Rock Bottom Remix

[Wigsplit]

Rock Bottom Remix

This songs meanin, is that life can be decievin
It aint all shiny n gleamin, bitches comin n leavin
Money comes n goes so fast, I barely even see it
Want my kids to have the best, but I cant fuckin reach it
Keep dreamin, empty bottles got me dry heavin
Go to work early in the morn', leave in the late evenin
the end of the week n I cant even break even
Im fuckin steamin, cuz my feet bleedin
keep walkin the path til I see them lights beamin
sick n tired, all I do is fight demons
day by day, I try to find reasons
to go on...cuz deaths creepin n it sounds pleasin
to be peacefully sleepin...but I'd rather see my
boys cheesin tho, so, there wont be no mofuckin red leakin
as long as I got them, my happiness is peakin
How could I leave them with nothin to recieve n
nothin to believe in? I dont care if I gotta rob
a lotta mofuckas, we eatin, feastin
Fuck everyone else, yall can rest in pieces
My hearts dedicated to them, so fuck G.O.D. and Jesus!

Eminem Rock bottom Instrumental - YouTube

Eminem Rock bottom Instrumental - YouTube

EDITING IN FEEDLINK: http://www.letsbeef.com/forums/showthread.php?t=100026

[Wigsplit]

Rock Bottom Remix

This songs meanin, is that life can be decievin
It aint all shiny n gleamin, bitches comin n leavin
Money comes n goes so fast, I barely even see it
Want my kids to have the best, but I cant fuckin reach it
Keep dreamin, empty bottles got me dry heavin
Go to work early in the morn', leave in the late evenin
the end of the week n I cant even break even
Im fuckin steamin, cuz my feet bleedin
keep walkin the path til I see them lights beamin
sick n tired, all I do is fight demons
day by day, I try to find reasons
to go on...cuz deaths creepin n it sounds pleasin
to be peacefully sleepin...but I'd rather see my
boys cheesin tho, so, there wont be no mofuckin red leakin
as long as I got them, my happiness is peakin
How could I leave them with nothin to recieve n
nothin to believe in? I dont care if I gotta rob
a lotta mofuckas, we eatin, feastin
Fuck everyone else, yall can rest in pieces
My hearts dedicated to them, so fuck G.O.D. and Jesus!

Eminem Rock bottom Instrumental - YouTube

Eminem Rock bottom Instrumental - YouTube

EDITING IN FEEDLINK: http://www.letsbeef.com/forums/showthread.php?t=100026

[Eye G]

I like your content...but most of ya rhymes ended w/ -ing ....but overall its good...would love to hear ya rhythm innit....holler when its done....i link it not just to satisfy ya but i sincerely like it....

[Eye G]

I like your content...but most of ya rhymes ended w/ -ing ....but overall its good...would love to hear ya rhythm innit....holler when its done....i link it not just to satisfy ya but i sincerely like it....

I have to agree on one thing G Kool said, the rhyming ending in -ing so often really brings it down. I never liked it and that's the idea you focused on, so lyrically it lacks to me. The emotion is all right, but could use a little more anger. I can see that you meant that but I never quite got the teeth gritting image throughout, so just try and add some more of that into pieces like this. The wording was good and mostly the flow was on point. I didnt like the ending as it seems like random religion is added in. Keep working and stay active.

I have to agree on one thing G Kool said, the rhyming ending in -ing so often really brings it down. I never liked it and that's the idea you focused on, so lyrically it lacks to me. The emotion is all right, but could use a little more anger. I can see that you meant that but I never quite got the teeth gritting image throughout, so just try and add some more of that into pieces like this. The wording was good and mostly the flow was on point. I didnt like the ending as it seems like random religion is added in. Keep working and stay active.

[-Jibberish]

rock bottom one of my favorite songs ever, shit go ham buddy, do it up tight!

[-Jibberish]

rock bottom one of my favorite songs ever, shit go ham buddy, do it up tight!

[Ill Phenom]

Aggression can be a bit more. Def like the lyrics, I wasn't as much bothered by the ing's but I will agree that you have to change it up a little. Def the flow was good. The concepts in the lyrics for the most part were on point. Good stuff. Keep it up.

[Ill Phenom]

Aggression can be a bit more. Def like the lyrics, I wasn't as much bothered by the ing's but I will agree that you have to change it up a little. Def the flow was good. The concepts in the lyrics for the most part were on point. Good stuff. Keep it up.

[Just C]

I thought u was on the right path right untill u got to "rather see my boy cheesin" the way it presented it self threw me. I agree with the rest on ING rhyming words. Try and display a higher vocab and use different words mixup with the 3 syllable words. shit was aightU stayed on topic but there wasnt alot in the way of imagry and impact.

[Just C]

I thought u was on the right path right untill u got to "rather see my boy cheesin" the way it presented it self threw me. I agree with the rest on ING rhyming words. Try and display a higher vocab and use different words mixup with the 3 syllable words. shit was aightU stayed on topic but there wasnt alot in the way of imagry and impact.

[John Dos]

Keep dreamin, empty bottles got me dry heavin
Go to work early in the morn', leave in the late evenin
the end of the week n I cant even break even
Im fuckin steamin, cuz my feet bleedin
keep walkin the path til I see them lights beamin
sick n tired, all I do is fight demons
day by day, I try to find reasons


I can relate to that real talk

[John Dos]

Keep dreamin, empty bottles got me dry heavin
Go to work early in the morn', leave in the late evenin
the end of the week n I cant even break even
Im fuckin steamin, cuz my feet bleedin
keep walkin the path til I see them lights beamin
sick n tired, all I do is fight demons
day by day, I try to find reasons


I can relate to that real talk

[Name Jacka]

RHYMES? i save em up, spitt em when i feel im breave enough, being strapped fo cash has got me saveing up, wanna take my life, b,cuz i hate wakeing up, i think, i dont think i can take enough standing over the sink tryin ta take this stuff,shakeing legs acheing all cuz me and my girlfriend are breaking up, im sure you hate this stuff, ive been gracious, im not racist, i spit in anyones face ta give em rabies, maby thats what been making me have these hallucinations, fake images of views invasions start shroom feeling some new sensations sip booze man i hate temptations enought rage to break foundations cuz you end relations i look up and see you in both directions mis communications thaught we had good connections a good vibe you know you love vibrations,i dont need explanations, i never had great expectations, but ying and yang are good combinations, i just wanna vent my frustrations with these medications, thats when i see your face in the wasteland whilst making observations thats when you started chaseing me ike jason , what you want me to think? im a sissy dressed like link, but you turne into a monster when i put my thaughts in ink.

[Name Jacka]

RHYMES? i save em up, spitt em when i feel im breave enough, being strapped fo cash has got me saveing up, wanna take my life, b,cuz i hate wakeing up, i think, i dont think i can take enough standing over the sink tryin ta take this stuff,shakeing legs acheing all cuz me and my girlfriend are breaking up, im sure you hate this stuff, ive been gracious, im not racist, i spit in anyones face ta give em rabies, maby thats what been making me have these hallucinations, fake images of views invasions start shroom feeling some new sensations sip booze man i hate temptations enought rage to break foundations cuz you end relations i look up and see you in both directions mis communications thaught we had good connections a good vibe you know you love vibrations,i dont need explanations, i never had great expectations, but ying and yang are good combinations, i just wanna vent my frustrations with these medications, thats when i see your face in the wasteland whilst making observations thats when you started chaseing me ike jason , what you want me to think? im a sissy dressed like link, but you turne into a monster when i put my thaughts in ink.