Wow.

[Lizman]

Originally Posted by Phroxen

3 puns to 1? smh.



Under the Surface.. a "reef" is under the surface. Reef also being his name. Also, under the surface meaning getting under your skin.

Nerve.on.a. pun = Nirvana pun (his avatar). Also, getting under the surface is the same as "hitting a nerve". Also, saying "the first shot is done" referring to how Kurt Cobain killed himself with one shot, makes the phrase "nerve.on.a pun" an actual pun. So "come atcha personally" is attacking his personal avatar.

Musta just purchased a drink if you're saying "reef ill"... as in the only time I'll hear him say that, he's actually asking for a "refill". Also, tying into "first shot is done".. shot as in liquor.

Then the allergic punch.

All of that versus a decent palm reader punch and two other VERY soft plays on words sprinkled with fictional gunplay.





Yeah.. I'm still not seeing it.

That Is A Long Expo
And Nobody Sees What You Are Seeing
Wow... You Must Feel Like A Hypocrite Right About Now

---------- Post added at 06:53 PM ---------- Previous post was at 06:52 PM ----------

Originally Posted by Verity

Expo - people are stupid.

That's no hate to either of you, i didn't even vote on the battle haha but in general, a lot of dope stuff is missed because simply; people are stupid.

Another Hypocrite

---------- Post added at 06:55 PM ---------- Previous post was at 06:53 PM ----------

Originally Posted by Phroxen

Not taking anything away from reefer, because I think he's one of the more talented kids on this site..... but saying that this:



beat this:




..is pretty fucking ridiculous.


Out of courtesy, I'd like to see those who voted against me explain why they did.. because I've read these over and over, and I'm not seeing how that bar beat mine. Maybe people needed expo's or something.. but no one asked for one, so.. I don't know.

Your Uh Bar.... Wasn't That Good To Be Perfectly Honest
Reefers Wasn't That Much Better. And The Palm Line Is Overly Played

---------- Post added at 06:57 PM ---------- Previous post was at 06:55 PM ----------

Originally Posted by Black-Book

Ok I'll admit I personally missed the Nirvana part. But Reef under water is played & I'm not saying you had a bad bar. It was good, but Reef was better. You lost by 90 something %, so it is what it is. Don't make a big deal about it cuz it'll reflect poorly on you. Just trying to help.

That Line Is Complete Bullshit

---------- Post added at 06:58 PM ---------- Previous post was at 06:57 PM ----------

Originally Posted by O_B MedaForce

it's a fucking battle, not an essay. when i read battles, i want the punch and wordplay to come straight at me, and have that WOW!!!!! factor. i hate when im reading some battles and there's always that one guy that tries to fit in a gazillion concepts and wordplay into one bar. Reefer had that more entertaining and WHOA! bar. Phroxen, your nice and shit, but you gotta calm down and simplify your wordplay and concepts sometimes... know what i mean?

Eh...
So Anyway

---------- Post added at 06:59 PM ---------- Previous post was at 06:58 PM ----------

Originally Posted by Tyler McFly

Fight for what you believe in Phroxen.... Show no mercy.

Another Hypocrite
Wow, You People Are So Easy To Spot

[Lizman]

Originally Posted by Phroxen

3 puns to 1? smh.



Under the Surface.. a "reef" is under the surface. Reef also being his name. Also, under the surface meaning getting under your skin.

Nerve.on.a. pun = Nirvana pun (his avatar). Also, getting under the surface is the same as "hitting a nerve". Also, saying "the first shot is done" referring to how Kurt Cobain killed himself with one shot, makes the phrase "nerve.on.a pun" an actual pun. So "come atcha personally" is attacking his personal avatar.

Musta just purchased a drink if you're saying "reef ill"... as in the only time I'll hear him say that, he's actually asking for a "refill". Also, tying into "first shot is done".. shot as in liquor.

Then the allergic punch.

All of that versus a decent palm reader punch and two other VERY soft plays on words sprinkled with fictional gunplay.





Yeah.. I'm still not seeing it.

That Is A Long Expo
And Nobody Sees What You Are Seeing
Wow... You Must Feel Like A Hypocrite Right About Now

---------- Post added at 06:53 PM ---------- Previous post was at 06:52 PM ----------

Originally Posted by Verity

Expo - people are stupid.

That's no hate to either of you, i didn't even vote on the battle haha but in general, a lot of dope stuff is missed because simply; people are stupid.

Another Hypocrite

---------- Post added at 06:55 PM ---------- Previous post was at 06:53 PM ----------

Originally Posted by Phroxen

Not taking anything away from reefer, because I think he's one of the more talented kids on this site..... but saying that this:



beat this:




..is pretty fucking ridiculous.


Out of courtesy, I'd like to see those who voted against me explain why they did.. because I've read these over and over, and I'm not seeing how that bar beat mine. Maybe people needed expo's or something.. but no one asked for one, so.. I don't know.

Your Uh Bar.... Wasn't That Good To Be Perfectly Honest
Reefers Wasn't That Much Better. And The Palm Line Is Overly Played

---------- Post added at 06:57 PM ---------- Previous post was at 06:55 PM ----------

Originally Posted by Black-Book

Ok I'll admit I personally missed the Nirvana part. But Reef under water is played & I'm not saying you had a bad bar. It was good, but Reef was better. You lost by 90 something %, so it is what it is. Don't make a big deal about it cuz it'll reflect poorly on you. Just trying to help.

That Line Is Complete Bullshit

---------- Post added at 06:58 PM ---------- Previous post was at 06:57 PM ----------

Originally Posted by O_B MedaForce

it's a fucking battle, not an essay. when i read battles, i want the punch and wordplay to come straight at me, and have that WOW!!!!! factor. i hate when im reading some battles and there's always that one guy that tries to fit in a gazillion concepts and wordplay into one bar. Reefer had that more entertaining and WHOA! bar. Phroxen, your nice and shit, but you gotta calm down and simplify your wordplay and concepts sometimes... know what i mean?

Eh...
So Anyway

---------- Post added at 06:59 PM ---------- Previous post was at 06:58 PM ----------

Originally Posted by Tyler McFly

Fight for what you believe in Phroxen.... Show no mercy.

Another Hypocrite
Wow, You People Are So Easy To Spot