Welcome to the seventh Text: Concept Tournament. You have until the 25th @ 11:59 PM EST to post your verse. Best of luck to both of you. (a one time extension may be granted but once you have used your 24hr extension, you won't receive another during this tournament)

Your concept is: Disney Characters

two very different styles here ...both came with different angles ...some bars were creative but didnt really execute well for me ...i edged it to who was slighty more effective with the punches overall 

gl yo 

RhymeSmoke:

You had really basic rhyming.. however, since you weren't focused so much on rhyming, you were able to throw out ideas without forcing a rhyme scheme which I guess is a good thing. You picked a few random ass characters that I didn't know existed and had to look them up because some of your setups didn't tell me anything about them. Also w/ Muntz.. iLL's last win was in late October, so... what I thought was a personal really wasn't.

iLL Smith:

Your verse was kind of the opposite. You tried to multi scheme but half of them were awkward or didn't match. And I knew all of your characters but the way you'd set up ideas seemed like it either went into too much detail and didn't land, or it described something that wasn't punchy. Your Scar line was personal but it was a light jab.

I'm leaning one way just based off preference, but I really can't tell who won this one.

Wordillsky...

I might need an extension, I'll try to post before midnight but it's Thanksgiving so I don't know

Good battle RhymeSmoke

Expo: Frozen II's soundtrack did terrible compared to the 1st one. Rapunzel has golden magic hair. Dweedle Dum had a cameo in Roger Rabbit. Pinocchio was swallowed by a whale (Monstro). Kiefer Sutherland played Athos in "The Three Musketeers" who's the oldest one. Winnie The Pooh is Orange & he loved Honey (Gold). Everything else should be self-explanatory.

Enjoyed ones verse a little more but the other not bad its just one had da smoother flow and i felt used more of the concepts and references in a more clearer way. Fv is in.

Characters: 25

Lady, Buzz, King Richard, Pinocchio, Thumper, Skeeter, Alice, M.O, Wall-E, Quasimodo, Charles Muntz, MUSHU, Aladin, Belle, Fear, Disgust, Sadness, Mad Hatter, Genie, Rapunzel, King Louie, Tramp, Crulla DeVille

Expo:

Alice goes down the bunny hole.

Wall-E crushes trash for his job. 

Quasimodo has a hunched back 

"Why ya dogs talkin Charley, you ain't had a win in Muntz/Months. = Charles Muntz had talking dogs, ilLL hasn't won since Sept..

MUSHU is a tiny dragon that breathes a very small amount of fire, enough to light a blunt. 

Will smith In new Aladin reboot sucked and the Genie from original Aladin was Robin Williams= Take off the W from Will Smith is ILL Smith or ILLIAM. Mad Hatter was forced to be stuck in time instead of a beheading. 

King Louie sang  "I wanna be like you" and wanting to have the knowledge of making fire. 

CRUELLA allegedly skins puppies to make a coat. 

RS:

Quasimodo line was funny, Muntz was pretty good. Robin Williams was good and I liked the finisher too. Some of the concepts and set ups didn't work too well. The flow was nice in this, I can tell you're an audio battler. I felt this would've worked really well as an audio.

Smith:Some of the multis didn't line up and others didn't rhyme correctly. Where's the rhyme for "LION KING"? lol. I can tell this was a rushed verse from you as you mention it in the comments. I felt the "Frozen 2" punch was your best in the verse. Other than that no real standouts.

Overall, both stuck to the concept well but when it comes down to punches and attacking the opponent I feel one edged it out a little bit more over the other. Good battle, it was a tough call.

Got ill taking this with a better use of the concept. Close ish. Neither really took the opportunity to flip concepts in interesting or clever ways and the verses suffered a bit for it. 

Rofl....

https://tinyurl.com/Disney-Character-Concept-Verse

Low 7 mid 5. I like that rapunzel wp (never heard that one before but it def works for me) just wish u woulda executed on that concept better. I got one for having the better multi-syllable matchups. Although both were equal in concept/punchline attempts I feel like this person elaborated on his more. Fair'zin

good battle. I'm going with the guy I thought presented his verse better overall.