this tournament sucks

[RULE]

Originally Posted by Louie Dawgs

Maybe, but half those dudes got a flow worse than RULE, and he's WAS the king of broken ass wording. .

ftfy louie.

[RULE]

Originally Posted by Louie Dawgs

Maybe, but half those dudes got a flow worse than RULE, and he's WAS the king of broken ass wording. .

ftfy louie.

[Louie Dawgs]

Did you fix it?? I'm skeptical.

[Louie Dawgs]

Did you fix it?? I'm skeptical.

[RULE]

Originally Posted by Louie Dawgs

Did you fix it?? I'm skeptical.

Send over an 8 and find out old buddy.

[RULE]

Originally Posted by Louie Dawgs

Did you fix it?? I'm skeptical.

Send over an 8 and find out old buddy.

[Apollyon]

Originally Posted by GRizzEAT

tbh, not eincludin me... but AT,HVK, SWISH, STREETZ, PHE, MOLLY, GG, BOOK, N DIZZ wud work u out Lou. n thats 100.

Yeah i'd KO him quick..

[Apollyon]

Originally Posted by GRizzEAT

tbh, not eincludin me... but AT,HVK, SWISH, STREETZ, PHE, MOLLY, GG, BOOK, N DIZZ wud work u out Lou. n thats 100.

Yeah i'd KO him quick..

[GRizzEAT]

lolz, s'word... i think audio is where niggas shud be harsh as fuk on wordin.... in that text box...flow is dope n cadence but i think puns win tha battle... but WORDIN is tha key... like u said. ionkno...preference is all it is. eitherway, it may not be EVERTHING U WANT IN A TOURNEY due to allllll tha 2010-2012 heads in there...but fuk it, its tha best LB has to offer atm. n i personally think its tha forward motion.

[GRizzEAT]

lolz, s'word... i think audio is where niggas shud be harsh as fuk on wordin.... in that text box...flow is dope n cadence but i think puns win tha battle... but WORDIN is tha key... like u said. ionkno...preference is all it is. eitherway, it may not be EVERTHING U WANT IN A TOURNEY due to allllll tha 2010-2012 heads in there...but fuk it, its tha best LB has to offer atm. n i personally think its tha forward motion.

[Louie Dawgs]

Originally Posted by Phenomonon

Yeah i'd KO him quick..

Dude, I ain't even tryna diss, but no. I seen your last tournament battle, and it wasn't that great. Plus, it was broken, some parts were hard to read.

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Originally Posted by GRizzEAT

lolz, s'word... i think audio is where niggas shud be harsh as fuk on wordin.... in that text box...flow is dope n cadence but i think puns win tha battle... but WORDIN is tha key... like u said. ionkno...preference is all it is. eitherway, it may not be EVERTHING U WANT IN A TOURNEY due to allllll tha 2010-2012 heads in there...but fuk it, its tha best LB has to offer atm. n i personally think its tha forward motion.

I ain't even tryna argue the point that its about puns and ideas, but when dudes say shit that don't even make sense it ruins the whole verse. How you supposed to like something when it even sounds fucking stupid or unnatural. I know its text and won't be perfect, but some shit barely sounds like English.

[Louie Dawgs]

Originally Posted by Phenomonon

Yeah i'd KO him quick..

Dude, I ain't even tryna diss, but no. I seen your last tournament battle, and it wasn't that great. Plus, it was broken, some parts were hard to read.

---------- Post added at 11:38 AM ---------- Previous post was at 11:34 AM ----------

Originally Posted by GRizzEAT

lolz, s'word... i think audio is where niggas shud be harsh as fuk on wordin.... in that text box...flow is dope n cadence but i think puns win tha battle... but WORDIN is tha key... like u said. ionkno...preference is all it is. eitherway, it may not be EVERTHING U WANT IN A TOURNEY due to allllll tha 2010-2012 heads in there...but fuk it, its tha best LB has to offer atm. n i personally think its tha forward motion.

I ain't even tryna argue the point that its about puns and ideas, but when dudes say shit that don't even make sense it ruins the whole verse. How you supposed to like something when it even sounds fucking stupid or unnatural. I know its text and won't be perfect, but some shit barely sounds like English.

[Apollyon]

Originally Posted by Louie Dawgs

Dude, I ain't even tryna diss, but no. I seen your last tournament battle, and it wasn't that great. Plus, it was broken, some parts were hard to read.

lmao.. Hard to read huh?? Sounds like a personal problem.. A mind is a terrible thing to waste and that verse was better then anything you've written.. Not trying to diss though lol..

[Apollyon]

Originally Posted by Louie Dawgs

Dude, I ain't even tryna diss, but no. I seen your last tournament battle, and it wasn't that great. Plus, it was broken, some parts were hard to read.

lmao.. Hard to read huh?? Sounds like a personal problem.. A mind is a terrible thing to waste and that verse was better then anything you've written.. Not trying to diss though lol..

[Louie Dawgs]

It was broken. some shit didn't even make sense. I've been on this shit for a long ass time, and I know how to read a verse. Shit like, "you ain't got bars to wreck me or to squander". The fuck?? read that again. Does that sound like something you would actually say??? does that sound like regular English?? To wreck me or to squander?? I had to stop reading there, shit was painful.

What does it even mean?? He doesn't have bars to squander?? The fuck does this have to do with battling you?? Its just in there to rhyme, its nonsense. You have to word it to at least make sense. Way too much of this going on.

It has to be readable and make sense before it can be good.

[Louie Dawgs]

It was broken. some shit didn't even make sense. I've been on this shit for a long ass time, and I know how to read a verse. Shit like, "you ain't got bars to wreck me or to squander". The fuck?? read that again. Does that sound like something you would actually say??? does that sound like regular English?? To wreck me or to squander?? I had to stop reading there, shit was painful.

What does it even mean?? He doesn't have bars to squander?? The fuck does this have to do with battling you?? Its just in there to rhyme, its nonsense. You have to word it to at least make sense. Way too much of this going on.

It has to be readable and make sense before it can be good.

[J u s T C]

Originally Posted by Louie Dawgs

"you ain't got bars to wreck me or to squander". The fuck?? read that again. Does that sound like something you would actually say??? does that sound like regular English?? To wreck me or to squander??


What does it even mean?? He doesn't have bars to squander?? The fuck does this have to do with battling you?? Its just in there to rhyme, its nonsense.
It has to be readable and make sense before it can be good.

truth.

[J u s T C]

Originally Posted by Louie Dawgs

"you ain't got bars to wreck me or to squander". The fuck?? read that again. Does that sound like something you would actually say??? does that sound like regular English?? To wreck me or to squander??


What does it even mean?? He doesn't have bars to squander?? The fuck does this have to do with battling you?? Its just in there to rhyme, its nonsense.
It has to be readable and make sense before it can be good.

truth.

[Obey]

@Louie Dawgs - This is all your opinion. You do realize people read verses in different ways right? Not everyone reads at the same pace, or with the same accent, or even with the same ''use/type'' of vocabulary. So please keep the ignorant comments to yourself.

[Obey]

@Louie Dawgs - This is all your opinion. You do realize people read verses in different ways right? Not everyone reads at the same pace, or with the same accent, or even with the same ''use/type'' of vocabulary. So please keep the ignorant comments to yourself.