Killz's Scheme Verse

[Phroxen]

@Killz no no no. See. This is fucked up. I honestly don't think that the MAJORITY of this site really understands multies/schemes/rhyming in general. The use of stressed and unstressed syllables and why and how you can use them. Maybe that's why I didn't understand this "sparTIC" inside joke going around, because a fucking idiot made it up.. if it refers to what I'm thinking.

Originally Posted by Itz Killz

@Phro...cmon, b...uncapping a portion of a multi set is different than what i did how?

lol...dont underestimate readers yo...if it flows (and it does) niggas gon read it the same way

Uncapping a portion of a multi set.. smh. I'm on a broken phone typing this so I don't have time to thoroughly explain what you did wrong and why it was wrong.

Basically it boils down to this. You can't show me three syllables that rhymed in your verse. Wanna know why? You posted a very lazy 4-syll that only RHYMES TWO SOUNDS. You rhymed two sounds. Not three, not four, but TWO. Your first and last rhymed. Everything in between the first and last were unstressed, unemphasized, unimportant syllables. This is why you lost.. three syllables was so hard, you reverted to two and threw fluff in the middle and I, among others, wasn't impressed. Your actual verse, its content, its flow, & its structure we're pretty polished. The scheme was lackluster for the reasons above.

[Phroxen]

@Killz no no no. See. This is fucked up. I honestly don't think that the MAJORITY of this site really understands multies/schemes/rhyming in general. The use of stressed and unstressed syllables and why and how you can use them. Maybe that's why I didn't understand this "sparTIC" inside joke going around, because a fucking idiot made it up.. if it refers to what I'm thinking.

Originally Posted by Itz Killz

@Phro...cmon, b...uncapping a portion of a multi set is different than what i did how?

lol...dont underestimate readers yo...if it flows (and it does) niggas gon read it the same way

Uncapping a portion of a multi set.. smh. I'm on a broken phone typing this so I don't have time to thoroughly explain what you did wrong and why it was wrong.

Basically it boils down to this. You can't show me three syllables that rhymed in your verse. Wanna know why? You posted a very lazy 4-syll that only RHYMES TWO SOUNDS. You rhymed two sounds. Not three, not four, but TWO. Your first and last rhymed. Everything in between the first and last were unstressed, unemphasized, unimportant syllables. This is why you lost.. three syllables was so hard, you reverted to two and threw fluff in the middle and I, among others, wasn't impressed. Your actual verse, its content, its flow, & its structure we're pretty polished. The scheme was lackluster for the reasons above.

[Murderous Swag]

Originally Posted by Shimotokatate

http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=lb&id=565744
@Itz Killz @Just C ..............1.Will someone delete that 7-4 bullshit vote and 2.will u both kindly drop one on it also

Don't forget

[Murderous Swag]

Originally Posted by Shimotokatate

http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=lb&id=565744
@Itz Killz @Just C ..............1.Will someone delete that 7-4 bullshit vote and 2.will u both kindly drop one on it also

Don't forget

[Just C]

It all rhymed to me, in my head and out loud so that's all that matters. Not getting into this English class. He used a higher syllable count and that's the base crux of the argument. Nothing else matters at this point.

[Just C]

It all rhymed to me, in my head and out loud so that's all that matters. Not getting into this English class. He used a higher syllable count and that's the base crux of the argument. Nothing else matters at this point.

[Krhyme Killz]

nah i cant Just...cant moderate my own shit...but forreal at this point it see that niggas wanna toss me on some bullshit

[Krhyme Killz]

nah i cant Just...cant moderate my own shit...but forreal at this point it see that niggas wanna toss me on some bullshit

[Murderous Swag]

Lol you fucking mods stop overlooking my posts shit aint but 3mins of ya time shiet

[Murderous Swag]

Lol you fucking mods stop overlooking my posts shit aint but 3mins of ya time shiet

[Phroxen]

@Just C No, it doesn't rhyme, it flows. There is a difference between rhyming and flowing.. and that's why Killz is a beast at audio and (usually) in text.. but he fucked up here. If this really needs further explanation, I'll be glad to help. I can make this cut and dry. I honestly don't care if my vote stays or not. This isn't bullshit bashing. It was a misunderstanding that led to a let down.

