"Filling up the box"
Well, this has really been bothering me, so i'm going to go ahead and find out what the actual reason behind this category which you all vote off
8 lines "four bars"
I.E.
No BATTLIN' THAT IS JUST something i'm OFF AND DONE WITH/'Cuz I'm a PASSIVIST like i'm above BLOCC IN PUNCHES/GOD THIS DUMB BITCH, *lunges* n' keeps tryin' to HIT ME/We know (he's outta' the box) 'cuz none of his lines are FITTING/So, what do I have in common with V3NUMB AND TICKET?/I'm lethal and paid for entry? No we WON... HE DIDN'T.../Lemme show SKILL AND POISE as my bombs are STILL DEPLOYED/'til there's no respone Like I blew up marshall to 'KILLTHENOISE'/He thinks he's the greatest of all time and that's SO WEAK/The closest he gets to money from his act, is makin' GOAT CHEESE/SO PLEASE DON'T SPEAK you PHONY OG/
Now that looks cluttered, unorganized, and basically amateur, (IMO) that's how you all like it to be though. Let me ask you...
No BATTLIN' THAT IS JUST something i'm OFF AND DONE WITH/
'Cuz I'm a PASSIVIST like i'm above BLOCC IN PUNCHES/
GOD THIS DUMB BITCH, *lunges* n' keeps tryin' to HIT ME/
We know (he's outta' the box) 'cuz none of his lines are FITTING/
So, what do I have in common with V3NUMB AND TICKET?/
I'm lethal and paid for entry? No we WON... HE DIDN'T.../
Lemme show SKILL AND POISE as my bombs are STILL DEPLOYED/
'til there's no respone Like I blew up marshall to 'KILLTHENOISE'/
He thinks he's the greatest of all time and that's SO WEAK/
The closest he gets to money from his act, is makin' GOAT CHEESE/
SO PLEASE DON'T SPEAK you PHONY OG/
Doesn't that looks more organized, easier to read, and overall better in terms of understanding flow?
Now, at the end I had to force an extra bar (11th), and that's my main annoyance here. WHY ARE YOU WORRIED ABOUT QUANTITY VS. QUALITY. Not saying that I deserved this battle, just an example.
If anyone could clear this up for me it'd be appreciated, thank you.
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