Crew? Check this.. - Lets Beef

#1 05-26-2012, 06:29 AM

http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=lb&id=571886

I need a crew, I'll let you be the judge. ^^

05-26-2012, 06:29 AM

http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=lb&id=571886

I need a crew, I'll let you be the judge. ^^

**Phil Banks** · #2 05-26-2012, 01:10 PM

need to work on your delivery with the writtens.... got some cool concepts couple lines i liked somewhat.... keep battling you'll get better the more you write as far as crews... they'll hit u up once u make a lil noise

**Phil Banks** · 05-26-2012, 01:10 PM

need to work on your delivery with the writtens.... got some cool concepts couple lines i liked somewhat.... keep battling you'll get better the more you write as far as crews... they'll hit u up once u make a lil noise

#3 05-26-2012, 01:52 PM

thanks ill keep doing work. just gettin the hang of things

05-26-2012, 01:52 PM

thanks ill keep doing work. just gettin the hang of things

✍FoeCoe™ · #4 05-26-2012, 04:37 PM

not enough hard hitting punches & metaphors arent really connecting,

✍FoeCoe™ · 05-26-2012, 04:37 PM

not enough hard hitting punches & metaphors arent really connecting,

#5 05-26-2012, 04:42 PM

why are you talking about what i need to do.. when i've beatin you like 4 times this week, no hate just don't see how you could help me lol, by repeating what dude said above you? lol.

05-26-2012, 04:42 PM

why are you talking about what i need to do.. when i've beatin you like 4 times this week, no hate just don't see how you could help me lol, by repeating what dude said above you? lol.

**Phil Banks** · #6 05-26-2012, 07:23 PM

nah some of ya metaphors are worded weird... hard to really tell u what i don't like main thing was delivery after your fart line u got a lil less potent with it before that u was doing it... i dunno if u need any help get at me though

**Phil Banks** · 05-26-2012, 07:23 PM

nah some of ya metaphors are worded weird... hard to really tell u what i don't like main thing was delivery after your fart line u got a lil less potent with it before that u was doing it... i dunno if u need any help get at me though

✍FoeCoe™ · #7 05-29-2012, 01:21 PM

...Err body know that I wasn't even trying on to battlez... lilwayne voice , lil b voice , and Bnas voice... i waz just bored so I posted random shit..... and u still sucked you can't write fo shit ur style is weak and u should just quit rapping 4real

✍FoeCoe™ · 05-29-2012, 01:21 PM

...Err body know that I wasn't even trying on to battlez... lilwayne voice , lil b voice , and Bnas voice... i waz just bored so I posted random shit..... and u still sucked you can't write fo shit ur style is weak and u should just quit rapping 4real


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