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A stoned Freestyle
ayo...a little keystyle..
Nigga, When I speak, the bombs I drop take more lives then the Taliban, and I spread more blood, then the U.S in Pakistan...
So when I'm aimin' the fours? itll leave yur Brains on the Floor, quicker then if you were Paying a Whore...
I'm clever, able to drop these Constant Frees, like Releasing Slaves. been in more wars then a Sergeant, G, just Increasing Graves!
But I always Stick to the Basics, why? Kuz no matter what I'm still Sicker then Matrix, put a Dick in his Fake Shit...
Until it cums all over the place like pullin' Out for Sex, he'll say I don't wanna Bout with Vets? But I Doubt his Vest...
Can handle the Shot-Gun Blast, until his ass is lookin' like a Dropped Cunt, Man...Hit puberty! Let your balls drop, then do the Shit Talking, but just like you in school, you got no clue about Clip Popping..
..no hate to no one, just fuckin' 'round....
A Stoned Freestyle
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A stoned Freestyle
ayo...a little keystyle..
Nigga, When I speak, the bombs I drop take more lives then the Taliban, and I spread more blood, then the U.S in Pakistan...
So when I'm aimin' the fours? itll leave yur Brains on the Floor, quicker then if you were Paying a Whore...
I'm clever, able to drop these Constant Frees, like Releasing Slaves. been in more wars then a Sergeant, G, just Increasing Graves!
But I always Stick to the Basics, why? Kuz no matter what I'm still Sicker then Matrix, put a Dick in his Fake Shit...
Until it cums all over the place like pullin' Out for Sex, he'll say I don't wanna Bout with Vets? But I Doubt his Vest...
Can handle the Shot-Gun Blast, until his ass is lookin' like a Dropped Cunt, Man...Hit puberty! Let your balls drop, then do the Shit Talking, but just like you in school, you got no clue about Clip Popping..
..no hate to no one, just fuckin' 'round....
A Stoned Freestyle
FEEDLINK: http://www.letsbeef.com/forums/showt...163#post679163
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09-13-2011, 02:16 AM
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Why couldn't you of just posted this on your other account?. i Swear people are mad weird on this site lol
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09-13-2011, 02:16 AM
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Why couldn't you of just posted this on your other account?. i Swear people are mad weird on this site lol
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Cos...
Just cos. Lol. 
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Cos...
Just cos. Lol.
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PM the feedlink if you want the thread unlocked.
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09-14-2011, 04:26 AM
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this sounds good....like the way you delivered....spread more blood, then the U.S in Pakistan......r u having lecherousness....? pullin' Out for Sex...just mocking...:hahal: no hate....i like ya content...good looks
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this sounds good....like the way you delivered....spread more blood, then the U.S in Pakistan......r u having lecherousness....? pullin' Out for Sex...just mocking...:hahal: no hate....i like ya content...good looks
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Flow was good, multies were good, metaphors were alright. Not much to say because as you said, you were just fucking around.
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Flow was good, multies were good, metaphors were alright. Not much to say because as you said, you were just fucking around.
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i liked your flow a lot, metaphors were okay (they weren't bad, they just weren't all that impressive either) still this shits good just for fucking around
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i liked your flow a lot, metaphors were okay (they weren't bad, they just weren't all that impressive either) still this shits good just for fucking around
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To be crucially veracious, I don't see anything in here that is extraordinary.
Nigga, When I speak, the bombs I drop take more lives then the Taliban, and I spread more blood, then the U.S in Pakistan...
Good content here. It was your phrasing that threw you off track though.
So when I'm aimin' the fours? itll leave yur Brains on the Floor, quicker then if you were Paying a Whore...
This was very bromidic. Which means it was dull and tiresome, but had the potential to be something. Once again, your choice of words is what threw you off.
I'm clever, able to drop these Constant Frees, like Releasing Slaves. been in more wars then a Sergeant, G, just Increasing Graves!
I don't understand how constant freestyles have anything to do with releasing slaves, let alone a sergeant.
But I always Stick to the Basics, why? Kuz no matter what I'm still Sicker then Matrix, put a Dick in his Fake Shit...
The rhyming here was basic. You said in the line you always stick to the basics, but this was too tiresome. I can't magistrate this any further because I don't know who "Matrix" is.
Until it cums all over the place like pullin' Out for Sex, he'll say I don't wanna Bout with Vets? But I Doubt his Vest...
Atrocious line, he puts dick in fake shit until it cums like pulling out for sex? That is alarmingly foolish.
Can handle the Shot-Gun Blast, until his ass is lookin' like a Dropped Cunt, Man...Hit puberty! Let your balls drop, then do the Shit Talking, but just like you in school, you got no clue about Clip Popping..
I have no clue what your saying....................
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To be crucially veracious, I don't see anything in here that is extraordinary.
Nigga, When I speak, the bombs I drop take more lives then the Taliban, and I spread more blood, then the U.S in Pakistan...
Good content here. It was your phrasing that threw you off track though.
So when I'm aimin' the fours? itll leave yur Brains on the Floor, quicker then if you were Paying a Whore...
This was very bromidic. Which means it was dull and tiresome, but had the potential to be something. Once again, your choice of words is what threw you off.
I'm clever, able to drop these Constant Frees, like Releasing Slaves. been in more wars then a Sergeant, G, just Increasing Graves!
I don't understand how constant freestyles have anything to do with releasing slaves, let alone a sergeant.
But I always Stick to the Basics, why? Kuz no matter what I'm still Sicker then Matrix, put a Dick in his Fake Shit...
The rhyming here was basic. You said in the line you always stick to the basics, but this was too tiresome. I can't magistrate this any further because I don't know who "Matrix" is.
Until it cums all over the place like pullin' Out for Sex, he'll say I don't wanna Bout with Vets? But I Doubt his Vest...
Atrocious line, he puts dick in fake shit until it cums like pulling out for sex? That is alarmingly foolish.
Can handle the Shot-Gun Blast, until his ass is lookin' like a Dropped Cunt, Man...Hit puberty! Let your balls drop, then do the Shit Talking, but just like you in school, you got no clue about Clip Popping..
I have no clue what your saying....................
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