DETRI_MENTAL
Ranked #5 this Season
7.37/10 stars7.37/10 stars7.37/10 stars7.37/10 stars7.37/10 stars7.37/10 stars7.37/10 stars7.37/10 stars7.37/10 stars7.37/10 stars
Crew: KillersForHire.
Reppin: Andover, England, United Kingdom
HOTTEST TEXT BATTLE


VS
toxic logic
Ranked #21 this Season
No Rating YetNo Rating YetNo Rating YetNo Rating YetNo Rating YetNo Rating YetNo Rating YetNo Rating YetNo Rating YetNo Rating Yet
Crew: Asgard n Vanaheim
Reppin:Unknown


 
Start a battle

Vote on a battle to earn +1 credit!
 
  Text: Concept Tournament #7
Battles ready for vote
Armed and Hammered vs DETRI_MENTAL

Vote on tournaments to earn +5 credits!
 
 
Battle Feed
iLL Smith vs WarSand
8 Lines (4 Bars) Blind Drop
0 Votes No Rating YetNo Rating YetNo Rating YetNo Rating YetNo Rating Yet
Justo Da GJusto Da G is on FIRE! 5+ wins in a row! vs Armed and Ha...
8 Lines (4 Bars) Blind Drop
0 Votes No Rating YetNo Rating YetNo Rating YetNo Rating YetNo Rating Yet
D4rk N3t vs Hundred Trill
16 Lines (8 Bars) Blind Drop
0 Votes No Rating YetNo Rating YetNo Rating YetNo Rating YetNo Rating Yet
P R O vs Armed and Ha...
8 Lines (4 Bars)
0 Votes No Rating YetNo Rating YetNo Rating YetNo Rating YetNo Rating Yet
vs X-Calibur
8 Lines (4 Bars)
1 Vote 0.75 stars0.75 stars0.75 stars0.75 stars0.75 stars
kiLlA sAinT vs X-Calibur
8 Lines (4 Bars)
0 Votes No Rating YetNo Rating YetNo Rating YetNo Rating YetNo Rating Yet
Shodan vs X-Calibur
16 Lines (8 Bars)
1 Vote 2.25 stars2.25 stars2.25 stars2.25 stars2.25 stars
Phoenicks vs Kali kid
8 Lines (4 Bars) Blind Drop
1 Vote 3.25 stars3.25 stars3.25 stars3.25 stars3.25 stars
DETRI_MENTAL vs toxic logic
8 Lines (4 Bars) Blind Drop
6 Votes 3.4166666666667 stars3.4166666666667 stars3.4166666666667 stars3.4166666666667 stars3.4166666666667 stars
thatoneboy vs RappinFoxRappinFox is on FIRE! 5+ wins in a row!
8 Lines (4 Bars)
0 Votes No Rating YetNo Rating YetNo Rating YetNo Rating YetNo Rating Yet
MC Rekki vs toxic logic
8 Lines (4 Bars)
1 Vote 4 stars4 stars4 stars4 stars4 stars
BrahMos acco... vs SmokeDoggKush
8 Lines (4 Bars)
2 Votes 2.625 stars2.625 stars2.625 stars2.625 stars2.625 stars
Masked-ReaperMasked-Reaper is on FIRE! 5+ wins in a row! vs Bad Vax
8 Lines (4 Bars)
0 Votes No Rating YetNo Rating YetNo Rating YetNo Rating YetNo Rating Yet
52Cent vs toxic logic
16 Lines (8 Bars)
0 Votes No Rating YetNo Rating YetNo Rating YetNo Rating YetNo Rating Yet
Bad Vax vs toxic logic
8 Lines (4 Bars)
0 Votes No Rating YetNo Rating YetNo Rating YetNo Rating YetNo Rating Yet

[ more battles... ]
 
 

2019 Summer Throwdown
Length: 16 Lines

Rowdy (58%) Won
Ranked #-- This Month (#-- All Time)
8.17/10 stars8.17/10 stars8.17/10 stars8.17/10 stars8.17/10 stars8.17/10 stars8.17/10 stars8.17/10 stars8.17/10 stars8.17/10 stars
Reppin: New York, New York, United States
Rai (42%) Lost
Ranked #-- This Month (#-- All Time)
7.19/10 stars7.19/10 stars7.19/10 stars7.19/10 stars7.19/10 stars7.19/10 stars7.19/10 stars7.19/10 stars7.19/10 stars7.19/10 stars
Reppin: Asheville, North Carolina, United States



Rowdy

Loading...


