KILLERS 

KILLERS

Congratulations for being Semi-Finalists in the Second Audio Concept Tourney!

The deadline to post your verses by is Sunday 29th March, at 11:59pm EST. 

Your concept is: WWE/Wrestling bars

Good luck!

Both brought bars,but one made my classic mistake and tried to pack in the punch count, which hurt hisd a bit as it felt rushed.  The pacing and delivery here brought out ones execution more than the other, along with the setups being more obvious without expo. I feel I make very similar errors when battling, so my criticism iseant to be constructive and reflects somebody my own weaknesses I heard here. It was a great battle, and it possibly could go either way based on preference, but I got one edging this. I have RESPECT for both these vets and appreciate that two originally exclusively text battlers have been doing audio. FV in. Best of luck to whoever gets it and props to the one taking the L, as the pen game is solid for both. 

I feel I make very similar errors when battling, so my criticism is meant* to be constructive and reflects some of* my own weaknesses I heard here.

Fkn phone typing errors. My b.

Got Rieper taking this one. I think he came a bit harder with the on mic performance, and his concepts were a little cut above. Caked had some real dope shit. Like Dude Love Gear. But some of it was just a bit too obvious or meh like dying hair/here. Felt the hits were just sprinkled a little too far apart if you know what I mean. Great battle to listen to, got this going to Riep, fairs in.

reiper got this for my.. his delivery alone was on POINTTT in this round, he stared off flawless then near he end started running out of steam a little like he saved his best stuff for the first half

and as for caked out your delivery was not on par with reipers but i dont judge on delivery i judge on barz and i feel in this round cakedout bro you wasnt on par with reipers just a few of your bars wasnt as good reiper was more concistent , sick stuff, well done reiper send me a challenge bro i will show you who the reiper is

now go get ya fucking shine box

This was a good match, but I felt like one just Edged it. both could of brought a little more with delivery. My winner had a clean verse, as well as my loser...but after listening again I decided on my winner by just a smoother flow and a good punch or 2 more on my winners side. Loser came with some good shit too, good punches, just needed a little more energy and emphasize on delivery. 

This was a good spar fellas, both had some dope lines. I just think Rieper was more consistent delivery wise. Both had some dope lines like the money in the bank and shayna baszler lines from rieper and the stone cold and dude love gear. Both had more good lines as well thought rieper edged it with the delivery. I was surprised by cakedout delivery though first half was smooth af. Good spar fellas enjoyed the listen congrats to both for making it this far. 100

Strong drops from both but after listening over and over I felt ones execution in terms of setups was stronger. Nice bout here

Both of you guys went in on this concept. Caked you did your thing and you had some nice bars. A couple of them came off a bit too obvious/straight forward. The delivery could use more conviction and could be brushed up.Rieper not only were you on another level in terms of bars but you easily had the upper hand in terms of mic presence, delivery and flow. You actually sounded like fresco when you switched from the triple h bar to the bronco buster one. Probably the cleanest I've heard you. Good battle to both ya'll.9-7 Rieper

mock and tripl H...FIRE, But the Stone cold flip was dope, otherwise i dont really know a lot of wrestlers so i missed punches for sure from what i heard one Edged it imo GB AND GL BOTH

Dropping a quick vote before I close this one, I thought one was ahead based on the clarity of his writing and the energy of his execution. Great spar from both though and a very worthy semi-final.