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lmao @ this place, wtf... seriously?! how do they judge this stuff?
am i missin sumtin?
http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=399429
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it aint the same when I say that the POUNDS SPARKIN YOU/
Im talkin bout my "CLICK" in ur face when I MOUSE TARGET YOU/
my ROUNDS DART INTO space & they BOUNCE PARTICLES/
to put you in a black hole, son & SOUNDGARDEN YOU/
jump into that fight klub like I'm EDWARD NORTON/
MURK YA MOTHER, TURN YA BROTHER to a HELPLESS ORPHAN/
hit me up, I'll save you money on your NEXT ABORTION/
I'll turn the logo on your polo to a HEADLESS HORSEMAN/
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Been gone for awhile now i'm BACK IN YA VIEW, BACK TO GET SCHOOLED? i'm the beast boy, i came BACK TO THE ZOO... Now take ya PICK BOY, wat u want me to DO?..is it TRUE?, new user?, battling YOU? i aint sposed be this good, don't even got me a CREW! WHOO!(pause) ... my lines are OUTRAGEOUS, CONTAGIOUS sick-flows, quick-blows to the FACES. you bout as boring as big-hoes (no love) and MYSPACE IS, you bout as good as D.Rose is in late game SITUATIONS (= 4th quarters )! dang, did he just diss the MVP?, COULD IT BE?, somebody else that i can ENVY? POSSIBLY? FINALLY? some real competition here on LETSBEEF?
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first thing i thought was "hmm, thats more than 8 lines/4 bars..."
but then someone says this?
"Thug, try to fill up the whole box next time."
lmao, do these people have any idea about writing ?
thats the correct structure for 8 lines/4 bars like it asked for. so we just fit as much we can in the box?
so far all 4 votes went to this other dude, am i missing something? if so please explain
dude has NO MULTIS, ZERO... wtf?!
and his last line
"did he just diss the MVP?, COULD IT BE?, somebody else that i can ENVY? POSSIBLY? FINALLY? some real competition here on LETSBEEF? "
how did any of this rhyme with anything?!
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05-28-2011, 10:27 PM
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lmao @ this place, wtf... seriously?! how do they judge this stuff?
am i missin sumtin?
http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=399429
me
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it aint the same when I say that the POUNDS SPARKIN YOU/
Im talkin bout my "CLICK" in ur face when I MOUSE TARGET YOU/
my ROUNDS DART INTO space & they BOUNCE PARTICLES/
to put you in a black hole, son & SOUNDGARDEN YOU/
jump into that fight klub like I'm EDWARD NORTON/
MURK YA MOTHER, TURN YA BROTHER to a HELPLESS ORPHAN/
hit me up, I'll save you money on your NEXT ABORTION/
I'll turn the logo on your polo to a HEADLESS HORSEMAN/
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Been gone for awhile now i'm BACK IN YA VIEW, BACK TO GET SCHOOLED? i'm the beast boy, i came BACK TO THE ZOO... Now take ya PICK BOY, wat u want me to DO?..is it TRUE?, new user?, battling YOU? i aint sposed be this good, don't even got me a CREW! WHOO!(pause) ... my lines are OUTRAGEOUS, CONTAGIOUS sick-flows, quick-blows to the FACES. you bout as boring as big-hoes (no love) and MYSPACE IS, you bout as good as D.Rose is in late game SITUATIONS (= 4th quarters )! dang, did he just diss the MVP?, COULD IT BE?, somebody else that i can ENVY? POSSIBLY? FINALLY? some real competition here on LETSBEEF?
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first thing i thought was "hmm, thats more than 8 lines/4 bars..."
but then someone says this?
"Thug, try to fill up the whole box next time."
lmao, do these people have any idea about writing ?
thats the correct structure for 8 lines/4 bars like it asked for. so we just fit as much we can in the box?
so far all 4 votes went to this other dude, am i missing something? if so please explain
dude has NO MULTIS, ZERO... wtf?!
and his last line
"did he just diss the MVP?, COULD IT BE?, somebody else that i can ENVY? POSSIBLY? FINALLY? some real competition here on LETSBEEF? "
how did any of this rhyme with anything?!
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05-28-2011, 10:39 PM
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Lol mate...you didn't fill the box, however you did win that.
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05-28-2011, 10:39 PM
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Lol mate...you didn't fill the box, however you did win that.
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05-28-2011, 10:52 PM
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Lol mate...you didn't fill the box, however you did win that.