Rai
Loading...


 
 

Voting has ended for this battle (battle finished on 2019-10-09 22:52:31).

Comment:
Loading...
 

 
 

ODIN
<Asgard>
The All Father
Topical Champion
A Celtic Bard


#DedSec, we in this bitch!! 

Posted on: 2019-10-08 22:51:55 Private Message ODIN



Nice spar, Punk fave bar was the Little Tree line. Rai the Lawn mower bar prob my fave of yours. Honestly guys this was a weird one, both verses seemed to be full of either basic concepts or very strange wording. Close one but i think one was SLIGHTLY fresher conceptually. Fairs in. 

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2019-10-11 14:08:20 Private Message RULE



Ghas voted deleted as IP tied with another voter. 1/

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2019-10-12 05:23:08 Private Message RULE



 

 
 

Congratulations on making it to the final round of the "2019 Summer Throwdown". This round you will have until 10/11/19 @11:59 est to drop your verse. Any verses submitted after the deadline will be an automatic disqualification. If needed, a one time extension will be granted (if you havent used it already). Good Luck.

Posted on: 2019-10-07 01:20:47 Private Message Rai


DEDSEC.

Posted on: 2019-10-07 15:49:04 Private Message B a r z o o k a


Expo: Shodans a child molester. #DedSec

Posted on: 2019-10-09 19:52:52 Private Message Rowdy


imma vote here soon. 

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2019-10-10 09:52:17 Private Message The Saaxxx Baba


Quick expo for the first bar. The vikings uniform has purple and the turf is green. Also The Rams faced the Viking in a super bowl, hence the bowl reference. 

Also, there is a typo... Should read RAPPIN'S ILL ON THE FLY 

Anyways. Good luck, Punk. 

Posted on: 2019-10-10 14:19:07 Private Message Rai


Bruhh that was a dope ass battle both came out swinging/connecting. Huge punches from both  very close match bigbups to both y'all was on point.

 But one took this for me with slightly better set ups n punches that just stuck out. 

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2019-10-10 14:45:19 Private Message nine7eight


Accidentally hit comment only 

Fair vote no hate 

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2019-10-10 14:47:05 Private Message nine7eight


FightsAndRapMedia
<Asgard>
Live Battler

you both matched each other bar for bar so im going on punk because of his creative rhyme scheming at the start the score an win poor events origins ,he can manage rican bannin, i liked the creative rhyme schemes thats why im going with decsec on this 1 , both dope 

Posted on: 2019-10-10 14:53:29 Private Message FightsAndRapMedia


Hmmmm man, this shit was a close call. It's a toss up, imma hand it to Punk for the little tree line, idk why, I thought that was the best line in these verses, comedic factor maybe? Wasn't much seperating the two of these guys though, fairs in!

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2019-10-10 15:06:31 Private Message Seul


Yoo, interesting read, that opener from punk, man oh man lol, concepts were on, couple funny lines there, felt as though there was alot of jabbing and when it was time for the bang, kinda had the same affect as the jabs imo. Rai, opener was dope, very creative with tha rams on the green in the bowl, purp etc, the tall grass line and was on, nice build ups n puns, felt was a bit more consistant aswell throughout. Fairs in nh

Posted on: 2019-10-10 15:07:19 Private Message Un1verseAll


First Half -  Punk

the origins play by punk was mighty impressive while Rai was not bad but i wasn't feeling his opener much coz conceptually the punch only said that he does not smoke the good stuff in a creative way whch compared to punk's origin plays was a little low and also the fact that he build on it to hit with the madre line added a little extra to it even tho the alleyoop from rai was much better than his opener but the multi count was off in that one which is surprisin coz well it's Rai lol 

Halfway & the Closers - Rai

This is where punk's lost a little steam and Rai got into his groove. I honestly found the the motors that stall fast pretty meh to begin with but then later realized why and how you conected it all the way through, should'nt have stretched it that much man, while Punk had the LMAO aspect in the naughty america bar which is always nice but the da feet bars flavour to his lights on the footwell bit was a little off putting while his closer was a little to simple and the gold didgger bit seemed stretched after the naughty america bar while Rai just kept getting with every lines here esp his last two lines and that lawn mower line was very very creative man. this is where i felt Rai won both halves and came stronger in 60% of the battle.

overall, had punk i felt was not at the level he was at with his last two battles in this and Rai kinda got into the groove only towards the end with few sparks here and there but still both had a way above par despite those flaws which speaks volumes of your skills and why you'rein the finals so whoever wins to me both of you are definite winners here man !!

