Round 1: Sean Cron Vs trill_conceptz (Sean Cron Wins Via 3-0 KO) - Lets Beef

#1 09-14-2011, 01:33 PM

Sean Cron Vs trill_conceptz
Letsbeef Topical Tournament 2011 Round 1

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GOOD LUCK

09-14-2011, 01:33 PM

Sean Cron Vs trill_conceptz
Letsbeef Topical Tournament 2011 Round 1

House Rules Apply. Any questions, contact me.

CHECK INS ARE DUE FRIDAY (09-16-11) AT 11:59PM PST. VERSES ARE DUE WEDNESDAY (09-21-11) AT 11:59PM. NO EXCEPTIONS.
(Note: Deadlines are 1 week due to Sandman's tournament round. Other rounds will be shorter)

Line Length: 20-40 lines.

Voting Rubix
Rhyming Scheme/Flow
Vocabulary
Topic/Meaning
Storytelling/Progression
Emotion
Imagery
Poetic Techniques
Ending

GOOD LUCK

**ItzNDaSawce** · #2 09-14-2011, 05:21 PM

did i miss wut the topic was about...and shout the storyline still be n battle mode?

**ItzNDaSawce** · 09-14-2011, 05:21 PM

did i miss wut the topic was about...and shout the storyline still be n battle mode?

Sean Cron · #3 09-15-2011, 04:45 AM

I think we just flow bout the picture

Sean Cron · 09-15-2011, 04:45 AM

I think we just flow bout the picture

#4 09-15-2011, 05:38 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ---Sean Cron---

I think we just flow bout the picture

Correct......

09-15-2011, 05:38 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ---Sean Cron---

I think we just flow bout the picture

Correct......

**ItzNDaSawce** · #5 09-16-2011, 06:40 PM

ima drop n next couple hours..where u want it homie..its ur show..

**ItzNDaSawce** · 09-16-2011, 06:40 PM

ima drop n next couple hours..where u want it homie..its ur show..

#6 09-16-2011, 08:19 PM

Don't get what you mean, but you write a piece about the picture, whatever way you want to incorporate it, and drop it in this thread.

09-16-2011, 08:19 PM

Don't get what you mean, but you write a piece about the picture, whatever way you want to incorporate it, and drop it in this thread.

**ItzNDaSawce** · #7 09-16-2011, 10:34 PM

sean was a fellow once respected but his stunts/ were wreckliss now HOMELESS ARE THE BEST ACTORS look he slumped like i swoped his BONES WIT SHARDS JUS LESS FRACTURED but we can TALK DESEASE look at it, it WALKS THE STREETS.now he 'sits in termoil, cuz he GAULKED AT ME..jus remembering the pain feels like stings from a FLOCK OF EAGS now this bum is 'toung tied' and his TALK IS CHEAP..silenze..for he's still a MAN TODAY, jus 'crossed the law' word is he 'lost it all' but this *half a Diddy* i dont PLAN TA NAME! he looks DAMN ASHAMED like his 'cup make, more cents/since than his lectures' and pride wouldnt let eam STAND N WAIT!! he was on the 'road ta life? Sorry Sean! I should've 'showed advice' so you LOST THE BLUEPRINTS? had a 'Trill concept' that KNOCKED EAM STUPID tho 'when he came to' noticed he was Still the same dude, I bent down and TOSSED "C" TWO CENTS!! {whispers in "C"rons ear} You betta get a CROSS OR NOOSE/LINCH cuz im about ta CHALK THE NOoSENSE(lol) I 'know you're weak-ima help you up" then STOMP YA TOOTHLISS cuz my 'talk? is right!' not even the 'jaws of life' are CHOMPIN THRU THIS!! see me and Cron was buddies, but he CHOSE FREEDOM, SUMMER DAYS and *found a hoe* and supPOSED HE JUS LOVED HER WAYS? tho 'I could tell' she didnt 'hide it well' (the bitch had a dick) and he didnt KNOW, SHE WAS UNDERAGE!! so S.C. should PICK UP WHERE HE LEFT OFF..would Trill, KICk DUST AT THE KID? HA! tho 'bums are still people!' this 'ones not Trills equal' question is: should we GIVE FUCKS THAT HE LIVES..NAH!! cuz when im dun 'w/rappin to eam bout the *presents/now* hes gunna LIFT UP AS A GIFT YALL!!

**ItzNDaSawce** · 09-16-2011, 10:34 PM

sean was a fellow once respected but his stunts/ were wreckliss now HOMELESS ARE THE BEST ACTORS look he slumped like i swoped his BONES WIT SHARDS JUS LESS FRACTURED but we can TALK DESEASE look at it, it WALKS THE STREETS.now he 'sits in termoil, cuz he GAULKED AT ME..jus remembering the pain feels like stings from a FLOCK OF EAGS now this bum is 'toung tied' and his TALK IS CHEAP..silenze..for he's still a MAN TODAY, jus 'crossed the law' word is he 'lost it all' but this *half a Diddy* i dont PLAN TA NAME! he looks DAMN ASHAMED like his 'cup make, more cents/since than his lectures' and pride wouldnt let eam STAND N WAIT!! he was on the 'road ta life? Sorry Sean! I should've 'showed advice' so you LOST THE BLUEPRINTS? had a 'Trill concept' that KNOCKED EAM STUPID tho 'when he came to' noticed he was Still the same dude, I bent down and TOSSED "C" TWO CENTS!! {whispers in "C"rons ear} You betta get a CROSS OR NOOSE/LINCH cuz im about ta CHALK THE NOoSENSE(lol) I 'know you're weak-ima help you up" then STOMP YA TOOTHLISS cuz my 'talk? is right!' not even the 'jaws of life' are CHOMPIN THRU THIS!! see me and Cron was buddies, but he CHOSE FREEDOM, SUMMER DAYS and *found a hoe* and supPOSED HE JUS LOVED HER WAYS? tho 'I could tell' she didnt 'hide it well' (the bitch had a dick) and he didnt KNOW, SHE WAS UNDERAGE!! so S.C. should PICK UP WHERE HE LEFT OFF..would Trill, KICk DUST AT THE KID? HA! tho 'bums are still people!' this 'ones not Trills equal' question is: should we GIVE FUCKS THAT HE LIVES..NAH!! cuz when im dun 'w/rappin to eam bout the *presents/now* hes gunna LIFT UP AS A GIFT YALL!!