This was an entertaining read here for sure. Both brought something to this. One really impressed me, especially with one bar, shit was piff!! Overall: Good shit gents, good look to who goes through. Fairs in, Fuels out. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-05-23 12:25:51

Chosen Rhyme Scheme: Waxen Models. ====== ================== You have until 22:00 GMT, Saturday, 24th of May to post. Failure to meet this deadline will result in auto-loss. NO EXCEPTIONS. Good luck 1/ Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-05-20 17:19:22

BULL..SHIT !! Posted on: 2014-05-20 22:34:42

Written with pronunciation: "Wack-sen maw-duls" ... Good luck, Lock. Posted on: 2014-05-21 22:18:25

Dope stuff both of you, I'll drop a vote later after reading it again Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-05-21 22:57:53

Fair has been dropped. Felt like one was more consistent w/ the punches and overall had nicer scheme work because of it. Dope battle Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-05-21 23:27:45

#SAVEMONEY Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-05-21 23:34:08

This was a good read fellas... felt both brought punches... just thought ones swag was more on point.. and a little more original.. and had two more punches that hit harder for me... good ish to both.. 100 ez respect it Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-05-22 00:08:23

think one came light here based on concepts its dramatic n ish but al n all dope scheme battle Posted on: 2014-05-22 06:09:24

Concealed Votes in. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-05-22 13:03:47

Easy vote for me . Great effort and material on both sides but I just see a clear winner. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-05-22 19:36:26

hm,, one here had a bit better relavency towards his punches, different style here, a bit longer setups, wit references in between , some quotated words didnt relate that much to the end concept in a few, some wordplay were not grammatically correct in a few others, which made me cringe a bit, considering the calibur of the individual, one had a bit more poor rhyme choices that didnt fit the scheme to well, usually a 4 syllable, the ones that are locked and have to rhyme pretty damn strictly is the 'first' syllable, and the 'third and fourth' which helps for flow, the middle is optional and considered interchangeable, because it could be considered the linking word towards your mains.... anyway, felt that due to being locked into the scheme, both kinda didnt bring that much strenght punch wise, i wouldnt go far as to say played, because the concepts are sculpted around a fresh scheme, but on the other end of the spectrum one brought a little more to the table , more so than the other, based on better relavency and a bit more polish in his scheme usage... hats off to both for the effort, fairs in. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-05-23 04:06:07

one was more polished in terms of readability and execution. the other had some good concepts going on. My loser had some horribly dated punches. Winner had problems with the scheme towards the end but the punches were hitting. Fair is in. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-05-23 18:41:14

ACizzy's. Posted on: 2014-05-23 21:16:24

one's verse was just a lot smoother all around, the others was a bit jumbled and seemed to not make a lot of sense in some parts. No hate, Voted. Fair. Do the Same. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-05-24 12:49:16

I wish I could vote on this, good spar. Posted on: 2014-05-24 13:34:43

This was POPPIN. Thought both did great but one just impressed me more. Great job guys. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-05-24 14:08:58

Vote is in, had to read a couple times. Close bout, good luck to both Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-05-24 22:31:07

I read this battle like four times and went back and forth on it, but I think I have my winner. Lock, I think you could've done a better job sticking to the scheme, but some of your bars were absolute fire. Vitty was more consistent schematically, and although I thought you had more filler, you also had some dope concepts (the "To get Obey" was insane). The difficult part of this battle was finding which criteria to base it off of, since both trumped each other in different areas, but overall I just had to go with the one that read better. Fair vote, solid spar. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-05-25 03:37:49