Braggin Writez Bout To Attend a Funeral - SWAY Get Ya Members

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Second time ??

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Second time ??

[Askari]

Originally Posted by Intricate Skillz

Ok fi is backed in a corner now! Like i said before for tha 3rd time- i was writin two topicals in two days- i knew i was gonna win so no i did not go hard- check back in the archives for my topicals-
Prose,ill phenom,steelo,black book- all wins!
Steelo came back n beat me in the semis off a wild card!

Im on my phone at wrk- some people actually do that- do tha topical and send me 16 or u stfu! K buddy

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And u can take ya name off ya list up there, cuz i dont consider u a topical text threat, i've never seen u participate in one!

If you're SO good why not just accept the gauntlet? Sorry dude but Fiji's come out and said he is willing to throw all these battles at you to definitively prove who is the better all-round battler, and you're pussing out.

[Askari]

Originally Posted by Intricate Skillz

Ok fi is backed in a corner now! Like i said before for tha 3rd time- i was writin two topicals in two days- i knew i was gonna win so no i did not go hard- check back in the archives for my topicals-
Prose,ill phenom,steelo,black book- all wins!
Steelo came back n beat me in the semis off a wild card!

Im on my phone at wrk- some people actually do that- do tha topical and send me 16 or u stfu! K buddy

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And u can take ya name off ya list up there, cuz i dont consider u a topical text threat, i've never seen u participate in one!

If you're SO good why not just accept the gauntlet? Sorry dude but Fiji's come out and said he is willing to throw all these battles at you to definitively prove who is the better all-round battler, and you're pussing out.

[IV]

Just to confirm, Intricate Skillz didn't say a word to me about your topical vote. It was a personal observation about the comments you made in your vote, which we've already spoken about privately Fiji

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That being said, I want to see this happen. It's DPS > Braggin Writez. And until somebody proves otherwise... Exposing ShowOffs like Britains Got Talent since 2010.

[IV]

Just to confirm, Intricate Skillz didn't say a word to me about your topical vote. It was a personal observation about the comments you made in your vote, which we've already spoken about privately Fiji

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That being said, I want to see this happen. It's DPS > Braggin Writez. And until somebody proves otherwise... Exposing ShowOffs like Britains Got Talent since 2010.

[Just C]

I read Fiji's first 2 breakdowns of Intricates verse. and he was 100% right. People just see some soppy shit about a Soldier writing hoime and automatically go "bravo bravo" completely over looking the obvious flaws.

The whole writing home while "nukes are blowing" does not only come accross as patronising and cliched as a concept. But it's totally and utterly flawed.

How the fuck would a soldier be writing home while Not 1 but atleast 2 nukes are going off? man would be DEAD or too busy trying to evacuate the area amongst many other things he would be responsible for as a soldier. lol.

The same with the whole sending a letter home when he will be coming home in a week. Lol. Not to mention that this isn't 1945 . This isn't Germany. There are such things as phones.

And that is only the first few lines so god knows what the rest is like. I think Fiji was 100% right.

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Just read some more. I could really lay into that whole verse but I'm not going too. No point in wasting my time. Just keep practacing and you'll get there.

Wording was a big no no though. Like when you said the words.
"without you I'm the WEAKEST CLUTZ".

Not great words to use. It just sounds wrong. Especially for a topical.

[Just C]

I read Fiji's first 2 breakdowns of Intricates verse. and he was 100% right. People just see some soppy shit about a Soldier writing hoime and automatically go "bravo bravo" completely over looking the obvious flaws.

The whole writing home while "nukes are blowing" does not only come accross as patronising and cliched as a concept. But it's totally and utterly flawed.

How the fuck would a soldier be writing home while Not 1 but atleast 2 nukes are going off? man would be DEAD or too busy trying to evacuate the area amongst many other things he would be responsible for as a soldier. lol.

The same with the whole sending a letter home when he will be coming home in a week. Lol. Not to mention that this isn't 1945 . This isn't Germany. There are such things as phones.

And that is only the first few lines so god knows what the rest is like. I think Fiji was 100% right.

