LB Winter Olympics - Master-Mind vs DonoTheGod

[NelSyn]

LB Winter Olympics round 1

Master-Mind vs DonoTheGod



First to 3 votes wins.

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Check-ins due: December 28th 2011
Verses due: January 5th 2012

[NelSyn]

LB Winter Olympics round 1

Master-Mind vs DonoTheGod



First to 3 votes wins.

Voting rubric
Rhyming Scheme/Flow
Vocabulary
Topic/Meaning
Storytelling/Progression
Emotion
Poetic Techniques
Ending

35-65 lines
Check-ins due: December 28th 2011
Verses due: January 5th 2012

[Dono]

Check

Gl fuel

[Dono]

Check

Gl fuel

[Óðinn]

Checkity Check...

[Óðinn]

Checkity Check...

[Óðinn]

The 3 votes thing is bullshit IMO man...

[Óðinn]

The 3 votes thing is bullshit IMO man...

[NelSyn]

FUEL has given his spot to Master-Mind, there will be an extension by two days

[NelSyn]

FUEL has given his spot to Master-Mind, there will be an extension by two days

[Master-Mind]

2012
Lookin' out my window I see the "destruction setting clearer" bravery is just an "assumption in my era" cant believe what im seeing, finding it hard to "function as its getting nearer" my brain goes into "consussion, wish there was someone in the theatre" *hospital*.....I tried to call for help but im the "last one alive" standing on my own two feet and "grasping my pride" wondering if ill get a "chance to survive" through this whirlwind and the "wrath it provides" cant believe it, so stunned I just "laughed and I sighed" walked out my front door thats barely "hanging off the hinges" I see the devil calling guess he "had me on his hitlist" surrounded my a "dramatic fall of thin mist" what I saw left me far from "estatic, more like a form of vengeance" there I was helplessly "lurking with persistance" facing my fate given by the "whirlwind in the distance" it somehow felt like a "breath of fresh air" through this "death and despair" there was no other human being alive "blessed with the care" for the full "effects of the air" just me alone "left to prepare" my family.....i never "had the chance to say goodbye" damn this is a "dramatic way to cry" i love you all and I feel like I "need your blessing" will I ever see you again? well probably "meet in heaven" im preparing myself to experience my "last breath" when all the others are already "past death" so i walked my "last steps".....i walked past the "block that I spent my childhood" nothin left of that place but "rocks and a pile of wood" my heart "stopped and my spine shook" i feel "shocked when I try and look" next to it was a school where i "started my education" bullied to the fullest by the cold "hearted and impatient" but thanks to that I "parted with elevation" so I stood and watched it crumble... no "parts of hesitation" when my "heart and head is breaking"... the sun sets on my last "day on the planet" god you gave me a gift I hope I didnt "take it forgranted" but now im stuck here in a "place thats abandoned" mother I wish I could just see your "face but im stranted" i hate to say this world has no more "space for a grand kid" then it starts happening, buildings falling right "infront of me" I try to get away from it but the whirlwind is "outrunning me" I wanted to change the future but I "have to be in the past" cause its not too long before this whirlwind "catches me in its path" all of a sudden the floor "underneath me starts cracking" I try not to let this curse "defeate me but its happening" then my vision gets like a "TV and starts crackling" you dont wanna be a part of it "believe me its baffling" the "scene is dismantling" then the tornado "catches me and my last breath" no way of me "snatching free from the heartless death", now im trapped "this is really the end" I thought this was a nightmare this "shit was nearly pretend" now im here "fighting for my last breath" some of you will be "enlightened by my wrath death" thoughts rushed through my mind as "why this had to happen" all of a sudden I saw a flash of "white and then it blackened" my "fright turned into absense" I left to the world to "start a new rovolution" every human had to "part with their execution" hopefully one day again theyll get to "laugh to their best amusement" I dont quite understand what "made today so rotten" thousands of dead bodies "lay but never forgotten" this world held too much crime maybe this was gods "way to stop them" the worlds most "painful option" then it hit me what year it was "two thousand and twelve" the day that every human "moves out of the world" even though the whole worlds "past is abandonned" im proud to say that I was the "last one standing".....2012....."The end of the world"

