It’s Pandemonium shit!!!

Welcome to Round 2 of the 2020 Text Summer Throwdown! You have until the 30th of July at 11:59 PM EST to submit your 16 line verse. One time extensions will be granted as needed, but do not take advantage of this. Good luck!

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Expos: you either get it or you don't. Wayfare Conspiracy. Nearly headless nick

(Harry Potter bars is something you got to deal with) lmao

very heated stand off gents two txt beasts going at it again ... well this was more or less as close as the last meeting ... i feel one had the edge here in having a steadier output of set up punches and for having a stronger finish 

fairs in gb 

Felt like one guys funny wise cracks actually worked for him this time. Other guy had the run on rhyme style and a couple good jabs. Felt like it woulda handled better on an audio.

Fair vote is in. One went lighter than I've normally seen from them. The winner came stronger in wordplay and punch execution imo.

Its amazing! Good job!

Expos part two

Wayfair conspiracy

The way fair votes drop when I ADDRESS A KID, a DRESSER KID, expose, expos : I'm catchin bodies to the champion'ship and this guys the evidence. Catch bodies to the shippin, disguise the evidence. Way fair was supposedly selling children in furniture online. 

I purposely didn't drop any name flips in expectation my homie would waste lines playing defense. this is our second time battling, the first time I didn't use gun bars (I kept the stick in the bag) 

I changed up the style, modify 

doodle get drawn on for the sketchy shit

'stand by'... blown setups ... like a stunt coordinator staging stunts.. which is also dangerous. nearly headless nick flip may have caught him off guard, but in Harry Potter they were in questions with nearly headless nick. And when he pulled his head off, that's (not what you expected, witch shows) he gettin swept in this. 

Last battle we had ended 5050 so we literally tied, this time ima hangm up. 

im movin for the belt, grocery store scheme cause he bout to check out. 

the doodle sketchy was more so a rebuttal to his coloring and drawin line

2FUEL:  

"If “G had: his hand on the trigger?” still wouldn't be detoNATING THIS TIME! See the “pressure he supplies is imaginary” an i'm demonSTRATING IN RHYME how this virgin “Wouldn't be seen handling a box” imiTATING A MIME!!" 

*Now, for an opener...this was extremely slick. Very creative, with an awesome build/set-up...naturally, Im not usually a fan of incorporating compound multis within the body of other terms, yet you managed to tie them together rather effectively...G had/Jihad/trigger (pressure switch)/detonating/virgin/hadnling the box...yea, that's an impressive series you have there sir. No critique on this.

"Compared to me? Xans an engineless car... He's 'NOTHIN TO FUEL'! His Music? That's a fucking “Shitty mess” tho' he think's it's GOOD AN HE'S COOL but the last time he “Pushed out some tough shit” there was BLOOD IN HIS STOOL!"  

*Okay, great build and sturdy setup...pretty consistent throughout, although...'GOOD AN HE'S COOL' somewhat distorted the smoothness of the delivery, especially mid-range through the series...but that's subjective, a pretty minor inclusion but it was worth mentioning..."NOTHING TO FUEL", "BLOOD IN HIS STOOL"...seemed to have better fluidity, a different selection of words may have been warranted..maybe replacing "HE" with "ITS" wouldn't have broken the rhythm. Other than that, if was a very heavy bar, DOPE! 

"The names Fuel and I'm “Proud i'm Fire, man” constantly putting FLAMES DOWN. My writtens mold bomb threats while yours be flippin' old concepts that are all PLAYED NOW see those Fuel lines been “Flipped more times” than JAMES BROWN!" 

*Okay, Im familiar with the references...as well as the artist, yet I felt a JAMES BROWN bar has so many angles, its almost inconceivable...considering his body of work is so expansive...better references could have been developed, or used in substitution...the multis worked well, I see the correlation...but it was partially anemic without those solid references. I felt you could have done a better job here. Compared to what I've read from this verse so far, this seems out of place FUEL. 

"We “Get the picture” he's ACCUSTOMED TO STEALTH, HE SLICK w/ the subtle diss but If he's “Handling fresh angles to snap on me with?” then he's ADJUSTING A SELFIE STICK!!"

*Okay, very spicy series here...definitely a good build, with correlation...stuck to the initial concept without deviation. Picture/angles/snap (snapchat)/SELFIE stick...multis onpoint, matched up perfectly, and arranged well. Dope bar indeed, very 

"When he speaks all we see is a “Bloody pussy” and that's FACT FAM it's as if Xans's been “Eating periods”... call him PAC MAN!!"

*Yo lol...humorous...sneaky little jab, at least I found it to be rather comical...well crafted, and entertaining...could have extended it in more detail, with references...but I do understand the briefness, I mean who wants to hear another man build an entire punch about a menstrual cycle comparison. DOPE! 

"u're the BLEASKEST SON, AN IT'S TRUE even when you're home alone, u're Still the WEAKEST ONE IN THE ROOM!" 

*I do understand the angle, and the substance of the concept...another quick 1-2, which made for a dope paradox...but seemingly underdeveloped, maybe making a comparison would have been more appropriate, but space is limited as it relates to a 16s...so I get it. Good jab 

"WE SPAZZIN W/ THAT CLASS SHIT...HE'S PASSION? GET HIS ASS KICKED if this wussy fights? I'mma beat that pussy twice as it's nothing to “Take x out, again” like i'm RELAPSIN' W/ MY LAST CHICK!!" 