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i think i did too but my problem aint with taking the L, its what you said
"i didnt fill the box"
the battle was "8 lines, 4 bars"
i wrote a good 8 lines and 4 bars...
u ever write a rap song? thats how its structured
people saying "fill the box" dunno what they are talking about
he filled the box, he had more than 4 bars in a 4 bar battle, his shit was messy and unorganized... no structure.
mines was written properly.
lol @ "fill the box"
count bars.
i coulda easily wrote it like this
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it aint the same when I say that the POUNDS SPARKIN YOU/ Im talkin bout my "CLICK" in ur face when I MOUSE TARGET YOU/ my ROUNDS DART INTO space & they BOUNCE PARTICLES/ to put you in a black hole, son & SOUNDGARDEN YOU/ jump into that fight klub like I'm EDWARD NORTON/ MURK YA MOTHER, TURN YA BROTHER to a HELPLESS ORPHAN/ hit me up, I'll save you money on your NEXT ABORTION/ I'll turn the logo on your polo to a HEADLESS HORSEMAN/
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n that woulda meant i had to write 2 MORE bars to make it 8 lines.... which would = 6 bars/8 lines... this was a 4 bar battle.
u see my point?
how can you say i never filled the box, when i wrote 8 lines/4 bars?
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05-28-2011, 10:52 PM
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Lol mate...you didn't fill the box, however you did win that.
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i think i did too but my problem aint with taking the L, its what you said
"i didnt fill the box"
the battle was "8 lines, 4 bars"
i wrote a good 8 lines and 4 bars...
u ever write a rap song? thats how its structured
people saying "fill the box" dunno what they are talking about
he filled the box, he had more than 4 bars in a 4 bar battle, his shit was messy and unorganized... no structure.
mines was written properly.
lol @ "fill the box"
count bars.
i coulda easily wrote it like this
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it aint the same when I say that the POUNDS SPARKIN YOU/ Im talkin bout my "CLICK" in ur face when I MOUSE TARGET YOU/ my ROUNDS DART INTO space & they BOUNCE PARTICLES/ to put you in a black hole, son & SOUNDGARDEN YOU/ jump into that fight klub like I'm EDWARD NORTON/ MURK YA MOTHER, TURN YA BROTHER to a HELPLESS ORPHAN/ hit me up, I'll save you money on your NEXT ABORTION/ I'll turn the logo on your polo to a HEADLESS HORSEMAN/
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n that woulda meant i had to write 2 MORE bars to make it 8 lines.... which would = 6 bars/8 lines... this was a 4 bar battle.
u see my point?
how can you say i never filled the box, when i wrote 8 lines/4 bars?
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05-29-2011, 12:20 AM
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thats crazy you took an L on that shit....makes me not wanna even attempt to battle on this site........
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05-29-2011, 12:20 AM
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thats crazy you took an L on that shit....makes me not wanna even attempt to battle on this site........
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05-29-2011, 12:22 AM
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dropped my 2 cent 
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05-29-2011, 12:22 AM
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dropped my 2 cent
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05-29-2011, 12:43 AM
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I guess,,,,,,,,
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05-29-2011, 12:43 AM
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I guess,,,,,,,,
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05-29-2011, 01:25 AM
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Nah you're right, you're using the correct structure. But thats just the L.B way though. It's been like that since 06. I wish people would stop saying 'fill the box' though and rating based of that. Shit is stupid. If the verse is nice and it tops the opponents verse in terms of content. Thats all that should matter.
Quality > Quantity people
I'll check it out.
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05-29-2011, 01:25 AM
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Nah you're right, you're using the correct structure. But thats just the L.B way though. It's been like that since 06. I wish people would stop saying 'fill the box' though and rating based of that. Shit is stupid. If the verse is nice and it tops the opponents verse in terms of content. Thats all that should matter.
Quality > Quantity people
I'll check it out.
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05-29-2011, 03:22 AM
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LOL first of all the original poster bit 1/2 his verse from Fresco. GET HIM DA FUCK OUTTA HEEEEERE
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05-29-2011, 03:22 AM
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LOL first of all the original poster bit 1/2 his verse from Fresco. GET HIM DA FUCK OUTTA HEEEEERE
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05-29-2011, 03:28 AM
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*Applaudes Pulse*
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05-29-2011, 03:28 AM
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*Applaudes Pulse*
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05-29-2011, 03:31 AM
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Burn in Hell Biters!!!! A verse can be shorter and win....but missing lines is missing material so it sometimes effects closer battles IMO or like a 45 sec drop to a 1 minute one. Just bite more next time you'll be fine lol
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05-29-2011, 03:31 AM
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Burn in Hell Biters!!!! A verse can be shorter and win....but missing lines is missing material so it sometimes effects closer battles IMO or like a 45 sec drop to a 1 minute one. Just bite more next time you'll be fine lol
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