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Old 08-28-2011, 08:28 AM
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Rhyming Scheme/Flow - RULE. At times I felt that Almighty got slightly choppy towards the end of the line, and RULE has his usual good rhyming.
Vocabulary - Almighty. RULE kept it pretty basic, while Almighty tried to break through the barriers and get into the vocab, and I think in this cat it paid off.
Topic/Meaning - RULE. Slightly generic on the storyline, but you worded and exocuted it well. Almighty, you tried to take a risk and to me it didnt pay off. The story at times was quite difficult to follow and was unclear, although never gave enough room to interperate.
Storytelling/Progression - RULE. I really liked the way he started with the end, went into the details, and then went back to the end. Thats a good movie like style. At times I felt that Almighty's was not really progressing towards anything, and never had a direction.
Emotion - RULE. Lots of emotion in RULE's piece and was obviously the main goal he had in winning this cat. Almighty never really gave the characters individual emotions so it was harder to see it in his drop.
Imagery - Tie. Both lacked in this cat. Not much to say on it.
Poetic Techniques - RULE. The back to front writting style took this cat for me.
Ending - RULE. We all knew where it was going, but it was worded well none the less.

Good bout here, but RULE gmv.
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Rhyming Scheme/Flow - RULE. At times I felt that Almighty got slightly choppy towards the end of the line, and RULE has his usual good rhyming.
Vocabulary - Almighty. RULE kept it pretty basic, while Almighty tried to break through the barriers and get into the vocab, and I think in this cat it paid off.
Topic/Meaning - RULE. Slightly generic on the storyline, but you worded and exocuted it well. Almighty, you tried to take a risk and to me it didnt pay off. The story at times was quite difficult to follow and was unclear, although never gave enough room to interperate.
Storytelling/Progression - RULE. I really liked the way he started with the end, went into the details, and then went back to the end. Thats a good movie like style. At times I felt that Almighty's was not really progressing towards anything, and never had a direction.
Emotion - RULE. Lots of emotion in RULE's piece and was obviously the main goal he had in winning this cat. Almighty never really gave the characters individual emotions so it was harder to see it in his drop.
Imagery - Tie. Both lacked in this cat. Not much to say on it.
Poetic Techniques - RULE. The back to front writting style took this cat for me.
Ending - RULE. We all knew where it was going, but it was worded well none the less.

Good bout here, but RULE gmv.
 
 


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