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Topical Tournament #8
Length: 40 Lines

bars-of-legend (13%) Lost

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Reppin: Bayside, California, United States

Óðinn (87%) Won

The Goatfather
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the whole scene of my world got blended..as soon as i felt a love unrequented/ 
all i want is her hand, her kiss and ma'dam...please be aware of the question im askin..
ive been stuck for a while now... opportunities pilled around.. but i always look down...
whenever you're close? my confidence froze.. your love could un thaw, but those just my hopes..
nah.. thats something i know.. and i know its on hold.. i made it clear early, so surely you know..
it has to be clear how i feel.. either that or you gave up to flee.. 
now you on fleek.. i wonder bout the source.. another fuck niga, with funds bigger of course..
but i can do you better.. them niggas got you fed up.. but still they keep u ''fed-up'', so curves never let up/
i can never give you what they can... but i can be with you till the end
i could give you real love..affection and bliss.. with me you'll be above, a chance to reminice..
ive been bitting my tounge for a minute now.. you been hanging around just chillin..wow
either you know or you lost hope.. a good nigga, one that fits in your friend zone....
but thats one i can't handle... kill me,, or free me or leave me dismantled..
a friend is something i can never be.. this is how i feel..
this is what i feel,.. a love unrequented... i thought i'd let you know, so now im just chancing
the cards are on the table..baby stop dancing!!!
put down the blunt..its you and me now.. im stepping to the front and you just wanna scream? wow...
no, im not going to chill... yeah i know you wild but your mind is a thrill...
wait.. please can i finish? STOP CUTTING IN and just sit for a minute...
shit... i knew i picked the wrong time for this.. but lately ive been thinking bout ya smile turning kiss..
nah, that call can wait.. ~ i grabbed her phone and she moaned~ i had to boss this place..
i turned the music off.. fuck the romantics.. the blunt sparked a cough, but won't fault the semantics/
see this girl had me in a phase.. or trance.. the shit stung like mase,, so i deprived the chace... 
we started hanging..why? her vibe was the point.. i started banging? nah.. her mind was the joint/
a day turned to weeks .. and weeks fostered months.. but on the second one.. i think i felt love...
either that or my mind lost.. all this kush got my lines crossed/ 
i played it off.. and saw it as a fault.. until she brought me to her spot/
''nice pad'' is what i said on the outside.. ''oh, im glad'' then she told me something personal..
so personal that trust developed.. trust galloped to something more, in 6 seconds/
then it became clear.. i loved her, but i didn't know that's what i feared/
so i kept it on the low for a year and a half.. it only got stronger and now im obsessed/
''its a lot for you to hear''... just thought i'd let you know..
to love the way that i do.. and still be in the dark bout a chance of me and you? is torture../
fall or fly, i had to let you know.. it's been a long time? yeah thats something that i know../.  
atleast its finally out.. either you've known, and it's been something you cared nothing about.../
or youve been waiting.. what? my time wasting? this unrequented love had a young nigga shaking..
ive never known a feeling like this.. the type of feeling where you good with a kiss..
fuck the sex, thats something i don't need.. all i need is you, you the best and thats true..
(I WAKE UP FROM SLEEP) NOW I KNOW WHAT TO DO..........................

Óðinn

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                                                                        Unrequited Love


Usually I'd wake up early, ready to leave the house and be on time for class. On this day the alarm never went off so I was late hauling my ass. No time to eat, I left the house in a flash. Sprinting down the street, carry text books and pages filled of maths. Turned the corner hurrying along, clothes sagging, boots untied and smashed. Right into the path of this amazing person. I was amazed in person, T'was love at first sight as I asked if she was alright. She laughed a little, "Yeah, I'm not so brittle" to which I extended my hand and helped her back to her feet, while she stands I gathered up my belongings. Apologizing for the collision, hypnotized by beauty I could never of envisioned. This was how we met, this was the beginning of my hearts mission.



Made it to college half way through the lesson. Teacher said with finger extended "I'll let you away with it this time, Fuel, but no more messing". The whole day she was on my mind. Who is she? Where is she? Answers to all these questions I had to find. Sketching her face on my notebook just to pass the time. The whole day I was like poor people who've ADHD, I wasn't able to pay attention. Couldn't keep my thoughts stable due to affection. On my way home kept thinking to myself: I wanna Beyonce this chick and put a ring on it but I don't even know her number to give her a ring on it.