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2019-10-11 05:05:26 Private Message The Saaxxx Baba


REEZON

Banned

despite the Love, “Go find your Wife-On-The-Hub” he won’t expect NAUGHTY AMERICA SPONSORS! vs & you'll "bog down as the blade enters that section" like "Lawn MOWERS IN TALL GRASS!!". Good battle here. Had to quote the LOTB's. One had more quality to his pen the other one. Vote is here.

Posted on: 2019-10-11 09:59:36 Private Message REEZON


X gave him some ‘Access(axes)’ just hoping THAT HED SCORE N WIN; but this faggot live on ‘HiSTORIC Moments’ Bored RAPS AND POOR EVENTS; so Why(Y) connect with X if you’re still Stuck AT THE ORIGINS!Trigonometry Bars DEDSEC

Posted on: 2019-10-11 11:04:27 Private Message Denton


DEADSEC! Let's go!

Posted on: 2019-10-11 13:03:18 Private Message Fidel Z


~~~Dedsec~~~

Posted on: 2019-10-11 13:22:03 Private Message TKtheGREAT


Dimes for both off rip, Punks footwell/led lights shit was slick, madre bar was hilarious too, a lot of quoatbles and overall a smooth read, good shit. Rais opener was nice, seen alot of alleyoop/jam bars but this line was pretty creative, rhyming was on point throughout, dope verse. Props fellas def finals worthy, overall my winner had a few more lines I felt more, could go either way. GL to both. 

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2019-10-11 20:47:15 Private Message Kompz


PUNK:

"X gave him some ‘Access(axes)’ just hoping THAT HED SCORE N WIN; but this faggot live on ‘HiSTORIC Moments’ Bored RAPS AND POOR EVENTS; so Why(Y) connect with X if you’re still Stuck AT THE ORIGINS!"

*Personal bar: setup and execution was great, very solid build off of coordinate graphing...syllable count on-point and flowed well. Would have been more impactful, if in fact...you made a better comparison mid-scheme other than "Historic Moments"...somewhat broke your double entendre you had going with your 1st and 3rd multis.

"The sites like “Mother” of god! we don’t think HE CAN MANAGE” already started to abuse, Hell I’d rather see RICAN BANNIN; when We was screaming “Mod Rai!” Would you believe that we was SPEAKING SPANISH?! (Madre)"

*This was pretty crafty...a light jab, but skillfully developed and arranged. WP worked..."mother", initially after reading this the second time...after reviewing your "HUB" bar, I figured that you were keeping with a porn theme...considering, there is a porn site named "Motherless"...I could be overthinking, but none-the-lesser...a good bar.

"News flash, his Girl got “Friends”, THOUGHT HE WAS HEARING HER PROPER; “I’m at daddy’s house, CALL ME RIGHT THERE IN AN HOUR”; despite the Love, “Go find your Wife-On-The-Hub” he won’t expect NAUGHTY AMERICA SPONSORS!"

*Once again, I'm thinking "Friend Finder" and "Porn Hub"...you left a lot to the imagination without an expo. This was super light, compared to what you had developed earlier in your verse, a risky jab...with not enough momentum behind the punch, but clever.

"This BOLD WIGGER’s ‘Blind’ to the fact that his Queen’s a SOUL LIFTER, she throw so much ‘Shade In Front of Rai’ now she’s Labeled a GOLD DIGGER!"

*LMAO, I get this..."Snatching Souls", humorous jab...but not much of a punch delivered, my opinion...another risky jab, but not much of a return on your investment.

"And He only smokes to CONDUCT WITH HIS CREW; If he get Stopped over a ‘Little Tree’, his Freshener was OBSTRUCTING THE VIEW!"

*Now, this was a very dope setup...in addition to a very strong a direct punch...very humorous and creative...relatable.

"He ‘Gang Bang’? (On fucking who?) if we wasn’t TYPING HE WOULD TELL; Rai gets ‘Ten Toes Down’ with ‘Colors’? Must be led LIGHTS IN HIS FOOTWELL!"

* This was dope, flowed well and a good selection of multis..."Gang Bang", theme revisited...which was also clever. Although, I feel as if at this particular point in your verse, your punches should be much stronger than this.

"I’ll SLAP THE BITCH IN THE MOMENT, Making-Him-Feel-Soft or ‘Spray This Kid in The Face-N-Then ‘Peel Off’ w/o PLASTI-DIPPING WITH SHODAN!"

*Felt as if your closer was a little light, which I was holding on to a certain expectation after such a huge opening. I do understand the basis, the "Spray" then "Peel off" Plasti dip play...but this was pretty watered down for a closer. I did take your "expo" into account as well.

