RULE's One Bar Feedback Thread

[RULE]

RULE's One Bar Feedback Thread


Simply this is what you do: Post ONE bar (no more than two lines in a regular text box) and i'll give you my critques on it. So it probably makes sense to post a bar thats typical of your usual standard and style. Also a brief bit of info that relates to the bar (Opponents name, personal references etc etc) would be helpful.


Just one bar per person please, remember im here to give my opinion, not to berate or belittle anyone.


RULEISM's

I have some phrases i use that might not be understood so i'll explain them here


Ghost bar: A bar so flawed in its execution and premise that i'd consider it a 0/10

Insult-Worthy: A concept that actually isnt an insult. It sounds strange but it happens often.

Bar Relevancy: When a bar has a theme or topic that is consistant in it.

Soft-Syllable: A syllable that is pronounced softly and therefore can clash when paired with a solid syllable.



Holla!

[RULE]

RULE's One Bar Feedback Thread


Simply this is what you do: Post ONE bar (no more than two lines in a regular text box) and i'll give you my critques on it. So it probably makes sense to post a bar thats typical of your usual standard and style. Also a brief bit of info that relates to the bar (Opponents name, personal references etc etc) would be helpful.


Just one bar per person please, remember im here to give my opinion, not to berate or belittle anyone.


RULEISM's

I have some phrases i use that might not be understood so i'll explain them here


Ghost bar: A bar so flawed in its execution and premise that i'd consider it a 0/10

Insult-Worthy: A concept that actually isnt an insult. It sounds strange but it happens often.

Bar Relevancy: When a bar has a theme or topic that is consistant in it.

Soft-Syllable: A syllable that is pronounced softly and therefore can clash when paired with a solid syllable.



Holla!