Round 1: Supersonikkk Vs Ill Phenom (Ill Phenom Wins Via 3-0 KO)

Rhyming Scheme/Flow - Tie. Both had slightly choppy flows, and simple enough rhyming, but neither nudged ahead of the other. Ill, try to keep the end of line rhyme to a multiple of 2, 3 times throws a reader off.
Vocabulary - Ill Phenom. Super was quite decent in this cat, but Ill has slightly elevated in it and snatched it.
Topic/Meaning - Ill Phenom. Ill, although predictable, had a better storyline all in all.
Storytelling/Progression - Ill Phenom. Ill should have made his smaller. There was a lot of repeatitive mood setting in the beginning. Super was going well, until he "woke up" half way through, which I never understood happening.
Emotion - Ill Phenom. All in all a higher level in emotion.
Imagery - Tie. Again, Ill added words in but I felt that he was struggling to find the correct visuals to give a picture. Super had some okay images at the start but it fell.
Poetic Techniques - Ill Phenom. Althought some never connected, the presence of metaphors takes this cat convincingly.
Ending - Ill Phenom. The ending was exocuted well, but could have used some more originality.

GMV// Ill Phenom. I'd have loved to put Super against a weaker opponent or no shower to give him sone more experience because he undoubtabley could cause some upsets with a little more work, but being drafted with one of the favourites and most experienced has seen him take the early fall in my books. Good contest.

Rhyming Scheme/Flow - Tie. Both had slightly choppy flows, and simple enough rhyming, but neither nudged ahead of the other. Ill, try to keep the end of line rhyme to a multiple of 2, 3 times throws a reader off.
Vocabulary - Ill Phenom. Super was quite decent in this cat, but Ill has slightly elevated in it and snatched it.
Topic/Meaning - Ill Phenom. Ill, although predictable, had a better storyline all in all.
Storytelling/Progression - Ill Phenom. Ill should have made his smaller. There was a lot of repeatitive mood setting in the beginning. Super was going well, until he "woke up" half way through, which I never understood happening.
Emotion - Ill Phenom. All in all a higher level in emotion.
Imagery - Tie. Again, Ill added words in but I felt that he was struggling to find the correct visuals to give a picture. Super had some okay images at the start but it fell.
Poetic Techniques - Ill Phenom. Althought some never connected, the presence of metaphors takes this cat convincingly.
Ending - Ill Phenom. The ending was exocuted well, but could have used some more originality.

GMV// Ill Phenom. I'd have loved to put Super against a weaker opponent or no shower to give him sone more experience because he undoubtabley could cause some upsets with a little more work, but being drafted with one of the favourites and most experienced has seen him take the early fall in my books. Good contest.