[Phroxen]

@Just C No, it doesn't rhyme, it flows. There is a difference between rhyming and flowing.. and that's why Killz is a beast at audio and (usually) in text.. but he fucked up here. If this really needs further explanation, I'll be glad to help. I can make this cut and dry. I honestly don't care if my vote stays or not. This isn't bullshit bashing. It was a misunderstanding that led to a let down.

[IV]

@Just C @Itz Killz if we didn't say anything the chances are people would vote for your better verse and green name without realising you broke the rules.. Although, to be fair you did lie on your own battle by saying it was 3 syllable minimum so that's sway in itself by saying your verse was plausible when it wasn't

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Also Hitman said the said as Vit and I

[IV]

@Just C @Itz Killz if we didn't say anything the chances are people would vote for your better verse and green name without realising you broke the rules.. Although, to be fair you did lie on your own battle by saying it was 3 syllable minimum so that's sway in itself by saying your verse was plausible when it wasn't

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Also Hitman said the said as Vit and I

[Erupt da Monsta]

Tbh here, this is a scheme battle, following the rules of the scheme is priority number one, if it says 3 syllables, thats what it should be, WIT THAT SAID, if Rhet gave killz the go ahead on the longer scheme then it should be okay, but, i dont see rhet doin that, if its not 3 minimum, which i had a hard time believin when killz posted it in the battle, then yeah, but the rules were broken, mainly because the main point of this tourney is to follow simple instructions... bein that savage followed the rules.. he should win, i will say i almost didnt even realize killz did four syllables until after i voted, i just couldnt see killz makin that mistake, but it is what it is, most important rule was broken, win gos to savage .

[Erupt da Monsta]

Tbh here, this is a scheme battle, following the rules of the scheme is priority number one, if it says 3 syllables, thats what it should be, WIT THAT SAID, if Rhet gave killz the go ahead on the longer scheme then it should be okay, but, i dont see rhet doin that, if its not 3 minimum, which i had a hard time believin when killz posted it in the battle, then yeah, but the rules were broken, mainly because the main point of this tourney is to follow simple instructions... bein that savage followed the rules.. he should win, i will say i almost didnt even realize killz did four syllables until after i voted, i just couldnt see killz makin that mistake, but it is what it is, most important rule was broken, win gos to savage .

[ViTRiOL]

@Itz Killz, it's plain to see man, you have no excuses. I have no idea why you're pulling the fact that you asked questions in the official thread. You got a plethora of answers saying no/you will be DQ'd/that's unacceptable, how in the hell does that justify your actions in the battle? If someone did tell you that it was a minimum of 3 syllables, then they screwed you over.

C'mon man, just take it on the chin. At least you didn't fuck up as bad as MF did, haha.

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Yeah, I apologise for the sway comments, but even so, that's irrelevant. This is an auto-win by default in my eyes... Fuck the arguing, just wait 'til Rhet gets here.

[ViTRiOL]

@Itz Killz, it's plain to see man, you have no excuses. I have no idea why you're pulling the fact that you asked questions in the official thread. You got a plethora of answers saying no/you will be DQ'd/that's unacceptable, how in the hell does that justify your actions in the battle? If someone did tell you that it was a minimum of 3 syllables, then they screwed you over.

C'mon man, just take it on the chin. At least you didn't fuck up as bad as MF did, haha.

---------- Post added at 03:43 PM ---------- Previous post was at 03:42 PM ----------

Yeah, I apologise for the sway comments, but even so, that's irrelevant. This is an auto-win by default in my eyes... Fuck the arguing, just wait 'til Rhet gets here.

[Just C]

Phroxen did Killz post a 4 CAPPED scheme?

For the purpose of your vote I understand what you're saying.

But for the purpose of this thread it doesn't matter if he rhymed or not.

The point is the rules stated 3 syllables. Not 3 rhyming syllables.

He can post FUCKED YOUR MOM n the SEX WAS SWEET n he wouldn't have broken any rules it would just make him an in capable texter.

Please let's try to keep this on topic.

[Just C]

Phroxen did Killz post a 4 CAPPED scheme?

For the purpose of your vote I understand what you're saying.

But for the purpose of this thread it doesn't matter if he rhymed or not.

The point is the rules stated 3 syllables. Not 3 rhyming syllables.

He can post FUCKED YOUR MOM n the SEX WAS SWEET n he wouldn't have broken any rules it would just make him an in capable texter.

Please let's try to keep this on topic.