Round 1: Beyond Lunatic Vs God G Kool (God G Kool Wins 5-2)

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[Wigsplit]

Voting Rubix
Rhyming Scheme/Flow- GGK flowed better imo
Vocabulary- Beyond
Topic/Meaning- GGK, I followed his easier, Beyond was a lil difficult to follow
Storytelling/Progression- Beyond told a better story, but GGK made more sense, tie
Emotion- I was feelin more from GGK
Imagery- Beyond
Poetic Techniques- Beyond, but GGk did alrite too
Ending- I was feelin GGK's more

Overall Vote- GGK, I just could follow along with it better, both was tight tho, jus keep at it

[Wigsplit]

Voting Rubix
Rhyming Scheme/Flow- GGK flowed better imo
Vocabulary- Beyond
Topic/Meaning- GGK, I followed his easier, Beyond was a lil difficult to follow
Storytelling/Progression- Beyond told a better story, but GGK made more sense, tie
Emotion- I was feelin more from GGK
Imagery- Beyond
Poetic Techniques- Beyond, but GGk did alrite too
Ending- I was feelin GGK's more

Overall Vote- GGK, I just could follow along with it better, both was tight tho, jus keep at it

[BFNE CEO™]

Rhyming Scheme/Flow gotta go wit G on this...luna had a few lines that didnt rhyme to me...even tho G had a line or 2 that didnt rhyme also
Vocabulary gotta go wit luna on this...tho G had some nice vocab
Topic/Meaning tie on this...both were on some pretty deep heaven stuff
Storytelling/Progression tie on this one too...bith didnt progress as much as they just told there thoughts on the topic...i liked both
Emotion tie both were pretty emotionall on the same level
Imagery gotta go wit G on this one his picture was painted a lil more clear...i will give luna some props tho for his complexity just a lil too much complexity and not enough vividness
Poetic Techniques tie both were on the same level imo.....
Ending gotta go wit G on the ending it looked to me that luna was just goin thru the motions at the end and didnt really give his drop that much meaning imo

my vote goes too G.....both were good at the same time as not being all that deep. i was kinda bored with both by the end but it was an ok read at the same time from both........

G'LUCK to you both

[BFNE CEO™]

Rhyming Scheme/Flow gotta go wit G on this...luna had a few lines that didnt rhyme to me...even tho G had a line or 2 that didnt rhyme also
Vocabulary gotta go wit luna on this...tho G had some nice vocab
Topic/Meaning tie on this...both were on some pretty deep heaven stuff
Storytelling/Progression tie on this one too...bith didnt progress as much as they just told there thoughts on the topic...i liked both
Emotion tie both were pretty emotionall on the same level
Imagery gotta go wit G on this one his picture was painted a lil more clear...i will give luna some props tho for his complexity just a lil too much complexity and not enough vividness
Poetic Techniques tie both were on the same level imo.....
Ending gotta go wit G on the ending it looked to me that luna was just goin thru the motions at the end and didnt really give his drop that much meaning imo

my vote goes too G.....both were good at the same time as not being all that deep. i was kinda bored with both by the end but it was an ok read at the same time from both........

G'LUCK to you both

[IAmFlow]

Rhyming Scheme/Flow - GGK - His was short and sweet. BL had some lines that didn't rhyme and some of his wording took off the flow a bit.
Vocabulary - BL - He obviously took this cat reading the verses.
Topic/Meaning - GGK - GGK had more of a verse were you can follow it from start to finish (for the most part) as in some of BL's concepts were changing up as he wrote, and because of the wording the meaning wasn't as clear as it should have been.
Storytelling/Progression - Tie - Have to agree with what wiggy said on this one. Beyond had this cat but the way he worded a lot of his lines put it all over the place. Many of them weren't even grammatically correct, these verses should be read like your reading a fluent grammatically correct sentence and/or poetic style.
Emotion - GGK - He just expressed it a bit better.
Imagery - GGK - Neither was great. But I felt as an imagery wise towards the picture that he got this cat. A lot of his verse was describing what was in the picture.
Poetic Techniques - BL - This was a pretty close cat. Neither one of you really shined in this aspect. Although BL had the rough patches through his verse, he took the more similie, metaphoric, connective verse.
Ending - Tie - TBH Both endings were pretty iffy. No one really put it to a complete end with the reader knowing it was the end.

GGK GMV.

[IAmFlow]

Rhyming Scheme/Flow - GGK - His was short and sweet. BL had some lines that didn't rhyme and some of his wording took off the flow a bit.
Vocabulary - BL - He obviously took this cat reading the verses.
Topic/Meaning - GGK - GGK had more of a verse were you can follow it from start to finish (for the most part) as in some of BL's concepts were changing up as he wrote, and because of the wording the meaning wasn't as clear as it should have been.
Storytelling/Progression - Tie - Have to agree with what wiggy said on this one. Beyond had this cat but the way he worded a lot of his lines put it all over the place. Many of them weren't even grammatically correct, these verses should be read like your reading a fluent grammatically correct sentence and/or poetic style.
Emotion - GGK - He just expressed it a bit better.
Imagery - GGK - Neither was great. But I felt as an imagery wise towards the picture that he got this cat. A lot of his verse was describing what was in the picture.
Poetic Techniques - BL - This was a pretty close cat. Neither one of you really shined in this aspect. Although BL had the rough patches through his verse, he took the more similie, metaphoric, connective verse.
Ending - Tie - TBH Both endings were pretty iffy. No one really put it to a complete end with the reader knowing it was the end.

GGK GMV.

[Dizz Da Dogg]

Rhyming Scheme/Flow - Kool
Vocabulary - Lunatic
Topic/Meaning - Kool
Storytelling/Progression - Lunatic
Emotion - Lunatic
Imagery - Lunatic
Poetic Techniques - Kool
Ending - Kool

Judging by my cats its a tie. But there's only one winner. So overall the one i felt more was Kools.

[Dizz Da Dogg]

Rhyming Scheme/Flow - Kool
Vocabulary - Lunatic
Topic/Meaning - Kool
Storytelling/Progression - Lunatic
Emotion - Lunatic
Imagery - Lunatic
Poetic Techniques - Kool
Ending - Kool

Judging by my cats its a tie. But there's only one winner. So overall the one i felt more was Kools.

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