*This particular series could have possibly been better managed, for a closer...this wasn't of the same caliber or pedigree as earlier material, although it could likely be a personal or underlying conversation in your camp that Im not directly familiar with? Passion/Pussy/X/Relapsing...I got it, but it just didn't have the same sting...prior bars, were almost concussive and this wasn't it, closing it out..."X or X'ed out" build has been used in many forms, with your level of writing...this should have been a haymaker.  

XANDA:  

(Read the expos you presented first, as to not draw on my own conclusions...so lets get into it) 

"I don’t think you really know who you MESSIN WIT! What I land? Hits diff’rent.. kids this is JEFFREYS CRIB!!.. We not buying what you SELLIN BITCH.. ‘the way-fairs drop when I ADRESSA KID, exposes how I’m catchin bodies to the ‘ship n dis-guys the EVIDENCE!!’" 

*Okay, ultra slick bar...creative and current, pretty solid set-up...although, the multis were a bit slanted but you made adjustments to the structure mid deliver...the wordplay was definitely a plus and read both directions, very intuitive. A very impressive scheme and concept.  

"‘Yo.. Ga’head n know that he STRETCHIN IF he BETTER THAN he EVER ‘BEEN’.. Long arms out.. clickin every SECOND IF he get outta line, dude’ll get Drawn On for the SKETCHY SHIT!" 

*Okay, pretty solid setup for a gun bar...nicely developed, multis were in sync and well executed...polishing up the doodle wordplay would have been a major positive, yet still acceptable...although, I have seen my fair share of "Long arms" and "Drawn on" punches...this came together nicely. 

"Ill LET IT RIP, and hit his NECK AN THEN he barely hanging on.. like the EXTRA SKIN of nearly HEADLESS NICK!!! I know that’s not what you EXPECTED WITCH shows you getting SWEPT IN THIS" 

*(Something I have to deal with) Okay, substance is there and the concept is there...the build, not so much...you didn't allow it enough time to develope properly. I genuinely feel as if your transitions between ideas were a bit muffled, and some clarity was lost between multis, anticipation and expectation does that...and you should have applied more patience with this series. I understand the angle, which was definitely a good one...but fragmented. Also, "expected witch" has an additional syllable, isn't a big deal...but this is indeed a tournament...so everything must be aligned properly. A clean concept overall, but should have been better managed. I combined these two bars, which they are in fact...because of your expo...separately, it would have worked with the additional syllable (EXPECTED WITCH) instead of "shows you GETTING SWEPT IN THIS", to "shows you GET SWEPT IN THIS"... Good shit though!  

"I Kept The Stick in the bag like HITCHHIKERS IN THE OLD DAYS, Now it’s Arms out, the window... SHITS LIKE A FIT OF ROAD RAGE!! CLIPS FIRIN AT CLOSE RANGE!! It's Flyin pass, injures fast as WHIPS RIDIN IN THE HOV LANE" 

*FIRE! This was solid, stayed in the pocket with the concept...and did detour, nicely done and well put together. Stick in bag/hitchhikers/arms out...dope setup and good correlations. Multis aligned and equally supportive. No critique with this one...flowed well. NOICE! 

"see how I'm stylin this whole thang? Ya AINT ENOUGH! I wouldn't lose to this 'Mod? if I' CHANGED IT UP!! You stand by blown setups with how ya STAGIN STUNTS!! it's DANGEROUS, Last time we tied.. now it's time to HANG'M UP!!"

*lol...okay, this was a well crafted well...although I do understand the initial concept, a more elaborate reference/example was necessary...especially considering a "MOD" angle, the options are limitless...although the rebound was strong with the following lines, taking your expo into account. Multis were arranged well...well designed series here. 

"When I AIM YA DUCK but this ain't the GAME YA WANT.. I'm movin for the belt, like SAVE IT SON!! He paid the price when the red beam RANG'M UP" 

*Im fully aware that this is a continuation of the bars above, and decided to address this separately...not for nothing, but this particular portion seems to be misplaced for a closer...and I feel your "staging stunts" build should have made the cut for a closer, it was far more superior, when measured in comparison with you guys previous battle...it was far more effective, and this somewhat dampened the intensity. 

In conclusion, this was a pretty difficult battle to judge...both presented very creative material, some original...a little general, but clean work here...it could have went either way. Both had great concepts, a great setups...a different level of complexity. 

The winner I've chosen, seemed to have a better handle on his setups and structure...smoother delivery, and made the better connections...punches were pretty solid from both.

Fairs in, good luck to you both...this a tournament, so my rating has to be stronger...these verses would have been a point higher in the arena.   

VB...I got some dope battles up 👽

This was a super close battle 

I felt one was more polished and one felt kinda rushed to me..but both verses were dope don't get me wrong. 2fuel I liked that selfie stick line..fire! And. Xanda your rapid punch approach was sumthin different that I haven't personally seen from u..but I'm sure u got a lot in your arsenal. Anyway enuff rambling...my vote is in

I felt ones round was a lot more structured and hard hitting, the creativity and landing of the punches took this for me. Fv fellas good shit to whoever wins it.

sick battle guys