I got a question...Educated battlers only - Lets Beef

**John Dos** · #1 03-23-2013, 06:54 PM

is a verse like this worthy of a 5?

Since dudes still trash this'll be an easy win. Boots,sigs,mask clips filled? Bitch that's medium. If I was going hard id show no regard. Poke then scar ya throat with swords. Choke this broad till them vocal chords Violet Boregard(Willy wonka). I'll swing a bat man. Then aim, point when that sig smoking either you'll die or end up with Banes voice.(cigarette smoke)...rebel flow destroy ya. Puns delahoya. Dumb ass, one pump blast leave you looking disgusting as fuck like an episode of hoarders. goons run through ya place swarming. Take you to the top balcony watch "get air over the rail" but you ain't skate boardin.

---BUT IF I HAD IT LIKE THIS I WOULD GET 10'S...

ain't shit changed. *sigh*

Wordplay is there. Multis are there. Puns are there. Flow is def there. LB will never improve until people get smarter and learn how to properly read a verse. Also, the forced trash I see these days ain't hot. If it wouldn't be ill spoken aloud, then it's NOT COOL.

**John Dos** · 03-23-2013, 06:54 PM

is a verse like this worthy of a 5?

Since dudes still trash this'll be an easy win. Boots,sigs,mask clips filled? Bitch that's medium. If I was going hard id show no regard. Poke then scar ya throat with swords. Choke this broad till them vocal chords Violet Boregard(Willy wonka). I'll swing a bat man. Then aim, point when that sig smoking either you'll die or end up with Banes voice.(cigarette smoke)...rebel flow destroy ya. Puns delahoya. Dumb ass, one pump blast leave you looking disgusting as fuck like an episode of hoarders. goons run through ya place swarming. Take you to the top balcony watch "get air over the rail" but you ain't skate boardin.

---BUT IF I HAD IT LIKE THIS I WOULD GET 10'S...

ain't shit changed. *sigh*

Wordplay is there. Multis are there. Puns are there. Flow is def there. LB will never improve until people get smarter and learn how to properly read a verse. Also, the forced trash I see these days ain't hot. If it wouldn't be ill spoken aloud, then it's NOT COOL.

**Manhattan** · #2 03-23-2013, 07:01 PM

More like a low 7 tbh

**Manhattan** · 03-23-2013, 07:01 PM

More like a low 7 tbh

**RULE** · #3 03-23-2013, 07:03 PM

I'd give that verse a 3. Real talk.

**RULE** · 03-23-2013, 07:03 PM

I'd give that verse a 3. Real talk.

**J u s T C** · #4 03-23-2013, 07:03 PM

shits meh but 5's a little low, by normal standards then yeah it's "not bad" but by lb standards atleast it's copmpitant and clean

**J u s T C** · 03-23-2013, 07:03 PM

shits meh but 5's a little low, by normal standards then yeah it's "not bad" but by lb standards atleast it's copmpitant and clean

**John Dos** · #5 03-23-2013, 07:07 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by RULE

I'd give that verse a 3. Real talk.

lmaooo.

i would honestly rate it at 7, maybe 8. but i've seen worse get 10s. it was keyed regardless so idgaf but people still don't know how to comprehend buildups and comparisons to things(punches) in verses.

**John Dos** · 03-23-2013, 07:07 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by RULE

I'd give that verse a 3. Real talk.

lmaooo.

i would honestly rate it at 7, maybe 8. but i've seen worse get 10s. it was keyed regardless so idgaf but people still don't know how to comprehend buildups and comparisons to things(punches) in verses.

**RULE** · #6 03-23-2013, 07:08 PM

why you laughing? lol

a 5 = not bad. and that was a verse of aimless filler with a wack punch at the end.

a 3.

**RULE** · 03-23-2013, 07:08 PM

why you laughing? lol

a 5 = not bad. and that was a verse of aimless filler with a wack punch at the end.

a 3.

**J u s T C** · #7 03-23-2013, 07:09 PM

i counted more than 1 punch

**J u s T C** · 03-23-2013, 07:09 PM

i counted more than 1 punch

**RULE** · #8 03-23-2013, 07:10 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Just C

i counted more than 1 punch

Name them.

**RULE** · 03-23-2013, 07:10 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Just C

i counted more than 1 punch

Name them.

**RULE** · #9 03-23-2013, 07:13 PM

lol at the status

**RULE** · 03-23-2013, 07:13 PM

lol at the status

**John Dos** · #10 03-23-2013, 07:14 PM

Aimless filler. hmm. let me break this shit down for you bro lol

Since dudes still trash this'll be an easy win. Boots,sigs,mask clips filled? Bitch that's medium.

Ok opening line. No punch, just kinda an intro with good flow and multis.

If I was going hard id show no regard. Poke then scar ya throat with swords. Choke this broad till them vocal chords Violet Boregard(Willy wonka).

Multi flurry. Choking someone till their throat turns blue. PUNCH. and clever wordplay

I'll swing a bat man. Then aim, point when that sig smoking either you'll die or end up with Banes voice.(cigarette smoke)...

Bat man is referring to the Movie batman. The sig iis slang for gun. Banes voice is raspy like what happens to cigarette smokers. smoke is also a slang term for kill. good multis and flow as well as wordplay and PUNCH.

rebel flow destroy ya. Puns delahoya. Dumb ass, one pump blast leave you looking disgusting as fuck like an episode of hoarders.

Again, good multis and flow. Hoarders homes are disgusting which is what someone would look like if I shot them. lol...again that's still a PUNCH.

goons run through ya place swarming. Take you to the top balcony watch "get air over the rail" but you ain't skate boardin.

*sigh* Good multis and flow. Skateboarders get air over rails on halfpipes. Which would be another PUNCH. so only the opener didn't really have a punch.

**John Dos** · 03-23-2013, 07:14 PM

Aimless filler. hmm. let me break this shit down for you bro lol

Since dudes still trash this'll be an easy win. Boots,sigs,mask clips filled? Bitch that's medium.

Ok opening line. No punch, just kinda an intro with good flow and multis.

If I was going hard id show no regard. Poke then scar ya throat with swords. Choke this broad till them vocal chords Violet Boregard(Willy wonka).

Multi flurry. Choking someone till their throat turns blue. PUNCH. and clever wordplay

I'll swing a bat man. Then aim, point when that sig smoking either you'll die or end up with Banes voice.(cigarette smoke)...

Bat man is referring to the Movie batman. The sig iis slang for gun. Banes voice is raspy like what happens to cigarette smokers. smoke is also a slang term for kill. good multis and flow as well as wordplay and PUNCH.

rebel flow destroy ya. Puns delahoya. Dumb ass, one pump blast leave you looking disgusting as fuck like an episode of hoarders.

Again, good multis and flow. Hoarders homes are disgusting which is what someone would look like if I shot them. lol...again that's still a PUNCH.

goons run through ya place swarming. Take you to the top balcony watch "get air over the rail" but you ain't skate boardin.

*sigh* Good multis and flow. Skateboarders get air over rails on halfpipes. Which would be another PUNCH. so only the opener didn't really have a punch.


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