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Manhattan's Funeral.
We are gathered here today, in memory of a long time user, who went by the name of Manhattan. Who took HALF a month, picking scheme after scheme. He changed it up multiple times and still no showed me. I have at least three 16's worth of material of other schemes i started writing, that he was either down with or picked himself. Mid month he said, "in the Bahamas with my girl on vaction"... then... At the last minute he says, "I ain't even stated writing". That's okay though, coz I still wrote for him. If y'all would like to pay your respects, the funeral is held here...
https://www.letsbeef.com/cypher_deta...on=tb&id=69082
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Manhattan's Funeral.
We are gathered here today, in memory of a long time user, who went by the name of Manhattan. Who took HALF a month, picking scheme after scheme. He changed it up multiple times and still no showed me. I have at least three 16's worth of material of other schemes i started writing, that he was either down with or picked himself. Mid month he said, "in the Bahamas with my girl on vaction"... then... At the last minute he says, "I ain't even stated writing". That's okay though, coz I still wrote for him. If y'all would like to pay your respects, the funeral is held here...
https://www.letsbeef.com/cypher_deta...on=tb&id=69082
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03-09-2020, 09:26 PM
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Well, shit
Funeral and I didn't wear a suit
Damnit, Rai, you got something wrong
Bitchhattan*
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03-09-2020, 09:26 PM
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Well, shit
Funeral and I didn't wear a suit
Damnit, Rai, you got something wrong
Bitchhattan*
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03-09-2020, 11:37 PM
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Let me know when you want me to plan yours @ Rai
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03-09-2020, 11:37 PM
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Let me know when you want me to plan yours @ Rai
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03-10-2020, 01:40 AM
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Let me know when you want me to plan yours @ Rai
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Damn, it's like that, @ GOOD GRIEF??? Lmao! Thought we were homies, man...
In all seriousness. Let's get it. 16 line scheme, unless you wanna go 32. Lemme know and I'll get a scheme suggestion thread and a poll to fairly chose one. PM/IM me or tag me here.
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Let me know when you want me to plan yours @ Rai
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Damn, it's like that, @ GOOD GRIEF??? Lmao! Thought we were homies, man...
In all seriousness. Let's get it. 16 line scheme, unless you wanna go 32. Lemme know and I'll get a scheme suggestion thread and a poll to fairly chose one. PM/IM me or tag me here.
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03-10-2020, 11:02 AM
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Killers
Finna put everybody in the ground.
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03-10-2020, 11:08 AM
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That’s that KILLERS. shit
Dope bars @ Rai.
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03-10-2020, 11:08 AM
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That’s that KILLERS. shit
Dope bars @ Rai.
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03-10-2020, 11:28 AM
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No offense, man... But, this was kind of meh. You really struggle with natural phrasing when doing schemes, I've noticed. They hurt you more than help.
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No offense, man... But, this was kind of meh. You really struggle with natural phrasing when doing schemes, I've noticed. They hurt you more than help.
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No offense, man... But, this was kind of meh. You really struggle with natural phrasing when doing schemes, I've noticed. They hurt you more than help.
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I agree with this when it’s come to a lot of Rai’s content in the last couple of months, especially his verses with Manny in the tag tourney. This specific cypher I didn’t feel had the kind of forced wording to fit the scheme that I’ve seen elsewhere, and although a lot of parts didn’t feel fluidly natural nothing felt unbelievable, which given it’s a schemed 32 is pretty impressive imo.
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Originally Posted by REZN
No offense, man... But, this was kind of meh. You really struggle with natural phrasing when doing schemes, I've noticed. They hurt you more than help.
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I agree with this when it’s come to a lot of Rai’s content in the last couple of months, especially his verses with Manny in the tag tourney. This specific cypher I didn’t feel had the kind of forced wording to fit the scheme that I’ve seen elsewhere, and although a lot of parts didn’t feel fluidly natural nothing felt unbelievable, which given it’s a schemed 32 is pretty impressive imo.
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03-10-2020, 03:15 PM
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Originally Posted by Kiwi Peewee
I agree with this when it’s come to a lot of Rai’s content in the last couple of months, especially his verses with Manny in the tag tourney. This specific cypher I didn’t feel had the kind of forced wording to fit the scheme that I’ve seen elsewhere, and although a lot of parts didn’t feel fluidly natural nothing felt unbelievable, which given it’s a schemed 32 is pretty impressive imo.
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It takes a long telescope alignment to spot the wording flaws in this one.
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Originally Posted by Kiwi Peewee
I agree with this when it’s come to a lot of Rai’s content in the last couple of months, especially his verses with Manny in the tag tourney. This specific cypher I didn’t feel had the kind of forced wording to fit the scheme that I’ve seen elsewhere, and although a lot of parts didn’t feel fluidly natural nothing felt unbelievable, which given it’s a schemed 32 is pretty impressive imo.
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It takes a long telescope alignment to spot the wording flaws in this one.
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03-10-2020, 03:18 PM
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It takes a long telescope alignment to spot the wording flaws in this one.
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Yeah ok that ones fair lmao
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Yeah ok that ones fair lmao
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