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Unread 02-12-2014, 08:46 PM
Hubert Cumberdale
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^I don't know if you still do, but you ALWAYS used reference wordplay.

"Get a C? Nah you Shame Us like WWE Wrestlers"

That's a horrific example, but it pretty much makes sense the way I wrote it.

"Get a Cena you Sheamus like WWE Wrestlers"

That makes absolutely fuck all scene. Wordplay ALWAYS has to make sense both ways.

"Not even CSI would look to Finger Prince"

Okay, grammatically it's not the best, but this is an example from me Vs Prince S Tana. The sentence works together above. The wordplay is what will make the metaphor work, but generally the sentence is structured in a way that can be said is understandable.

"Not even CSI would look to Finger Prints"

I made sure Prince/Prints worked in every accent before posting that kind of WP . But this way also comes off like a normal sentence. There's probably 5 million MUCH better examples out there, but this is off the top.

Wordplay has to come off like a normal sentence both ways you say it. You can't just throw in random things which sound like other things and call it wordplay.

People are out there spitting shit like this...

I fill his centre like a PARIS LANDMARK (Eiffel).

The fuck does Eiffel his centre mean?

Dono's verse was covered in this stuff, which I believe stems from mainly R:ican, then Pulse, and now Dissizit and Grizz.

Also, I want to know how you managed to make that "You: Are Gay" stupid misplaced ":" sign work all across the site R:ic. It is COMPLETELY the wrong place to put that sign, yet seemingly you've got every cunt doing it.
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^I don't know if you still do, but you ALWAYS used reference wordplay.

"Get a C? Nah you Shame Us like WWE Wrestlers"

That's a horrific example, but it pretty much makes sense the way I wrote it.

"Get a Cena you Sheamus like WWE Wrestlers"

That makes absolutely fuck all scene. Wordplay ALWAYS has to make sense both ways.

"Not even CSI would look to Finger Prince"

Okay, grammatically it's not the best, but this is an example from me Vs Prince S Tana. The sentence works together above. The wordplay is what will make the metaphor work, but generally the sentence is structured in a way that can be said is understandable.

"Not even CSI would look to Finger Prints"

I made sure Prince/Prints worked in every accent before posting that kind of WP . But this way also comes off like a normal sentence. There's probably 5 million MUCH better examples out there, but this is off the top.

Wordplay has to come off like a normal sentence both ways you say it. You can't just throw in random things which sound like other things and call it wordplay.

People are out there spitting shit like this...

I fill his centre like a PARIS LANDMARK (Eiffel).

The fuck does Eiffel his centre mean?

Dono's verse was covered in this stuff, which I believe stems from mainly R:ican, then Pulse, and now Dissizit and Grizz.

Also, I want to know how you managed to make that "You: Are Gay" stupid misplaced ":" sign work all across the site R:ic. It is COMPLETELY the wrong place to put that sign, yet seemingly you've got every cunt doing it.
 
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