All about #1 / But in an Ideal world

[Just C]

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All about #1

I wanna talk about some real issues no bravado.
And get it all of my my chest like theres no tomorrow.
I'm a write between the lines untill my fingers seize.
And sing it out loud & proud untill my lip's i'll bleed.
They missed the frees, gave my tracks the cold shoulder.
It seems I've got em pissed at me, but when was they known sober?
See real feedback today is hard to come by.
They
Either dickride or, make you the fall guy.
It drives people crazy, like is it worth while?
Each day they wake up, it brings more trials.
And tribulations them situations they placed in.
The rumour mills, the badgering and the chasing.
The angst and hatred that rears up and strangulates them.
Can try their patience, but inovations the way in.
So what you stalling for? get up an and quit ya waiting
Accept all invitations to great things.
They the skeleton key to open up all doors.
That opens up the next one to get you out of them four walls.
Exspense scandles, you're money spent on the Lords lawn.
When that money could be better spent opening more wards.
But do you honestly think they care about you're cause?
Over the lap of luxioury of dinner dates and sports cars?
Do they F'ers like.
See in they're minds it's like you should just be greatfull.
that you even get to live this life.
Like you should get down on you're knees and thank them.
While they living it up there on the jolly in the inner sanctum.
Thats why you do it for you're self, you should do it for the wealth.
If not the finer things in life, you should do it for your health.
Dont bitch, dig deep, crush the looser in you're self.
Then dig a little deeper to find improvement in you're self.
Remove the rumours and the threats, they're the tumours in you're heads.
Designed to kill the progress you've made, ruthless & respect.
Every chance you're given,


But in an Ideal world

Yes I know times are hard, so there's some need for me.
I want to reach for the stars, if you'll beleive in me.
Put your hand on your heart, and say you trust in me.
And leave your troubles all behind, so you can find some peace.
Theres no need to be scared, just take a chance on me.
And I promise you this, you'll find all you seek.
No Red Tape, no War, and no Poverty.
No stoping in at a ward, having to wait for weeks.
No JSA or job cuts, no endless ques for a cheque.
That make you feel a little worthless, as you're loosing respect
A good school for your kids, a roof over your head.
I'll even get your gran a lift so she aint using the steps.
No cracks or bumps on the road, no scruntching up on the bus.
Cuz no over priced charges for parking your car is a must.
Nobody spongin ya stash, cuz everyones on their grind.
Nobody eyeing your cash, nobody robbing you blind.
You don't think it's the truth?, but if you e-lect me.
I'll provide with you the proof, so all of you can see.
That I'm sincere in my words, I don't mean no harm.
I wanna make a difference in your life, so you'll go far.
You've been let down before, on many countless occasions.
But I can make so many changes, if you show me some patience.
Make good on every promise made, you'll be glad that you waited.
Once the fruit starts to bare, in this garden I'm making.

[Just C]

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All about #1

I wanna talk about some real issues no bravado.
And get it all of my my chest like theres no tomorrow.
I'm a write between the lines untill my fingers seize.
And sing it out loud & proud untill my lip's i'll bleed.
They missed the frees, gave my tracks the cold shoulder.
It seems I've got em pissed at me, but when was they known sober?
See real feedback today is hard to come by.
They
Either dickride or, make you the fall guy.
It drives people crazy, like is it worth while?
Each day they wake up, it brings more trials.
And tribulations them situations they placed in.
The rumour mills, the badgering and the chasing.
The angst and hatred that rears up and strangulates them.
Can try their patience, but inovations the way in.
So what you stalling for? get up an and quit ya waiting
Accept all invitations to great things.
They the skeleton key to open up all doors.
That opens up the next one to get you out of them four walls.
Exspense scandles, you're money spent on the Lords lawn.
When that money could be better spent opening more wards.
But do you honestly think they care about you're cause?
Over the lap of luxioury of dinner dates and sports cars?
Do they F'ers like.
See in they're minds it's like you should just be greatfull.
that you even get to live this life.
Like you should get down on you're knees and thank them.
While they living it up there on the jolly in the inner sanctum.
Thats why you do it for you're self, you should do it for the wealth.
If not the finer things in life, you should do it for your health.
Dont bitch, dig deep, crush the looser in you're self.
Then dig a little deeper to find improvement in you're self.
Remove the rumours and the threats, they're the tumours in you're heads.
Designed to kill the progress you've made, ruthless & respect.
Every chance you're given,


But in an Ideal world

Yes I know times are hard, so there's some need for me.
I want to reach for the stars, if you'll beleive in me.
Put your hand on your heart, and say you trust in me.
And leave your troubles all behind, so you can find some peace.
Theres no need to be scared, just take a chance on me.
And I promise you this, you'll find all you seek.
No Red Tape, no War, and no Poverty.
No stoping in at a ward, having to wait for weeks.
No JSA or job cuts, no endless ques for a cheque.
That make you feel a little worthless, as you're loosing respect
A good school for your kids, a roof over your head.
I'll even get your gran a lift so she aint using the steps.
No cracks or bumps on the road, no scruntching up on the bus.
Cuz no over priced charges for parking your car is a must.
Nobody spongin ya stash, cuz everyones on their grind.
Nobody eyeing your cash, nobody robbing you blind.
You don't think it's the truth?, but if you e-lect me.
I'll provide with you the proof, so all of you can see.
That I'm sincere in my words, I don't mean no harm.
I wanna make a difference in your life, so you'll go far.
You've been let down before, on many countless occasions.
But I can make so many changes, if you show me some patience.
Make good on every promise made, you'll be glad that you waited.
Once the fruit starts to bare, in this garden I'm making.

