TalkSick vs NelSyn (Round 1) NelSyn wins!

[IV]

TalkSick vs NelSyn

House rules apply. Any questions, contact me.

Check ins are due Monday (March 5th) at 11.59PM EST
Verses are due Friday (March 9th) at 11.59PM EST

Line length; 20-60 lines
3-0 K.O or first to 5 votes

Your image is from Alien. Interpret your picture in any way you see fit!

Voting Rubix
Rhyming Scheme/Flow
Vocabulary
Topic/Meaning
Storytelling/Progression
Emotion
Imagery
Poetic Techniques
Ending

[IV]

TalkSick vs NelSyn

House rules apply. Any questions, contact me.

Check ins are due Monday (March 5th) at 11.59PM EST
Verses are due Friday (March 9th) at 11.59PM EST

Line length; 20-60 lines
3-0 K.O or first to 5 votes

Your image is from Alien. Interpret your picture in any way you see fit!

Voting Rubix
Rhyming Scheme/Flow
Vocabulary
Topic/Meaning
Storytelling/Progression
Emotion
Imagery
Poetic Techniques
Ending

[NelSyn]

Here's my check..g'luck Talk.

[NelSyn]

Here's my check..g'luck Talk.

[Dono]

Damn it! I'd have loved to have this picture. Good luck fellas.

[Dono]

Damn it! I'd have loved to have this picture. Good luck fellas.

[TalkSick]

check check check

[TalkSick]

check check check

[NelSyn]

Sector Z

A place never discovered, until the great war left it to fucking Recover..
more mythical then the creatures of Area Fifty One,
but here it don't matter if you want some Risky Fun.
The sign on the door says, "Enter at Own Risk", they don't believe it, they go in,
& it'll Sever their Bones Quick.
Nobody knows what dwells in the Depths of the sector, actions more horrific, then that of Lector's.
Hannibal the Cannibal got nothing on this evil...
slice your Mandible & Clavicle, then there's litterally nothing for these people - Venom,
the part that Hurts the worse, w/ pain unfathomed like a Virgin Birth,
the opposite of a Surgeon's Versed..
It has a very small stature w/ a Very big bite, never scared to murder,
not scared to fight. Never back-down, not the type to flight.
It enjoys the smell of blood & Dying Humans, & even it's actions are quite unhuman.
As years pass the demon gets Stronger & more Demented
No one has ever Comprehended, or knows what it Intended.
But, as more time passes a man finally Reaches the middle..
Of Sector Z, He sees the demons spawning, he's Speechless; their crippled..
The cold man feels empathy for that which is brittle..
Cuz in it's race it's discarded..though this man was Retarded..
For he fell for the trick, that they cleverly started.

[3 years later]

A young man hoping for the Apocolypse..
Got alot of Confidence, w/ not a lot of Competence..
He tries to play it like Politics, lie & sneak his way through..
He's killed the second the doors opened..
No time to Speak his way through..
The beast is almost fully grown, almost 8 feet tall,
It's victims, white, black, Women or Men..
& no one who enters will be Leaving Again..
It's a fearless Savage, don't bother finding a passage..
& don't think this is someone Rhyming on Acid..
It's a real story of Dying in Masses
& being covered in 'Dirt Brown' w/out Fucking Moleasses.

g'luck talk..

[NelSyn]

Sector Z

A place never discovered, until the great war left it to fucking Recover..
more mythical then the creatures of Area Fifty One,
but here it don't matter if you want some Risky Fun.
The sign on the door says, "Enter at Own Risk", they don't believe it, they go in,
& it'll Sever their Bones Quick.
Nobody knows what dwells in the Depths of the sector, actions more horrific, then that of Lector's.
Hannibal the Cannibal got nothing on this evil...
slice your Mandible & Clavicle, then there's litterally nothing for these people - Venom,
the part that Hurts the worse, w/ pain unfathomed like a Virgin Birth,
the opposite of a Surgeon's Versed..
It has a very small stature w/ a Very big bite, never scared to murder,
not scared to fight. Never back-down, not the type to flight.
It enjoys the smell of blood & Dying Humans, & even it's actions are quite unhuman.
As years pass the demon gets Stronger & more Demented
No one has ever Comprehended, or knows what it Intended.
But, as more time passes a man finally Reaches the middle..
Of Sector Z, He sees the demons spawning, he's Speechless; their crippled..
The cold man feels empathy for that which is brittle..
Cuz in it's race it's discarded..though this man was Retarded..
For he fell for the trick, that they cleverly started.

