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..!ENTER HERE:with your:HOTTEST BAR!..
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YOUR MOST RECENT BATTLES..
WHATS THE BEST RYHME SKEME/PUNCH that youve had lately?
your chance to showcase fellas.. lol
THEN RATE THE BAR ABOVE YOURS.
dont really feel like looking but heres a skeme/punch from my last battle..
(liar liar!)looooook kid-im-'first-string', so surrre 'tie your SNEAKERS MAN' then go GREET YERR "FANS" tryna PREACH YERR PLANS how you REACH FOR JAMMS!... lol cuzzzz I don't wanta CEASE-YERR-TRANCE..but after alll the HoOoplaa its back to the BLEACHERS-FAM!!!/(time out!) I know right, my SPEECH HURTS ANDDD my DANK FREES just YANK-KEYS(yankees) like JETERS BRAND!!!!/(newww yooorrkkk!)so don’t be a "TINKER",SCRAMMM!!my REACH FAR,DAMNN!/.. iiffff im COMIN WIT JABS MAN.."BOOK"!!!.. or youll be RUNNIN FROM "CAPTAIN HOOKS" like PETER PANN!!!!!/(olldd tinker bell lookin boy!)LOL..evacuate!!! LEAVE YOUR LAND
(old name was captain america)
worrd. its a party.
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..!ENTER HERE:with your:HOTTEST BAR!..
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YOUR MOST RECENT BATTLES..
WHATS THE BEST RYHME SKEME/PUNCH that youve had lately?
your chance to showcase fellas.. lol
THEN RATE THE BAR ABOVE YOURS.
dont really feel like looking but heres a skeme/punch from my last battle..
(liar liar!)looooook kid-im-'first-string', so surrre 'tie your SNEAKERS MAN' then go GREET YERR "FANS" tryna PREACH YERR PLANS how you REACH FOR JAMMS!... lol cuzzzz I don't wanta CEASE-YERR-TRANCE..but after alll the HoOoplaa its back to the BLEACHERS-FAM!!!/(time out!) I know right, my SPEECH HURTS ANDDD my DANK FREES just YANK-KEYS(yankees) like JETERS BRAND!!!!/(newww yooorrkkk!)so don’t be a "TINKER",SCRAMMM!!my REACH FAR,DAMNN!/.. iiffff im COMIN WIT JABS MAN.."BOOK"!!!.. or youll be RUNNIN FROM "CAPTAIN HOOKS" like PETER PANN!!!!!/(olldd tinker bell lookin boy!)LOL..evacuate!!! LEAVE YOUR LAND
(old name was captain america)
worrd. its a party.
gett hii.
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01-24-2010, 10:07 PM
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Smh, Cmon bitch i was BORN AS A SAVAGE, its you i SWORN I WULD RAVAGE....Irish rapper? psh ya with the Hit single entitled CORN BEEF AN CABBAGE! This MANS LIKE, "my tracks unique DAM RIGHT!", Album cover claims -May's CD featuring a "Wack accent, and BAG PIPES," ya dope on text? like he got WORDS TA PLAY WIT, this HERBS A GAY BITCH, writin his bars on lucky charms boxes, im surprised ya VERSE NOT IN GAE/LIC!, cuz we all know he GAY WIT' CLAIMIN 'BARS N STRAPS', no way his GAME SICK, FIND IT HARD HE RAPS, Got cats in comments sayin D, HES BEST ABOVE YOU....then im like fuck No i aint losin to that Dude from P.S I LOVE YOU ahah.....got tis faggot Crying, cuz my GLOCKS IN-BED YA HUSBAND, Rapper? nah he jus a raving techno freak KNOCKIN HEADS WEN CLUBBIN, i mean whos doper the "kid from New York"(me) or this POT HEAD FROM DUBLIN....
