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Unread 12-11-2012, 07:15 PM
John Dos
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Default "Gone in a day"
https://soundcloud.com/dosage904/gone-in-a-day

All feedback is appreciated. Also if you have any new music drop the links right here I'll check it out.

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check it out ya'll. you won't be disappointed.

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ya'll are missing out yo real talk.
Last edited by John Dos; 12-11-2012 at 06:56 PM. Reason: @RULE, @Erupt, @Mind Fuck
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Unread 12-11-2012, 07:15 PM   #1
 
John Dos
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Estimated Skill in Text: 8.35/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 8.35/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 8.35/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 8.35/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 8.35/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 8.35/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 8.35/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.9/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.9/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.9/10 stars
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184 Won / 131 Lost
 
Join Date: Mar 2009
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Posts: 4,955
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Tagged: 3 Thread(s)
Default "Gone in a day"
https://soundcloud.com/dosage904/gone-in-a-day

All feedback is appreciated. Also if you have any new music drop the links right here I'll check it out.

---------- Post added at 06:32 PM ---------- Previous post was at 06:06 PM ----------

check it out ya'll. you won't be disappointed.

---------- Post added at 07:15 PM ---------- Previous post was at 06:32 PM ----------

ya'll are missing out yo real talk.
Last edited by John Dos; 12-11-2012 at 06:56 PM. Reason: @RULE, @Erupt, @Mind Fuck
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Unread 12-11-2012, 07:24 PM
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get at me on facebook.

http://www.facebook.com/vandahl.oner
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Unread 12-11-2012, 07:24 PM   #2
 
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get at me on facebook.

http://www.facebook.com/vandahl.oner
 
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  #3  
Unread 12-11-2012, 07:28 PM
John Dos
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ight i will. feedback though? lol
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Unread 12-11-2012, 07:28 PM   #3
 
John Dos
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ight i will. feedback though? lol
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Unread 12-11-2012, 09:10 PM
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best track you've made


critique:

imo u gotta do something about your voice

shit doesnt cut through the beat and make me listen
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Unread 12-11-2012, 09:10 PM   #4
 
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best track you've made


critique:

imo u gotta do something about your voice

shit doesnt cut through the beat and make me listen
 
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  #5  
Unread 12-11-2012, 09:16 PM
John Dos
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lol idk what I can do to change it but ok.
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Unread 12-11-2012, 09:16 PM   #5
 
John Dos
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lol idk what I can do to change it but ok.
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Unread 12-11-2012, 09:17 PM
Erupt da Monsta
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24 Won / 4 Lost
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experiment with diff flows........ sound like you actually enjoy this ish bro
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Unread 12-11-2012, 09:17 PM   #6
 
Erupt da Monsta
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64 Won / 16 Lost
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experiment with diff flows........ sound like you actually enjoy this ish bro
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Unread 12-11-2012, 11:02 PM
John Dos
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184 Won / 131 Lost
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lol I do enjoy it. thanks for the good feedback though i'll take the advice.

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upping for more feedback. thanks
Last edited by John Dos; 12-11-2012 at 09:32 PM.
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Unread 12-11-2012, 11:02 PM   #7
 
John Dos
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lol I do enjoy it. thanks for the good feedback though i'll take the advice.

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upping for more feedback. thanks
Last edited by John Dos; 12-11-2012 at 09:32 PM.
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Unread 12-12-2012, 08:11 PM
John Dos
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uppin for feedback. appreciate it people
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Unread 12-12-2012, 08:11 PM   #8
 
John Dos
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184 Won / 131 Lost
 
Join Date: Mar 2009
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uppin for feedback. appreciate it people
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