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Just read some more. I could really lay into that whole verse but I'm not going too. No point in wasting my time. Just keep practacing and you'll get there.

Wording was a big no no though. Like when you said the words.
"without you I'm the WEAKEST CLUTZ".

Not great words to use. It just sounds wrong. Especially for a topical.

[IV]

@Just C people stretch the truth so they can be creative with what they write, similar to text battling. I enjoyed the topical, everything can be improved on obviously. As a basic story i think it did good, the facts were off but it's compromised for creativity and entertainment.

Less of this, shall I set up a Topical for you both?

[IV]

@Just C people stretch the truth so they can be creative with what they write, similar to text battling. I enjoyed the topical, everything can be improved on obviously. As a basic story i think it did good, the facts were off but it's compromised for creativity and entertainment.

Less of this, shall I set up a Topical for you both?

[Just C]

Originally Posted by Verity

@Just C people stretch the truth so they can be creative with what they write, similar to text battling. I enjoyed the topical, everything can be improved on obviously. As a basic story i think it did good, the facts were off but it's compromised for creativity and entertainment.

I get what you are saying. But there is stretching the truth and there is insulting the readers intelligence. I honestly don't think he came out with that to be creative. He did it because his knowledge on the subject is flawed. And that's not to be praised.

[Just C]

Originally Posted by Verity

@Just C people stretch the truth so they can be creative with what they write, similar to text battling. I enjoyed the topical, everything can be improved on obviously. As a basic story i think it did good, the facts were off but it's compromised for creativity and entertainment.

I get what you are saying. But there is stretching the truth and there is insulting the readers intelligence. I honestly don't think he came out with that to be creative. He did it because his knowledge on the subject is flawed. And that's not to be praised.

@Just C .. Thanks I Knew Someone Could Catch Ma Drift ..

So The Gauntlet Is a No Go??

@Just C .. Thanks I Knew Someone Could Catch Ma Drift ..

So The Gauntlet Is a No Go??

[Óðinn]

Originally Posted by Fiji Osa

@Intricate Skillz If You Feel That Confident That You Can "SON" Me .. There Are Ways Of Proving That Ya Words Weren't Empty So w/ That I Am Calling You Out To a DPSet Gauntlet You Gon Learn That Kids Shouldn't Approach They Dad Unless They Feel They Can Finally Beat Em .. Here Is The Gauntlet

Text:
8 - Line Text
16 - Line Text

Topical:
32 - Line Text Topical
2:00 - Audio Topical

Audio:
:45 - Audio Battle (Acca)
1:00 - Audio Battle (To Beat)

Video:
Youtube Battle - (Acca) 2 Min of Actual Barz Being Spit

Now Next Time You Cry Bout a Topical I Voted On (Which Was Not Good) Instead Of Crying To Verity Man Up And Up Ya Level .. You Ass Kid And I Wait For Your Respone

O Loser Leaves They Crew ..

Fiji? all over a Topical??
LMFAOOO.....
this whole fucking thread ooze's faggatory....

[Óðinn]

Originally Posted by Fiji Osa

@Intricate Skillz If You Feel That Confident That You Can "SON" Me .. There Are Ways Of Proving That Ya Words Weren't Empty So w/ That I Am Calling You Out To a DPSet Gauntlet You Gon Learn That Kids Shouldn't Approach They Dad Unless They Feel They Can Finally Beat Em .. Here Is The Gauntlet

Text:
8 - Line Text
16 - Line Text

Topical:
32 - Line Text Topical
2:00 - Audio Topical

Audio:
:45 - Audio Battle (Acca)
1:00 - Audio Battle (To Beat)

Video:
Youtube Battle - (Acca) 2 Min of Actual Barz Being Spit

Now Next Time You Cry Bout a Topical I Voted On (Which Was Not Good) Instead Of Crying To Verity Man Up And Up Ya Level .. You Ass Kid And I Wait For Your Respone

O Loser Leaves They Crew ..

Fiji? all over a Topical??
LMFAOOO.....
this whole fucking thread ooze's faggatory....

[IV]

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^^Naw Ya Bottom Siggy of Iceman Is ooze's faggatory....

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