RAI:

"You say you smoke hookahs, but you don't LIGHT AND HIT THE DANKEST PLANTS Last time you seen "a bowl packed: full of green and purple" was "the VIKING'S WHEN THEY FACED THE RAMS!!""

*Seemingly Personal: flowed well, great multi connection and setups were legit..."bowl packed: full of green and purple"...I liked how your combined both setups here, to deliver the punch...creative. Although, I'm not a huge sports fan...I was really expecting a Green Bay Packers angle here, but that's just me...but after reading your expo, I have a better understanding of what was meant.

"Heard you sell demos at the corner store, tryna get RICH WITH YOUR PALS ON TUNES, but If anybody "jumps on what you're passing out for jams"... it coz their "ASSISTING AN ALLEY-OOP!"

* This was pretty solid, flowed well and very humourous and conceptually well arranged, light jab...but you missed the mark with your syllable count. In fact, it was actually pretty well hidden in the bar, but considering this event, I have to be very particular seeing how close of a battle this is.

"Noose tied into a boobie-trap. Soon as you walk in I'll LOWER THE FALSE HATCH "Lift the lever then you'll choke and die" like "MOTORS THAT STALL FAST!" Get the knife if you survive that. Give your SHOULDER A SMALL GASH & you'll "bog down as the blade enters that section" like "Lawn MOWERS IN TALL GRASS!!"

*This was impressive, the combinations of multis and setups were well placed and arranged...no critique on this one.

Little crossdressing faggit planned to win this, now FIND THIS QUEER GETTING BOOTED "This tran's mission was a huge blowout" & it'll really "GRIND HIS GEARS" WHEN HE LOSES!!

*hefty display of skill, nice WP and build...pretty solid punch, flow was there...short and to the point. Good comparisons made.

"This city slicker finally got to his 2nd final. Swearing his RAPPIN'S ILL ON THE FLY but has picked the wrong path go down: a MASSIVE HILL IN THE PINES Now watch this "boy scout get stranded in the woods" for "he LACKS THE SKILLS TO SURVIVE!!"

*This was very light, in relations to the momentum you created throughout the duration of your verse...to the extent, that it almost read like filler...I'm sure that it's relatable to you, to some capacity...considering your geographical area "city slicker"...I understand the angle, but felt as if you could have done a lot more with this.

"Pull a gun from the waist. Remove your head from your DOME YOUR UPPER BELLY & "Have your face all over your wall" like you're "POSTING A BUNCH OF SELFIES!!"

*I felt as if your closer could have been much more creative than this, considering the rest of your material...selfies/cropping/boxes/editing/removing/posting seems a little overused in this format...the wording also seems a tad bit off here as well, and your syllable count was off... honestly, you crashed this closer RAI.

OVERALL: All things taken into account, this was a pretty dope battle...a lot of relatables and quotables, nice reads from both...went with PUNK on this one.

FAIRS IN GENTLEMEN 👍

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2019-10-12 15:09:13 Private Message GodTheReptilian


I'm not sure I can fairly vote on a battle where somebody called me a child molester, lmfao...

Posted on: 2019-10-12 22:50:31 Private Message Shodan


This final is disappointing. Punk was more on the personals side. I liked the (X) (Y) origins thing he did in the beginning and nothing else really stood out or made me ooohh punchline wise. Rai was a little better and was a more entertaining read. I didn't like those stalling, car engines, and transmission bars..pretty cringe. I thought the mowers in tall grass bar was the best in his 16. Not a good final at all! High 7, low 8 vote going to Rai.

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2019-10-14 10:33:55 Private Message Helsing


Ait so i thought this battle was ait, decent final, both had a couple lines that were cool, one had more creativity imo and ima break it down why...

Punk: 

X gave him some ‘Access(axes)’ just hoping THAT HED SCORE N WIN; but this faggot live on ‘HiSTORIC Moments’ Bored RAPS AND POOR EVENTS; so Why(Y) connect with X if you’re still Stuck AT THE ORIGINS!

