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Brand new lyric video!!! What y'all think?
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for starters... i am a metal head who barely listens to rap so you using a nirvana riff even though well tailored was blasphemy for me lol
other than that really enjoyed the flow and delivery and lyrics throughout, he hook was a low point for me tbh but then coz well i love the orginal you could have prolly sampled it into this would have sounded dope asf !! but a lovely drop from a rap POV unlike the dumb shit around these days this one was grimey and hit my sweet and G spot real good!!
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for starters... i am a metal head who barely listens to rap so you using a nirvana riff even though well tailored was blasphemy for me lol
other than that really enjoyed the flow and delivery and lyrics throughout, he hook was a low point for me tbh but then coz well i love the orginal you could have prolly sampled it into this would have sounded dope asf !! but a lovely drop from a rap POV unlike the dumb shit around these days this one was grimey and hit my sweet and G spot real good!!
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08-27-2020, 11:25 AM
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Which 1 are u Wig
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I love nirvana, hence why we sampled it lol. I knew I was never gonna deliver like Kurt but i tried to do up the hook to replicate his best as i could lol. And the beat was jumpy so we just had fun with it. I was gonna go the more serious route and try to keep the same same subject matter from heart shaped box but this was more upbeat sounding. Crossworm killed the beat though. He does a lot of them for our new album. Industrial hip hop sounds. Thank you for the feedback Sax!!! You are dope! Cum shots!!!!
Rain, I am first up, every 8 bars. Travis Savage is with me. Then isolated beingz from Baltimore on the second verse.
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I love nirvana, hence why we sampled it lol. I knew I was never gonna deliver like Kurt but i tried to do up the hook to replicate his best as i could lol. And the beat was jumpy so we just had fun with it. I was gonna go the more serious route and try to keep the same same subject matter from heart shaped box but this was more upbeat sounding. Crossworm killed the beat though. He does a lot of them for our new album. Industrial hip hop sounds. Thank you for the feedback Sax!!! You are dope! Cum shots!!!!
Rain, I am first up, every 8 bars. Travis Savage is with me. Then isolated beingz from Baltimore on the second verse.
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Lol good .. didnt wanna say nothing til i was sure
U were dope .. homie got no flow tho
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Lol good .. didnt wanna say nothing til i was sure
U were dope .. homie got no flow tho
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I love nirvana, hence why we sampled it lol. I knew I was never gonna deliver like Kurt but i tried to do up the hook to replicate his best as i could lol. And the beat was jumpy so we just had fun with it. I was gonna go the more serious route and try to keep the same same subject matter from heart shaped box but this was more upbeat sounding. Crossworm killed the beat though. He does a lot of them for our new album. Industrial hip hop sounds. Thank you for the feedback Sax!!! You are dope! Cum shots!!!!
Rain, I am first up, every 8 bars. Travis Savage is with me. Then isolated beingz from Baltimore on the second verse.
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anytime fam keep up the good work !! always nice to see folks actually tryna do different things on a beat level. Rap music needs more musicality like this !
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I love nirvana, hence why we sampled it lol. I knew I was never gonna deliver like Kurt but i tried to do up the hook to replicate his best as i could lol. And the beat was jumpy so we just had fun with it. I was gonna go the more serious route and try to keep the same same subject matter from heart shaped box but this was more upbeat sounding. Crossworm killed the beat though. He does a lot of them for our new album. Industrial hip hop sounds. Thank you for the feedback Sax!!! You are dope! Cum shots!!!!
Rain, I am first up, every 8 bars. Travis Savage is with me. Then isolated beingz from Baltimore on the second verse.
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anytime fam keep up the good work !! always nice to see folks actually tryna do different things on a beat level. Rap music needs more musicality like this !
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Not to shabby decent multis flow beat respect
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Ayyy! Thanks for helping push. I don't expect most people to like it off the bat. I know it's different. I know how this shit works lol. But this is where I really came up learning most of my game. Loss after loss win after win. So I will always come back n show what I've done with my skills obtained here, and look for feedback from the new and old school. It all helps learn and grow. I love letsbeef and will never not be affiliated. Still trying to get battle in. Thank you for showing up when u never had any influence to do so. I appreciate you.
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Ayyy! Thanks for helping push. I don't expect most people to like it off the bat. I know it's different. I know how this shit works lol. But this is where I really came up learning most of my game. Loss after loss win after win. So I will always come back n show what I've done with my skills obtained here, and look for feedback from the new and old school. It all helps learn and grow. I love letsbeef and will never not be affiliated. Still trying to get battle in. Thank you for showing up when u never had any influence to do so. I appreciate you.
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