[3 years later]

A young man hoping for the Apocolypse..
Got alot of Confidence, w/ not a lot of Competence..
He tries to play it like Politics, lie & sneak his way through..
He's killed the second the doors opened..
No time to Speak his way through..
The beast is almost fully grown, almost 8 feet tall,
It's victims, white, black, Women or Men..
& no one who enters will be Leaving Again..
It's a fearless Savage, don't bother finding a passage..
& don't think this is someone Rhyming on Acid..
It's a real story of Dying in Masses
& being covered in 'Dirt Brown' w/out Fucking Moleasses.

g'luck talk..

[IV]

Good work NelSyn

@TalkSick there will be an extension til 11.59PM on Sunday, please drop your verse by then

[IV]

Good work NelSyn

@TalkSick there will be an extension til 11.59PM on Sunday, please drop your verse by then

[TalkSick]

Droppin tonight

[TalkSick]

Droppin tonight

[IV]

@TalkSick if you don't, i'm leaving DPs and it's going to be all your fault

[IV]

@TalkSick if you don't, i'm leaving DPs and it's going to be all your fault

[TalkSick]

Originally Posted by Verity

@TalkSick if you don't, i'm leaving DPs and it's going to be all your fault

As soon as i get off work lol sheeesh! Women! Lol

[TalkSick]

Originally Posted by Verity

@TalkSick if you don't, i'm leaving DPs and it's going to be all your fault

As soon as i get off work lol sheeesh! Women! Lol

[TalkSick]

....I collapse on the table
As it started to rip corpse, Ribs open like French doors
Blood spews with volcanic proportions as well
....I cannot stand to live anymore. I shall die by myself

The story i shall tell and un-fold for thee
Is one of un-told beliefs
To make the un-told....believe....

It began with an intergalactic mark
Too my surprise, it seem'd to be hardly far
The Closer it got, the more i watched
and i watched...
It seem'd to hopscotch from star to star

It HAS arrived...
AS IT HAMMERD IN THE SIDE,
My crew turns weak,
I SEE THE PANIC IN THEIR EYES,
AS I SCREAAAM "THE DAMAGE WILL SUBSIDE!"

But, I Was Wrong....

...IT has torn apart the overdrive!

The power has been severed,
I roam the halls, lit with flares
I spot the being to the left,
I was met with a blank stare.

His eyes glow red.

I felt complexd by its exoticness
...Before i could cry for help, It lunged at my esophagus
I had no choice but to ingest swine
It is flowing through my intestines.

I stumble back to the control room.

I slowly sat down at the table
My health is so un-stable
My crew wounders my well-being
This pain is so un-bearable...

What i tell you is true...

In pain, i yelled at my crew to leave the room
Jesus Christ i shall be seeing you soon,
For this pain in my stomach,
Is pain i CANNOT stomach

I collapse on the table...

[TalkSick]

....I collapse on the table
As it started to rip corpse, Ribs open like French doors
Blood spews with volcanic proportions as well
....I cannot stand to live anymore. I shall die by myself

The story i shall tell and un-fold for thee
Is one of un-told beliefs
To make the un-told....believe....

It began with an intergalactic mark
Too my surprise, it seem'd to be hardly far
The Closer it got, the more i watched
and i watched...
It seem'd to hopscotch from star to star

It HAS arrived...
AS IT HAMMERD IN THE SIDE,
My crew turns weak,
I SEE THE PANIC IN THEIR EYES,
AS I SCREAAAM "THE DAMAGE WILL SUBSIDE!"

But, I Was Wrong....

...IT has torn apart the overdrive!

The power has been severed,
I roam the halls, lit with flares
I spot the being to the left,
I was met with a blank stare.

His eyes glow red.

I felt complexd by its exoticness
...Before i could cry for help, It lunged at my esophagus
I had no choice but to ingest swine
It is flowing through my intestines.

I stumble back to the control room.

I slowly sat down at the table
My health is so un-stable
My crew wounders my well-being
This pain is so un-bearable...

What i tell you is true...

In pain, i yelled at my crew to leave the room
Jesus Christ i shall be seeing you soon,
For this pain in my stomach,
Is pain i CANNOT stomach

I collapse on the table...