Latest Battle with me and Mayneak...Hes irish....Ya verse had some sick concepts no rele solid multies decent punches 9 nice n spectaular
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Smh, Cmon bitch i was BORN AS A SAVAGE, its you i SWORN I WULD RAVAGE....Irish rapper? psh ya with the Hit single entitled CORN BEEF AN CABBAGE! This MANS LIKE, "my tracks unique DAM RIGHT!", Album cover claims -May's CD featuring a "Wack accent, and BAG PIPES," ya dope on text? like he got WORDS TA PLAY WIT, this HERBS A GAY BITCH, writin his bars on lucky charms boxes, im surprised ya VERSE NOT IN GAE/LIC!, cuz we all know he GAY WIT' CLAIMIN 'BARS N STRAPS', no way his GAME SICK, FIND IT HARD HE RAPS, Got cats in comments sayin D, HES BEST ABOVE YOU....then im like fuck No i aint losin to that Dude from P.S I LOVE YOU ahah.....got tis faggot Crying, cuz my GLOCKS IN-BED YA HUSBAND, Rapper? nah he jus a raving techno freak KNOCKIN HEADS WEN CLUBBIN, i mean whos doper the "kid from New York"(me) or this POT HEAD FROM DUBLIN....
Latest Battle with me and Mayneak...Hes irish....Ya verse had some sick concepts no rele solid multies decent punches 9 nice n spectaular
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01-24-2010, 10:21 PM
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lol i didnt mean a whole verse dog, i meant like a rhyme skeme that you keptt going that leads to one final punch.. ha
maybe my directions werent clear enough, cool
your verse was good, the personals hit home, multis were straight.. high 8's for not following the rules though.
like 8.99999912=spectacular.
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lol i didnt mean a whole verse dog, i meant like a rhyme skeme that you keptt going that leads to one final punch.. ha
maybe my directions werent clear enough, cool
your verse was good, the personals hit home, multis were straight.. high 8's for not following the rules though.
like 8.99999912=spectacular.
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01-25-2010, 07:34 AM
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^ the rhyme skeme was executed well,punches were there,the finisher was creative,multis were good..but youre supposed to rate the drop above yours.
nice drop though, all the jabs lead to a well executed punch. 9's.
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^ the rhyme skeme was executed well,punches were there,the finisher was creative,multis were good..but youre supposed to rate the drop above yours.
nice drop though, all the jabs lead to a well executed punch. 9's.
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01-25-2010, 09:54 AM
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This is too easy! *SIGH* SIMON'S DOIN CHORES.. He's so whipped, but here's a secret his WIFE LIKES MUH MUSIC MORE!! Ha, 'punch drunk?' This FAKER MUST BE 'PLASTERED!' *reads Rule's verse* "I like it Rule, was dope." *Thinks to self* "J YER SUCH AN ACTOR.." How's Rule stand a chance against his FAVORITE FUCKIN RAPPER?!
32 vs. RULE.
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i rate this...... CLASSICK!!!
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Originally Posted by Jack-0-Lantern
This is too easy! *SIGH* SIMON'S DOIN CHORES.. He's so whipped, but here's a secret his WIFE LIKES MUH MUSIC MORE!! Ha, 'punch drunk?' This FAKER MUST BE 'PLASTERED!' *reads Rule's verse* "I like it Rule, was dope." *Thinks to self* "J YER SUCH AN ACTOR.." How's Rule stand a chance against his FAVORITE FUCKIN RAPPER?!
32 vs. RULE.
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i rate this...... CLASSICK!!!
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01-25-2010, 12:30 PM
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see im WAY PAST YA, youll get BLAZED WITH MAGMA, thats underground, IF I CAME UP THATS LAVA!!!!! HA - 1 bar right???
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see im WAY PAST YA, youll get BLAZED WITH MAGMA, thats underground, IF I CAME UP THATS LAVA!!!!! HA - 1 bar right???
