Lack of Patience

[InCizion]

Our minds decapitation is a lack of patience
Strife is a relapse in cadence as we attack changes
Because were strapped hatin facts that’s adjacent
Hate is ancient, scathing at who acts complacent
Life’s arrangements get left fast in the basement
Fates detainments try to laugh & yet are trapped cases
Past the gates are all races, White, brown & black faces
The last grace is religion trying to dispatch its traces
Politicians are rats, evasive and will distract bases
Facts, and traces, erase cats who act persuasive
Some get clapped and faceless cast in rat mazes
Whacked & traceless, Tasteless crap will hack aces
Contracts and evasions collapsed to smack aimless
Tracked are our pages of bloody combats and races

SO NOW

The basics are missin and the racists are trippin
Rape is when a person’s mission will aid his vision
Paid is wisdom, get caught trippin, it’s a 8 bid in prison
It’s a waste kids are slippin, we’ve all faced its description
So craved kids listen! Or get encased with InCizions
Earth’s laced with prescriptions, hurt takes its inflictions
A cursed fate is friction so the curse rakes in addiction
The term bakes in his kitchen, worms, snakes & exorcisms
The Church makes commissions but is worth faiths envision
Fates indecision will dictate omission of misplaced ambition
Man’s fishin 4 truths subscription with his displaced mannerisms
That damned inner system is what’s at hand like winters chisim
Man will splinter victims & timber plans as the inventors of Division
Mentors to fiction, tempers have risen, and now embers glisten

[InCizion]

Our minds decapitation is a lack of patience
Strife is a relapse in cadence as we attack changes
Because were strapped hatin facts that’s adjacent
Hate is ancient, scathing at who acts complacent
Life’s arrangements get left fast in the basement
Fates detainments try to laugh & yet are trapped cases
Past the gates are all races, White, brown & black faces
The last grace is religion trying to dispatch its traces
Politicians are rats, evasive and will distract bases
Facts, and traces, erase cats who act persuasive
Some get clapped and faceless cast in rat mazes
Whacked & traceless, Tasteless crap will hack aces
Contracts and evasions collapsed to smack aimless
Tracked are our pages of bloody combats and races

SO NOW

The basics are missin and the racists are trippin
Rape is when a person’s mission will aid his vision
Paid is wisdom, get caught trippin, it’s a 8 bid in prison
It’s a waste kids are slippin, we’ve all faced its description
So craved kids listen! Or get encased with InCizions
Earth’s laced with prescriptions, hurt takes its inflictions
A cursed fate is friction so the curse rakes in addiction
The term bakes in his kitchen, worms, snakes & exorcisms
The Church makes commissions but is worth faiths envision
Fates indecision will dictate omission of misplaced ambition
Man’s fishin 4 truths subscription with his displaced mannerisms
That damned inner system is what’s at hand like winters chisim
Man will splinter victims & timber plans as the inventors of Division
Mentors to fiction, tempers have risen, and now embers glisten

Not bad. Wording was a little off in places, and the syllable count was fairly off in a lot of places. The meaning however, and the story, were quite good. Good piece right here.

Not bad. Wording was a little off in places, and the syllable count was fairly off in a lot of places. The meaning however, and the story, were quite good. Good piece right here.

this is dope, I like the flow and the variety of grammar n the way you painted the picture was on point too.

this is dope, I like the flow and the variety of grammar n the way you painted the picture was on point too.

[Eye G]

You're picture was great...Just match the syllables you're golden like a morning orange compass..

[Eye G]

You're picture was great...Just match the syllables you're golden like a morning orange compass..

[InCizion]

Originally Posted by Eye G

You're picture was great...Just match the syllables you're golden like a morning orange compass..

Thanks for the read.... I don't always agree about matching the sylables... when spit right it flows throughout..... Different actualling spitting these drops than just writing for others to read....

[InCizion]

Originally Posted by Eye G

You're picture was great...Just match the syllables you're golden like a morning orange compass..

Thanks for the read.... I don't always agree about matching the sylables... when spit right it flows throughout..... Different actualling spitting these drops than just writing for others to read....