Topical - Lets Beef

**Mind Fuck** · #1 10-15-2018, 03:29 PM

Me and @TonganKidd are doing a topical and i already got the previous okay from @Seul for this to go down in this forum format being the topical side of things tend to get slept on

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Topic/Interpretation: Reading Between The Lines

Length: 40 Lines Or More

**Mind Fuck** · 10-15-2018, 03:29 PM

Me and @TonganKidd are doing a topical and i already got the previous okay from @Seul for this to go down in this forum format being the topical side of things tend to get slept on

Photo:

Topic/Interpretation: Reading Between The Lines

Length: 40 Lines Or More

**Seul** · #2 10-15-2018, 03:45 PM

I told @Mind Fuck to post in this forum section because it gets alot more attention. (More likely to get votes on it). I will be moving the thread to the Topical Forum once the battle has run its course.

**Seul** · 10-15-2018, 03:45 PM

I told @Mind Fuck to post in this forum section because it gets alot more attention. (More likely to get votes on it). I will be moving the thread to the Topical Forum once the battle has run its course.

**Mind Fuck** · #3 10-15-2018, 04:41 PM

Layers of life build the moments that Matter inbetween
Half awake sleep walking through this as i'm Scattered in a dream
Taking each and every hour as a minute then those as seconds and even brake apart moments using them as Ladders that can reach to those bittersweet glimpses of bliss, Laughter and peace
On the surface isn't for the eye to determine as a door to nowhere emerges somewhere in the middle surging into Caverns in the deep
All of life has its secrets as every door has its key, every Pattern has a scheme and even starbound with cosmic reach showing you Saturn and its rings
Eyes wide shut seeing all the way to Eden where inevitable Disaster would begin made of the dust between the stars from Adam and his kin Crafted from a rib
No human has its boundaries, process beyond and follow not in Accord with limits dancing bewtween the realm of existence becoming an elusive Distorted Image
We all have a person we choose to disguise so we may fall in line with Normal thinking, lost adults in a godless neverland searching for a Dormant infant
Life is a parellel universe, no firm holds on worm holes just one way in and no way out with no refunds on your Boarding ticket
Even happyendings all have some Sadness impacted, we are all only wanders on this most Savage of land and my barehands can turn Atoms to ash
Seeing something that isn't Really there, in heaven all angels tip toe on light to Be aware to not be entangled and latched in the Demons snare
Embrace the love and hope then search out the Grief, despair and then ascend to make ammends as relationships form as the most spiraling and Deepest stairs
I see and yet im Still so blind, traveling through the valley of darkness is when one will Feel so alive yet mountains lay ahead that we will need Steel toes to climb
Read deeply into every Last detail that entails the everlasting Encapsuled veil, oceans breaking into drops of water intersceding with a Fastened sail
Falling heart first into that sacred kind of Scary love that most humans in a lifetime will Barely touch enchanted romances with hints of Fairy dust as the moments wind down in reverse the Stairs lead up
Specks of the frey span the rainbows yet still Cemented in grey, all color can fade is the Message portrayed and it takes the dark to get to the light at the End of each day
When signals the Fleeting moments to Cease in motion? Is it from the good things that People notice or do the currents never cease and will forever be meshed at sea in the Deepest oceans
Only nuculear ash when the Calamity simmers picking up on a dolphins sonar from the Manaties flippers, sound into noise into kodak moments that make up all of our Family pictures
Reading between all of these things from the Signs of the stars to the Lights on a car ultimately will Define who we are
I forget that all of the littlest things always have the Biggest impact, appreciate that your not just a number because there is math to be done once the Physics get back
We forget the coolness of water once Place on dryland, we dont appreciate insignificant moments until forced to see the Way that times stands and all the good things encompass once in Satans eye span

