A Warmer Breeze...

[Wigsplit]

I feel what your goin for, some parts seem to be rhymin jus to rhyme tho, n while for the most part it makes sense, to me its a lil cheesy, jus my personal opinion, I dont wanna seem like a hater, jus being honest, I know u already said its a lil basic, sometimes basic makes for a good song, u jus gotta write bout shit that actually has some pure emotion in it, sittin around the campfire throwin logs in the fire aint cuttin it for me, when I post some shit in here, U can harshly critique me too, I wont mind, like I said, jus tryna be real from my point of view, and I wasnt really vibing off that beat either, im sorry if I seem like a dick

[Wigsplit]

I feel what your goin for, some parts seem to be rhymin jus to rhyme tho, n while for the most part it makes sense, to me its a lil cheesy, jus my personal opinion, I dont wanna seem like a hater, jus being honest, I know u already said its a lil basic, sometimes basic makes for a good song, u jus gotta write bout shit that actually has some pure emotion in it, sittin around the campfire throwin logs in the fire aint cuttin it for me, when I post some shit in here, U can harshly critique me too, I wont mind, like I said, jus tryna be real from my point of view, and I wasnt really vibing off that beat either, im sorry if I seem like a dick