SHEEP LORD (0-0) Vs Note (0-0) - (Note Wins 3-0)

This match up is part of The Inkwell PPV.
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Prelim Match Up
@SHEEP LORD Vs @noteRD

Topic: A Blast From The Past

Good Luck.

This match up is part of The Inkwell PPV.
. . .
Prelim Match Up
@SHEEP LORD Vs @noteRD

Topic: A Blast From The Past

Good Luck.

I felt that neither of these pieces did a great job at unfolding a story. I wasn't compelled to keep going in either verse. Both could use more concrete imagery and elements that drive a reader on. The first verse however I was having trouble finding many redeeming qualities from right down to rhyme which isn't "necessary" in poetry but this is a topical in on a hip hop website and I wasn't feeling it

So my W goes to NOTE

I felt that neither of these pieces did a great job at unfolding a story. I wasn't compelled to keep going in either verse. Both could use more concrete imagery and elements that drive a reader on. The first verse however I was having trouble finding many redeeming qualities from right down to rhyme which isn't "necessary" in poetry but this is a topical in on a hip hop website and I wasn't feeling it

So my W goes to NOTE

[Dysfunctional]

Neither made a story like agonize said but i thought one was using better vocab and imagery while the other was rapping as if it was a hot track on a beat or something my W goes to Note

[Dysfunctional]

Neither made a story like agonize said but i thought one was using better vocab and imagery while the other was rapping as if it was a hot track on a beat or something my W goes to Note

[Denton]

Both didnt really put much effort in either verse. I really cant elaborate on much since Agonize speaks the truth about it. Matter of preference though, Vote goes to Note

[Denton]

Both didnt really put much effort in either verse. I really cant elaborate on much since Agonize speaks the truth about it. Matter of preference though, Vote goes to Note

Note Wins 3-0

Note Wins 3-0

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