                                                                         A week Later:


This didn't make me feel deterred though. Asked my mates on what she preferred so, I'd have better luck the next time. Johnny said: "She likes dudes with jewellery" so I made sure that my neck shined. Mike said: "She likes guys who have their own ride" all that was going through my mind:  "If only the battery of love could be started w/ jumper cables then I wouldn't be so down in the dumps like dumpster labels". The rest of my friends, they all say it's lame, be real but they can't see through the work I put in like a window fitter how all day this 'pain' I feel. 


On the way home lost in my own zone, deep in thought who'd I see? Only the lady that I sought for, could it be? She was with a few of her mates, thought I'd better approach before it becomes too late. I'm nervous, stomachs rumbling as I start this w/ doubt. If I approach her everyone will know an stare like a fart when it's out, though I can taste the love we'd share 'cause my hearts in my mouth. So I say: "Hey, how are you? Remember me?" To which she replied: "Pfff, yeah" looking me up and down "I remember you, what you want?" while her mates giggle an sneer whispering in her ear. Shaking, I say: "Eh, I was wondering if, Eh....maybe we could get a coffee or something?" Her mates burst out laughing: "Coffee? you thirsty huh? Eww disgusting". She said: "Sorry I don't think so" as she walked off leaving me standing there.

Voting has ended for this battle (battle finished on 2015-11-05 18:41:16).

Óðinn <....>
The Goatfather
Topical Champion
Tag Team Champion

TheDonss!! G'luck bars-of-legend. Posted on: 2015-11-05 13:49:41

NOBLE <FITTEST> Staff Hall Of Famer	Topic: "UNREQUITED LOVE" Submission Deadline: Nov 5, 2015 @11:59 PM Eastern (GMT -4) Votes/Round closes at Nov 7, 2015 @11:59 PM Eastern (GMT -4) Good luck fellas! Posted on: 2015-11-01 09:10:13
bars-of-legend <GetRight> Exclusive Member	so this is a battle then? Posted on: 2015-11-02 02:36:55
bars-of-legend <GetRight> Exclusive Member	im assuming this is a cypher type item so ima just rock with it Posted on: 2015-11-02 02:41:47
Autograph	-TheDons- Posted on: 2015-11-03 03:01:10
COFFIN DODGER	both told stoies in different ways. one , for me had quite a bit of filler which didnt really need to be their , and some of his stuff sounded like 70s luuuuuuurve music . other was cleaner and had some metas ( tho not all great ) and some funny moments which made lol . was also tidier . so gets my vote tho was a good read from both ,but experience took this easily . Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2015-11-05 14:31:41
Esso LBT Legend Concept Champion Tag Team Champion	Both were well written but I agree with Celsius...one didnt stick to the topic of unrequited, it was more a description of his feelings. Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2015-11-05 18:12:42
DESSA <MAGA>	Both did there thang . One was basically direct to the topic on this one . Good read fellas. Fv in Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2015-11-05 19:36:05
Dopemceee Basic Member	Nice read fellas but imo experience took this one, loser didnt stick to the topic very well fairs in no hate Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2015-11-05 21:30:50
Shodan <FireNation> One Bar Champion The Fire Lord	Remind me to vote on this. Posted on: 2015-11-05 23:00:09
Looksemoh Live Battler	One was pretty straight-forward but had some depth, though rhyming "now" with "wow" multiple times was a bad decision, should've edited that. The other had a more engaging story but had a few lines that struck me as kind of cheesy/trite. Both were enjoyable overall, one just hit home for me a little better. GL Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2015-11-05 23:54:53
bars-of-legend <GetRight> Exclusive Member	dope drop #FUEL Posted on: 2015-11-06 06:48:51
DESSA <MAGA>	How I forget to vote SMH . Gl Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2015-11-06 19:10:02
Student Staff Hall of Famer LB Historian LetsBeef Patriarch Creative Genius	Felt like my winner had a better story while the loser grasped the topic more but their story didn't seem to go anywhere. This was pretty close but I felt like both could've done a lot better. Fair's in fellas. Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2015-11-06 20:13:11
BizzyOne <LoD> Scheme Champion Discord Battler	DECSEC Posted on: 2019-11-24 14:54:58

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