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01-26-2010, 03:41 PM
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^ one bar is fine, but i wanted to see a few bars where you kept the same multi skeme.also youre supposed to rate the bar above yours. i dunno if you guys are scared to rate them or what lol
but jack- your verse was solid. the multis were solid all around. didnt follow the rules by keeping the same rhyme skeme though.
8's.
terror- your bar wasnt bad, the multis didnt match up.. way-past-ya= 3 sylables.. blazed-with-mag-ma= 4 syl. and came-up-thats-la-va=5 syl. ... try to match the syl. a little more homie.
high 6's.
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^ one bar is fine, but i wanted to see a few bars where you kept the same multi skeme.also youre supposed to rate the bar above yours. i dunno if you guys are scared to rate them or what lol
but jack- your verse was solid. the multis were solid all around. didnt follow the rules by keeping the same rhyme skeme though.
8's.
terror- your bar wasnt bad, the multis didnt match up.. way-past-ya= 3 sylables.. blazed-with-mag-ma= 4 syl. and came-up-thats-la-va=5 syl. ... try to match the syl. a little more homie.
high 6's.
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01-26-2010, 04:05 PM
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I threw this one at Sean Cron in a crew battle
Fuck the system I aint JUMPING OVER HOOPS with my FUNKY FLOWING LOOP you can make a meal of it like a CHUNKY BOWL OF SOUP and cron's fiending for a killer hit this JUNKIE LOWLY STOOPS think you got the realer spits but your the FLUNKIE OF THE GROUP this PUNK HE BLOWS HIS TROOPS and amidst this guerilla shit he's a MONKEY THROWING POOP
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I threw this one at Sean Cron in a crew battle
Fuck the system I aint JUMPING OVER HOOPS with my FUNKY FLOWING LOOP you can make a meal of it like a CHUNKY BOWL OF SOUP and cron's fiending for a killer hit this JUNKIE LOWLY STOOPS think you got the realer spits but your the FLUNKIE OF THE GROUP this PUNK HE BLOWS HIS TROOPS and amidst this guerilla shit he's a MONKEY THROWING POOP
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She put my dick and both of my balls in her mouth
And I stand there in disbelief with my hand on my head wondering how she got 'em in
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01-26-2010, 04:13 PM
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8 on that OddGod...good flow, but some forced multies
here's some shit i wrote for The Sho a minute ago
sorry yall, i'm interrupting The Sho, but NO COMMERCIAL BREAK, so when i SCOPE N HURT THIS FAKE then take and POKE HIS PERFECT DATE with HOPE N PURPOSE, WAIT...i TOLD HIS WORSEST FATE, now SHO CAN JERK N HATE and THROW SOME BURSTS FROM K...but still couldnt HOLD MA VERSE'S WEIGHT...with arms as BOLD, AND GIRTH AS GREAT as Arnold...dont make me SCOLD THEN SERVE THIS GAY, his 'flows gone'...so K'll make him HOLD HIS THIRST FA DAYS/
not nearly my hottest....but the length of the multi is why i posted it
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8 on that OddGod...good flow, but some forced multies
here's some shit i wrote for The Sho a minute ago
sorry yall, i'm interrupting The Sho, but NO COMMERCIAL BREAK, so when i SCOPE N HURT THIS FAKE then take and POKE HIS PERFECT DATE with HOPE N PURPOSE, WAIT...i TOLD HIS WORSEST FATE, now SHO CAN JERK N HATE and THROW SOME BURSTS FROM K...but still couldnt HOLD MA VERSE'S WEIGHT...with arms as BOLD, AND GIRTH AS GREAT as Arnold...dont make me SCOLD THEN SERVE THIS GAY, his 'flows gone'...so K'll make him HOLD HIS THIRST FA DAYS/
not nearly my hottest....but the length of the multi is why i posted it
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01-28-2010, 10:58 AM
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some pretty spectacular bars being droped here,still waiting for a jaw dropping bar/skeme.
yessir.
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some pretty spectacular bars being droped here,still waiting for a jaw dropping bar/skeme.
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