Writers Block Verse

Ok Writers Block ..


Rhyme Scheme - 5.5/10
Although You Weren't Too Complex It Was Easy To Understand What You Were Writing. I Have Seen Detailed Topicals And They Made No Sense At All. You Fit Right In The Middle But I Wish You Would Have Taken a Chance w/ Ya Verse Try Some Different Things .

Poetic Techniques - 5/10
Your Poetic Techniques Were Solid, You Had a Different Approach W/ Your Topic I Would Have Went a Different Route Honestly.

Significance - 4/10
I Disagree w/ Previous Vote I Think It Is All Bout Interpertation Of The Picture And How One Looks At It .. Not Ya Best Cat But You Attempted

Vocabulary - 3/10
Need To Up Ya Vocab Serious Too Basic ..

Emotion - 8/10
tbh I Could Feel Ya Emotion In This Piece .. You Did Put Some Effort Into And an Jus Didn't Throw Up No BS

Imagery - 6/10
Got Do a Better Job At Paintin The Picture

Storytelling - 5/10
The Story Was In an Out At Times Hard To Follow

Ending - 5.5/10
Ended Decent Started Off Better


Final score - 42.0/80

Ok Writers Block ..


Rhyme Scheme - 5.5/10
Although You Weren't Too Complex It Was Easy To Understand What You Were Writing. I Have Seen Detailed Topicals And They Made No Sense At All. You Fit Right In The Middle But I Wish You Would Have Taken a Chance w/ Ya Verse Try Some Different Things .

Poetic Techniques - 5/10
Your Poetic Techniques Were Solid, You Had a Different Approach W/ Your Topic I Would Have Went a Different Route Honestly.

Significance - 4/10
I Disagree w/ Previous Vote I Think It Is All Bout Interpertation Of The Picture And How One Looks At It .. Not Ya Best Cat But You Attempted

Vocabulary - 3/10
Need To Up Ya Vocab Serious Too Basic ..

Emotion - 8/10
tbh I Could Feel Ya Emotion In This Piece .. You Did Put Some Effort Into And an Jus Didn't Throw Up No BS

Imagery - 6/10
Got Do a Better Job At Paintin The Picture

Storytelling - 5/10
The Story Was In an Out At Times Hard To Follow

Ending - 5.5/10
Ended Decent Started Off Better


Final score - 42.0/80