Topic: Being turned into a vampire or zombie... your choice.

Verses are due by 9/29/22 at 11:59pm EST.

Both done well with their topics here. My winner had stronger poetic prose and brought his piece to life more than the other for me. Best of luck to whoever goes through. 

Good job Salt good luck 

I think one was more diss oriented even if it wasnt full the other i felt was a lil more cypherish so i sligjtly got a winner here but by slight margin

Nice drops from both. One more dark than the other. Felt one had some really good imagery and that took it. 

GL Both 

NR

Nice topic..pen was a vampire I believe and salt was a zombie I believe..lol..I like pens read and style..nice read.. salt I like the style you did with this as well as was a bit more detailed with ya words..and was a bit more solid with the topic..salute 

Both did they thing but my winner's story just capitvated me more. GGz to both

Favorite lines:

I fine'ly scraped 'em, left his abdomen brutally gashed / I moved to his back & drained him of ev'ry fluid he had /the scene was beautifully mad, and I fanatically laughed

My small relief was cut off by a gun shot & an awful screech: an old man with a jostled knee was crawling from what was another me, with his noggin' turned to a blob of beef. Suddenly, I was on my feet. My eye dropping like a die, rolling on his odds to flee. Whatever biology made this mangled object think, now had me gnawing teeth

I thought both of you tackled the subject matter well, with completely different styles. One went with a more horrocore/poetry style and the other had it read almost as a rhyming novel.

Both were good reads to me, my winner here was decided based on the overall flow and structuring, as i both thought you were even in terms of content and creativity.

Good looks Pen, gl! 

Simply put, thought one had more elements of a topical verse and had me more engaged throughout the piece. 

Yea yo Dope Drop so im going with the Vote as i thinkit's fare i felt more feeling in onse then the other ..(PaL)..

Wow, this battle was intense! BUT! Penetrate just hit different

Solid drops from both peeps! Both had smooth reads and good stories. I thought Salts ending was pretty nice. PENs rhymes were on point. Solid bout here guys, got my winner by a hair. 

Pretty well-crafted and descriptive offerings for both, really dope reads! The both of you elaborated on points that I would have liked to have seem, with few overlapping ideas in concepts and very imaginative...overall, I went with who I thought had the more presented the more well balanced verse with good structure. Although, respectively...the other had a very strong start!

Blessings gentleman, fairs in! 10/10

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dope drop a lot of imagery from both, I like ones style a bit more overall so Im gonna go with that one. Good shit to both fairs in!!

This was a dope read. Both had nice imagery & story telling. The winner’s closer was my deciding factor. Great battle, fair’s in.

This was sick, great evocative verses brought yo life some crazy imagery. Only line I thought was a bit silly was when PEN mentioned taking his opponent from behind and sucking out his fluid but yee good battle yall

Two different takes here, one felt more like a rap verse while the other read more like a rhyming story. I enjoyed both verses quite a bit and that makes it that much harder to vote on this. This is the hardest battle to vote on because you both did really good with the topic. I chose my winner because I felt they just barely edged out the other in terms of narrative and enjoyment. Fair vote in, no hate.

I was feeling my choices verse more. My choice was written better

My winner took a lil while for him to get going but when he did he stayed consistent throughout. The other was the exact opposite. What separated the two, in terms of skill, is one had some punches in his piece that I liked along with telling a good story, plus it seems like he had more to it. The other told a nice tale buts that's all it was. Props to both and g'luck in the next round, victor.