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2022 Topical Tournament
Length: 40 Lines

mister jon flako (56%) Won

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Reppin: Sacramento, California, United States

ThaGauddyGawd (44%) Lost

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mister jon flako

<div>Today is a day I always wake up with a bit of loneliness and emptiness in my heart and soul.a dark void that will never find closure..a day where I want to drown my emotions and tears in a bottle of liquor to the point that I feel it's an escape from my reality that life after death no longer exists..like I wake up from a dream that doesn't own up to a happy ending.</div>
<div>As the spiders and mosquitos slowly drink the teardrops from my lost eyes starring out into a world of emptiness makes me wonder what life would feel like if you were here in this world with all your family and friends.</div>
<div>Will the gloom and sadness fly over the eye of the storm or will it suck me in and rip every limb from my body to the point where there's no reason to March forward past these deep and dark sorrows.13 years missing and this date March 8th has always ended with a question mark.</div>
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<div>.a catepillar that is trapped in a cacoon that can't fight it's way out to evolve into the beautiful butterfly that it's suppose to be.the fragile state of endless wonders only buries me deeper into trance that's filled with tremendous pain of empathy to even fathom the thought if you're dead or alive. You are a man of many names..</div>
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<div>the good times and bad times I will always miss with you. If there is really a god please send him a sighn that people still and always think of him and miss him deeply in our hearts.. hopefully your healthy well and happy in your world that you're exploring..</div>
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<div>hope is all that I have left for you..sadly to say but it's the truth.. happy birthday Jason Morales, a brother that can never be replaced by another brother..I don't ever think I ever told you that I love you..but I do.there is so much to say..</div>
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ThaGauddyGawd

<div>Why they calling me dumb, dishellved and TROUBLED. Got that the lace fronted yesterday waking wavy after inputing my BUNDLES Cuz its my life not yours respectfully  though at times I STUMBLE. Withdrawals causing me to lose my HUMBLE with the scars or my latest RUMBLE. Cuz everybody gotta pick me up to start the MORNING OFF. I just need a little be stronger than starbucks is SOMETHING SOFT.  Feel the rush course through me something I've  KNOWN BEFORE. Since thing I've been chasing it these meaningful things seem trivial I want NEVER MORE Wanna just go away from it but it's feeling like a fall THROUGH THE FLOOR. Depression setting in through the blackout visions "why my girl dn't call ME NO MORE." Never mind that I'm OUT TO STORE  it's feeling like EIGHTY FOUR  DEGREES but I can hide from THE DECEASED  looks within my hoodie to cover UP THE SORES.  That bacon egg and cheese sounding good but my stomach CAN’T ENDURE  I need at least a gram to get me through shopping otherwise ITS A CHORE. Before I get the bottled water the owner rushed me swear he don't like ME FOR SURE. Just another former employer whose just rotten TO THE CORE. Plus I barely SHORTED THE REGISTER, but THAT DIDN’T REGISTER just another piece of shit thinking THAT THEY BETTER. Coming down something AROUND NOONISH. Chasing another high got me FEELING BRUTISH but it’s the only thing that’s KEEPING ME SANE black strap Bible Belt thanking THE LORD IN VAIN. Rattling the can all you give me is BUS CHANGE Any lick for the hits my fiend type is BONK GANG.. Oh life is ya high shit SOUND LAME..We party animals over while you SOUND TAME. Never mind that call my mother again but DIDN’T VISIT. Asking to play ball WITH A CLINIC but I wasn’t feeling THE SCRIMMAGE. Mother love must be A CURSE in REVERSE. She trying to sell me on MY WORTH but I ain’t BUYING IT But never mind that  it’s the evening time looking for that woman and who SUPPLYING IT That super girl saved my life and theres no DENYING IT She that girl for me no matter how many others be EYEING IT Only bitch that won't be telling so I CONFIDE IN Why can they see me like you see on the inside in  A shoulder to lean on even a hole to HIDE INSomething bout SOBRIETY  just gives me ANXIETY Cuz much as I claim I’m special I’m just the garden VARIETY. But screw SOCIETY cuz their feelings dn’t  APPLY TO ME. Plug Float a COUPLE BALLOONS and I’m dope enough TO BEND THE SPOON no KEANU REEVES .  Stuck in the moment where my thoughts SEEM TO FREEZE. Life ON A LEASE need my latest fix on my LATE TRIPPING, Got CAUGHT SLIPPING by jack boys of the night put in SUBMISSION. Lucky I’m still numb so this is just an INTERMISSION on my INNER MISSION of CHASING VISION. The pleasure of AFFLICTION within my body’s COMPOSITION Enthralling my heart and mind to the point of no COMPETITION. Pulling THE STRAP  til my  SYNAPSE RELAPSE. OBSERVATIONS of the CONSTELLATIONS  steady OSCILLATIONS  .  One day I’ll be high enough to Behind those thoughts within my CONTEMPLATIONS. Or maybe that bad batch send me flatlining without a CONVERSATION. Cause all I wanted was a little hope without the CONGREGATION.</div>

Voting has ended for this battle (battle finished on 2022-09-22 22:42:12).

