No worries man, no offence was intended. For me the squirrel bars weren't really popping and calling a man out for getting some is a fairly non-standard diss

Sometimes it felt like your bars were more there to carry on the rhyme scheme than to actually attack/directly set up an attack on your opponent. I feel in 8s and 16s you really have to trim the fat as you don't have a lot of time to play around with concepts. Hope that comes across clearer! Your closer was dope though bro, keep churning out shit like that and you'll tear it up!