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[John Dos]

my pine green got a scary scent puffin on that murda i won't share the prints..Blowin trees, no Febreze when I "air my sense", I'm not indian but I sleep in, very tense. I put up a wall, is it shyness or arrogance?Ever since my brother died, each moment I have cherished since, unaware of when i'll die i declare my sins, for anyone on the outside starin in, realize i'm prepared to win. pourin my soul out in this rap shit, tryin to go somewhere with it not carin if you there cuz if, you wasnt there when money was gone it's clear ya just, there to get a piece of it, but i aint sharin shit..life's a "Crazy train" I got a bad bitch on that Sharon Tip. this is my story and i'm sharin it.The pain of a million lost souls I carry it, so "cutting edge" I give life to the game-Cesarian, lyrics "food to the youth" minus the pair of tits, all you need is faith and a dream,you'll go anywhere with it. live life the way you choose who cares if it..aint what someone else likes, ya shoe? who's wearin it? I made love to the game and then I married it. people constipated they aint prepared fa shit.

[John Dos]

my pine green got a scary scent puffin on that murda i won't share the prints..Blowin trees, no Febreze when I "air my sense", I'm not indian but I sleep in, very tense. I put up a wall, is it shyness or arrogance?Ever since my brother died, each moment I have cherished since, unaware of when i'll die i declare my sins, for anyone on the outside starin in, realize i'm prepared to win. pourin my soul out in this rap shit, tryin to go somewhere with it not carin if you there cuz if, you wasnt there when money was gone it's clear ya just, there to get a piece of it, but i aint sharin shit..life's a "Crazy train" I got a bad bitch on that Sharon Tip. this is my story and i'm sharin it.The pain of a million lost souls I carry it, so "cutting edge" I give life to the game-Cesarian, lyrics "food to the youth" minus the pair of tits, all you need is faith and a dream,you'll go anywhere with it. live life the way you choose who cares if it..aint what someone else likes, ya shoe? who's wearin it? I made love to the game and then I married it. people constipated they aint prepared fa shit.

[Prophecy1]

When Prophecy is on the micI make the whole continent divide,move aside/Verbal homicide is what i provide like a planet and stars when the two collide/Feel the devastation nation wide everyone else falls,fire and flame,foolish pride/Like an invasion to your main frame,worldwide,flood the worldlike a nation tied/Genie of dope scripture production,look at the bigger picture,scope conduction/Battle me?no hope,no function,beating me is a fictional deduction/See this nation is crazy now wars, debt, and political corruption/The change we thought Obama could make turned out to be destruction/Over 5 billion people without jobs and it only got worse/National chaos, everywhere you look there seems to be a herse/But it aint gonna be the last time and it definately aint the first/

[Prophecy1]

When Prophecy is on the micI make the whole continent divide,move aside/Verbal homicide is what i provide like a planet and stars when the two collide/Feel the devastation nation wide everyone else falls,fire and flame,foolish pride/Like an invasion to your main frame,worldwide,flood the worldlike a nation tied/Genie of dope scripture production,look at the bigger picture,scope conduction/Battle me?no hope,no function,beating me is a fictional deduction/See this nation is crazy now wars, debt, and political corruption/The change we thought Obama could make turned out to be destruction/Over 5 billion people without jobs and it only got worse/National chaos, everywhere you look there seems to be a herse/But it aint gonna be the last time and it definately aint the first/

[Just C]

Originally Posted by Prophecy1

When Prophecy is on the micI make the whole continent divide,move aside/Verbal homicide is what i provide like a planet and stars when the two collide/Feel the devastation nation wide everyone else falls,fire and flame,foolish pride/Like an invasion to your main frame,worldwide,flood the worldlike a nation tied/Genie of dope scripture production,look at the bigger picture,scope conduction/Battle me?no hope,no function,beating me is a fictional deduction/See this nation is crazy now wars, debt, and political corruption/The change we thought Obama could make turned out to be destruction/Over 5 billion people without jobs and it only got worse/National chaos, everywhere you look there seems to be a herse/But it aint gonna be the last time and it definately aint the first/

sick shit.

[Just C]

Originally Posted by Prophecy1

When Prophecy is on the micI make the whole continent divide,move aside/Verbal homicide is what i provide like a planet and stars when the two collide/Feel the devastation nation wide everyone else falls,fire and flame,foolish pride/Like an invasion to your main frame,worldwide,flood the worldlike a nation tied/Genie of dope scripture production,look at the bigger picture,scope conduction/Battle me?no hope,no function,beating me is a fictional deduction/See this nation is crazy now wars, debt, and political corruption/The change we thought Obama could make turned out to be destruction/Over 5 billion people without jobs and it only got worse/National chaos, everywhere you look there seems to be a herse/But it aint gonna be the last time and it definately aint the first/

sick shit.

[John Dos]

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feedback?

[John Dos]

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feedback?

[Wigsplit]

I liked it, it flowed real good, and you had some nice lyrics. I liked the emotion in it, I can't really find any negatives. I liked the youth line best lol. But alot of lines hit hard. Good stuff man, It would prolly sound real nice on a beat.

[Wigsplit]

I liked it, it flowed real good, and you had some nice lyrics. I liked the emotion in it, I can't really find any negatives. I liked the youth line best lol. But alot of lines hit hard. Good stuff man, It would prolly sound real nice on a beat.

[John Dos]

it's going on one, as soon as i can find one lol

[John Dos]

it's going on one, as soon as i can find one lol

[Capitalist]

Shit, the opener was my favorite line.. I liked it a lot.. Carried a lot of emotion and flowed really well.. Looking forward to hearing this on the beat.

[Capitalist]

Shit, the opener was my favorite line.. I liked it a lot.. Carried a lot of emotion and flowed really well.. Looking forward to hearing this on the beat.

[John Dos]

thanks...uppin for feedback

[John Dos]

thanks...uppin for feedback

[John Dos]

more feedback please...

[John Dos]

more feedback please...