle. Ultimately just going with what entertained me more. Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2022-10-04 10:35:20