[Wigsplit]

I prolly sound like a dick rider, but I really like all of your shit, and this in particular, has real good motivational lyrics in it. Plus the flows sick as usual, great vocab, nothin too plain, n nothin I have to look up lol, I like the switch n feelin between the two songs as well, the Ideal World song, the approach u took in it, is pretty cool, What im gettin out of it is, your runnin for president n tryna tell the country that if your elected, all the bad things will be better soon after, but also, I see you there talkin to me, so maybe its a double meanin type thing, I think too much lol, and the All about #1 song, im gettin the vibe that your tellin me to quit actin like a bitch, get up, be a man n make shit better, cuz thats the only way things will change, Im really feelin this shit tho, and your a great motivational writer lol, but seriously, good stuff man, I'd like to hear it if u record it

[Wigsplit]

I prolly sound like a dick rider, but I really like all of your shit, and this in particular, has real good motivational lyrics in it. Plus the flows sick as usual, great vocab, nothin too plain, n nothin I have to look up lol, I like the switch n feelin between the two songs as well, the Ideal World song, the approach u took in it, is pretty cool, What im gettin out of it is, your runnin for president n tryna tell the country that if your elected, all the bad things will be better soon after, but also, I see you there talkin to me, so maybe its a double meanin type thing, I think too much lol, and the All about #1 song, im gettin the vibe that your tellin me to quit actin like a bitch, get up, be a man n make shit better, cuz thats the only way things will change, Im really feelin this shit tho, and your a great motivational writer lol, but seriously, good stuff man, I'd like to hear it if u record it

[Just C]

when i made the second verse I actually had that priminister / president concept in mind. But I wanted to add a second verse where it was all just lies to get elected, then write based off what would really happen thanks for the feed man, lol. ur good at picking up on things. You pretty much hit the nail on the head with the first track too. it was from a "get up off ya ass" stand point. upping for more feed

[Just C]

when i made the second verse I actually had that priminister / president concept in mind. But I wanted to add a second verse where it was all just lies to get elected, then write based off what would really happen thanks for the feed man, lol. ur good at picking up on things. You pretty much hit the nail on the head with the first track too. it was from a "get up off ya ass" stand point. upping for more feed

[Eye G]

wig has explained everything....no words nice drop...real talk..

[Eye G]

wig has explained everything....no words nice drop...real talk..

[Xander]

You had a nice story here. Good rhyme schemes, and all of them were finished, the multies matched up nicely too. Flow was nice, but it seemed really plain, you could've spiced it up a bit throughout the end of both of them. They both seemed unfinished tho, just, rhyme wise and story wise...good shit tho.

[Xander]

You had a nice story here. Good rhyme schemes, and all of them were finished, the multies matched up nicely too. Flow was nice, but it seemed really plain, you could've spiced it up a bit throughout the end of both of them. They both seemed unfinished tho, just, rhyme wise and story wise...good shit tho.

First one:- It was good. Flow was pretty much unstoppable, rhyming was good, no faults. It overall was a little on the basic side, but you exocuted what you wanted to do to perfection. I would like to see more of the metaphors like the skeleton key one. People some times go off too deep with metaphors, but little touches like that are exactly what you'd want to continue adding.

Second one:- Everything was dope, except the ending. Don't get me wrong, it was a great metaphore, but what it was leading up to the entire time was the ending "My name is _____, and I'm running for Mayor" or something. I would have liked it to end sharply and from like the 3rb bar from the bottom, you gave it that feel, from the word "elect" onwards I believe. Good piece anyways, keep it up.

First one:- It was good. Flow was pretty much unstoppable, rhyming was good, no faults. It overall was a little on the basic side, but you exocuted what you wanted to do to perfection. I would like to see more of the metaphors like the skeleton key one. People some times go off too deep with metaphors, but little touches like that are exactly what you'd want to continue adding.

Second one:- Everything was dope, except the ending. Don't get me wrong, it was a great metaphore, but what it was leading up to the entire time was the ending "My name is _____, and I'm running for Mayor" or something. I would have liked it to end sharply and from like the 3rb bar from the bottom, you gave it that feel, from the word "elect" onwards I believe. Good piece anyways, keep it up.

[ItzNDaSawce]

burnt out after reading so much dope shit.....

[ItzNDaSawce]

burnt out after reading so much dope shit.....