Good creative opener, personal, and i havent heard it yet, i think this bar might go over some peoples heads.

The sites like “Mother” of god! we don’t think HE CAN MANAGE” already started to abuse, Hell I’d rather see RICAN BANNIN; when We was screaming “Mod Rai!” Would you believe that we was SPEAKING SPANISH?! (Madre)

again personal bar, and Mad rai never heard it haha I actually liked this one , thought it couldve been worded better but overall creative bar.

News flash, his Girl got “Friends”, THOUGHT HE WAS HEARING HER PROPER; “I’m at daddy’s house, CALL ME RIGHT THERE IN AN HOUR”; despite the Love, “Go find your Wife-On-The-Hub” he won’t expect NAUGHTY AMERICA SPONSORS!

wasnt feeling this one at all tbh. 

This BOLD WIGGER’s ‘Blind’ to the fact that his Queen’s a SOUL LIFTER, she throw so much ‘Shade In Front of Rai’ now she’s Labeled a GOLD DIGGER! And He only smokes to CONDUCT WITH HIS CREW; If he get Stopped over a ‘Little Tree’, his Freshener was OBSTRUCTING THE VIEW!

comedy here... I actually like the wording, and a little tree, obstructing the view. i liked this one was cool. solid 

He ‘Gang Bang’? (On fucking who?) if we wasn’t TYPING HE WOULD TELL; Rai gets ‘Ten Toes Down’ with ‘Colors’? Must be led LIGHTS IN HIS FOOTWELL!

This was solid.

Didnt like the closer at all. 

@Rai...

You say you smoke hookahs, but you don't LIGHT AND HIT THE DANKEST PLANTS Last time you seen "a bowl packed: full of green and purple" was "the VIKING'S WHEN THEY FACED THE RAMS!!"

this was kinda meh imo, vikings never faced the rams in a bowl game because they are in the same division. 

Heard you sell demos at the corner store, tryna get RICH WITH YOUR PALS ON TUNES, but If anybody "jumps on what you're passing out for jams"... it coz their "ASSISTING AN ALLEY-OOP!"

I thought this was a good bar, personal, and i get what you meant.... like when someones assisting an alley they are helping make the alley opp happen as in catching the pass as in assisting.

Noose tied into a boobie-trap. Soon as you walk in I'll LOWER THE FALSE HATCH "Lift the lever then you'll choke and die" like "MOTORS THAT STALL FAST!"

these type of bars are kinda played, and i think i saw a similar one you had vs jimmy... didnt like this one. wheres the wordplay?

Get the knife if you survive that. Give your SHOULDER A SMALL GASH & you'll "bog down as the blade enters that section" like "Lawn MOWERS IN TALL GRASS!!"

this was cool.

Little crossdressing faggit planned to win this, now FIND THIS QUEER GETTING BOOTED "This tran's mission was a huge blowout" & it'll really "GRIND HIS GEARS" WHEN HE LOSES!!

this was decent but once again trans mission and grind gears bars are kinda played.

This city slicker finally got to his 2nd final. Swearing his RAPPING IS ILL ON THE FLY but has picked the wrong path go down: a MASSIVE HILL IN THE PINES Now watch this "boy scout get stranded in the woods" for "he LACKS THE SKILLS TO SURVIVE!!"

didnt like none of this, the boy scout lacks the skill to survive, where is the creativity in this one, once again i dont see any wordplay not even one bar in here 

Pull a gun from the waist. Remove your head from your DOME YOUR UPPER BELLY & "Have your face all over your wall" like you're "POSTING A BUNCH OF SELFIES!!"

i thought this was a decent closer.... still the creativity is kind of played... face on the wall ... selfies.... facebook bars kinda played fam....

Honestly i thought this was a decent final, nothing too crazy, 

IMO i thought one was more creative... the mod rai line, the stuck at the origins, little tree obstructing view. 

vs

assisting an alley oop, and lawn mowers in tall grass.

decent battle, seen better from both.

 ive read this like 4 times and got my winner.

fairs in 

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2019-10-14 13:54:01 Private Message Erupt da Monsta

 

 

[ LetsBeef Instagram | LetsBeef Facebook | LetsBeef Twitter | LetsBeef Youtube | Privacy Policy | Terms & Conditions | FAQ | Contact Support ]
Some members of the public may use explicit lyrics in the performance of their art, so please be advised that such language, if any, may not be appropriate for minors.
Graphics by Pixel Dreams · Site © 2021 LetsBeef.com