2013 GC: RD2 - Bnas Vs ELOH_STACKz(ELOH_STACKz wins 3-0)

Both were good pieces.
Bnas: You treated this more like a cypher in my opinion. I lot of wordplay and metaphors throughout. But a lot of your lines were stretched with syllables and it made your flow mad choppy. I like the different approach but I felt a story could of been a lot better. I felt you had some story going on but it wasnt fleshed out completely.

Elo: You came good this time. The flow, the imagery, the story was good. Overall a solid piece. I feel if you step up the vocab and maybe work on putting more depth into the story, it would be rock solid overall. But as for topical goes, I'd say this was a good 6.

MVGT: Eloh

Both were good pieces.
Bnas: You treated this more like a cypher in my opinion. I lot of wordplay and metaphors throughout. But a lot of your lines were stretched with syllables and it made your flow mad choppy. I like the different approach but I felt a story could of been a lot better. I felt you had some story going on but it wasnt fleshed out completely.

Elo: You came good this time. The flow, the imagery, the story was good. Overall a solid piece. I feel if you step up the vocab and maybe work on putting more depth into the story, it would be rock solid overall. But as for topical goes, I'd say this was a good 6.

MVGT: Eloh