[Master-Mind]

2012
Lookin' out my window I see the "destruction setting clearer" bravery is just an "assumption in my era" cant believe what im seeing, finding it hard to "function as its getting nearer" my brain goes into "consussion, wish there was someone in the theatre" *hospital*.....I tried to call for help but im the "last one alive" standing on my own two feet and "grasping my pride" wondering if ill get a "chance to survive" through this whirlwind and the "wrath it provides" cant believe it, so stunned I just "laughed and I sighed" walked out my front door thats barely "hanging off the hinges" I see the devil calling guess he "had me on his hitlist" surrounded my a "dramatic fall of thin mist" what I saw left me far from "estatic, more like a form of vengeance" there I was helplessly "lurking with persistance" facing my fate given by the "whirlwind in the distance" it somehow felt like a "breath of fresh air" through this "death and despair" there was no other human being alive "blessed with the care" for the full "effects of the air" just me alone "left to prepare" my family.....i never "had the chance to say goodbye" damn this is a "dramatic way to cry" i love you all and I feel like I "need your blessing" will I ever see you again? well probably "meet in heaven" im preparing myself to experience my "last breath" when all the others are already "past death" so i walked my "last steps".....i walked past the "block that I spent my childhood" nothin left of that place but "rocks and a pile of wood" my heart "stopped and my spine shook" i feel "shocked when I try and look" next to it was a school where i "started my education" bullied to the fullest by the cold "hearted and impatient" but thanks to that I "parted with elevation" so I stood and watched it crumble... no "parts of hesitation" when my "heart and head is breaking"... the sun sets on my last "day on the planet" god you gave me a gift I hope I didnt "take it forgranted" but now im stuck here in a "place thats abandoned" mother I wish I could just see your "face but im stranted" i hate to say this world has no more "space for a grand kid" then it starts happening, buildings falling right "infront of me" I try to get away from it but the whirlwind is "outrunning me" I wanted to change the future but I "have to be in the past" cause its not too long before this whirlwind "catches me in its path" all of a sudden the floor "underneath me starts cracking" I try not to let this curse "defeate me but its happening" then my vision gets like a "TV and starts crackling" you dont wanna be a part of it "believe me its baffling" the "scene is dismantling" then the tornado "catches me and my last breath" no way of me "snatching free from the heartless death", now im trapped "this is really the end" I thought this was a nightmare this "shit was nearly pretend" now im here "fighting for my last breath" some of you will be "enlightened by my wrath death" thoughts rushed through my mind as "why this had to happen" all of a sudden I saw a flash of "white and then it blackened" my "fright turned into absense" I left to the world to "start a new rovolution" every human had to "part with their execution" hopefully one day again theyll get to "laugh to their best amusement" I dont quite understand what "made today so rotten" thousands of dead bodies "lay but never forgotten" this world held too much crime maybe this was gods "way to stop them" the worlds most "painful option" then it hit me what year it was "two thousand and twelve" the day that every human "moves out of the world" even though the whole worlds "past is abandonned" im proud to say that I was the "last one standing".....2012....."The end of the world"

[NelSyn]

^^ No mean to sway but tooo dooppppe.

[NelSyn]

^^ No mean to sway but tooo dooppppe.

[Dono]

Yo, you should send out messages for this shit. I had no idea it was back on.

Also, nice shit for your first drop.

I'll be back with something tomorrow.

[Dono]

Yo, you should send out messages for this shit. I had no idea it was back on.

Also, nice shit for your first drop.

I'll be back with something tomorrow.

[NelSyn]

^^I must've forgot to send PM's for topical. I know I sent them for Scheme and Reg.

[NelSyn]

^^I must've forgot to send PM's for topical. I know I sent them for Scheme and Reg.

[Dono]

Aint no thing, just thought it was closed up. I woulda cought the L just for lackin knowing that you replaced 2fuel.

[Dono]

Aint no thing, just thought it was closed up. I woulda cought the L just for lackin knowing that you replaced 2fuel.