Phroxen <LoD>
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Topic: A day in the life of a heroin addict.

You have until 9/22/22 at 11:59PM EST to post.

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2022-09-19 11:02:49

Óðinn <....>
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Both done a nice job with the concept here. My winner painted a better picture here. Best of luck to whoever goes through.

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2022-09-25 18:00:57

Phroxen <LoD>
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Goddamn this was close. I gotta go with my gut here. Two absolutely different styles but one just painted a beautiful picture full of emotion and it won me over. Fair's in.

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2022-09-26 00:01:02

mister jon flako Premium Member The Drunken Sober One	Topic: a day in the life of a heroin addict Posted on: 2022-09-22 13:14:57
ThaGauddyGawd <TGMXCFC> Premium Member Live Battler	Topic: a day in the life of a heroin addict Posted on: 2022-09-22 22:44:40
mister jon flako Premium Member The Drunken Sober One	Nice drop gg Posted on: 2022-09-22 23:17:24
Student Staff Hall of Famer LB Historian LetsBeef Patriarch Creative Genius	Damn both were great! Imagery, language & introspective with different styles. I've gotta come back before voting on this, y'all went D E E P, props dudes Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2022-09-23 00:47:49
TKtheGREAT	One said alot, but the other said alot more. Good battle peeps. Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2022-09-23 01:19:19
G3P0 <WANTED>	Winner had a more descriptive and vivid verse. Both had great imagery ggz to both Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2022-09-23 03:05:31
ThaGauddyGawd <TGMXCFC> Premium Member Live Battler	Nice drop as well Boom Posted on: 2022-09-23 07:38:51
Zezz	Flako - this is going to be a weird vote from me. You didn't fill the box so generally I don't like that. But this came off like poetry and really encapsulated the feeling of a heroin addict. The serenity that gets you when you do heroin was in this verse. It felt like rap and poetry had a baby and I'm not a fan of the style but it worked well for the topic. Gauddy - you did a good job filling the box however the emotions that you envoked for this battle wasn't quite the idea of a heroin addict that I've witnessed. The rapping was simple and well formatted but this felt like you weren't that into the topic. Weird fucking battle here sifz Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2022-09-23 10:40:53
Row <ANBU> 3x Topical Champion 2x One Bar Champion Concept Champion Tag Team Champion 4x LBT Champion	one didn't rhyme but made sense (despite not really sticking to the theme.. too vague). other was the opposite. have my winner. Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2022-09-23 11:53:54
Masked-Reaper <Chapter666> Grand Champion 2x Premier League Champion Cypher Champion Scheme Champion The Demon	Felt one was on topic better than the other. Both had some issues with flow in places, both verses fairly simple too. went with who I felt more. Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2022-09-23 14:14:54
GRR POW <ANBU>	One's verse didn't focus much on the topic while the winner did a better job at expressing himself. Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2022-09-23 15:20:39
Wayco <....> Premium Member	This was close. Two different styles and approaches. I feel one was written with heavier multies and clearer rhyme pattern but the other was written more heartfelt and deeper in the psychology of someone hurt by addiction / heroine. So it's a tuff choice. Ima go with my gut. Really close though. Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2022-09-23 17:28:08
GodTheReptilian <AC's> OtherWordly	Damn man, Ive never been so torn between two verses...such am I now, very dope reads from both! This is difficult...really difficult, the best offerings thus far...I actually got goosebumps reading this! I could tell that Flako was writting from a certain place, very deep, meaningful and poetic...GG had a very descriptive and well arranged verse that ended very well...enjoyed the storytelling! Overall, I went with who I believed had the best of the two...including structure and filling the box. Although, I do believe Flako did an amazing job with his offering, which almost read like a letter...good work here guys, fire read! 👽 Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2022-09-25 07:28:17
Student Staff Hall of Famer LB Historian LetsBeef Patriarch Creative Genius	Quick vote but both did their thang! Winner was a bit more imaginative in their interpretation of the topic, stayed more in tune throughout & their structure was a smidge tighter Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2022-09-25 23:16:44