**Mind Fuck** · 10-15-2018, 04:41 PM

Layers of life build the moments that Matter inbetween
Half awake sleep walking through this as i'm Scattered in a dream
Taking each and every hour as a minute then those as seconds and even brake apart moments using them as Ladders that can reach to those bittersweet glimpses of bliss, Laughter and peace
On the surface isn't for the eye to determine as a door to nowhere emerges somewhere in the middle surging into Caverns in the deep
All of life has its secrets as every door has its key, every Pattern has a scheme and even starbound with cosmic reach showing you Saturn and its rings
Eyes wide shut seeing all the way to Eden where inevitable Disaster would begin made of the dust between the stars from Adam and his kin Crafted from a rib
No human has its boundaries, process beyond and follow not in Accord with limits dancing bewtween the realm of existence becoming an elusive Distorted Image
We all have a person we choose to disguise so we may fall in line with Normal thinking, lost adults in a godless neverland searching for a Dormant infant
Life is a parellel universe, no firm holds on worm holes just one way in and no way out with no refunds on your Boarding ticket
Even happyendings all have some Sadness impacted, we are all only wanders on this most Savage of land and my barehands can turn Atoms to ash
Seeing something that isn't Really there, in heaven all angels tip toe on light to Be aware to not be entangled and latched in the Demons snare
Embrace the love and hope then search out the Grief, despair and then ascend to make ammends as relationships form as the most spiraling and Deepest stairs
I see and yet im Still so blind, traveling through the valley of darkness is when one will Feel so alive yet mountains lay ahead that we will need Steel toes to climb
Read deeply into every Last detail that entails the everlasting Encapsuled veil, oceans breaking into drops of water intersceding with a Fastened sail
Falling heart first into that sacred kind of Scary love that most humans in a lifetime will Barely touch enchanted romances with hints of Fairy dust as the moments wind down in reverse the Stairs lead up
Specks of the frey span the rainbows yet still Cemented in grey, all color can fade is the Message portrayed and it takes the dark to get to the light at the End of each day
When signals the Fleeting moments to Cease in motion? Is it from the good things that People notice or do the currents never cease and will forever be meshed at sea in the Deepest oceans
Only nuculear ash when the Calamity simmers picking up on a dolphins sonar from the Manaties flippers, sound into noise into kodak moments that make up all of our Family pictures
Reading between all of these things from the Signs of the stars to the Lights on a car ultimately will Define who we are
I forget that all of the littlest things always have the Biggest impact, appreciate that your not just a number because there is math to be done once the Physics get back
We forget the coolness of water once Place on dryland, we dont appreciate insignificant moments until forced to see the Way that times stands and all the good things encompass once in Satans eye span

**TKtheGREAT** · #4 10-17-2018, 12:37 AM

I call this one "which lines should I read between". I mistook seuls signature as a pic to follow(kinda ironic) so this touches on two subjects. I hope y'all enjoy it.

My girlfriend she sees me, I know she BEEN WON-DER-IN, whats wrong with her man...why he SEEM SUF-FER-IN, she sees threw the distance, but she can't seem to ease, what's BEEN BUG-GIN-HIM but she knows that his habitual life of SINS TOUGH-ON-HIM/ my homies dont see me, believe me, I'm RECLUSIVE... I'm tired, been working, who cares what THE TRUTH IS, I live in my shell like trying BE USELESS, I go to my house, walk through the door and under lock in THE ROOM IS, a rueger duece duece, load the clip with THE BULLETS, but its only Monday, so I decide not TO PULL IT./...I wake up early from the sack, CUZ IM EMPLOYED, I put up with their shit, BUT IM ANNOYED, all this running around, liftin has been TOUGH, ON YA BOY, they say I'm "disgruntled" now,.."hate my job", "BUT, ITS MY CHOICE"?, I dont work with urgency, I'm careless, kickin boxes... UP IN THE STORE/....my mama called me twice, but I watched her CALL THE FIRST TIME, I know she wish I would "straighten up" and COME TO CHURCH DRY, she knows somethings wrong, but alones HOW I WORK MA,..black shoes, black pants, hood up LIKE A BURKA/..back to the crib, where my DAUGHTERS ASLEEP, smoking my weed like their FATHERS A FIEND, I tiptoe to the room like dont BOTHER THE BEAST, and put the gun to my head, cuz the pain, I HARBORS TO DEEP,/...but I opened my eyes and PAUSED ON THE CLICK, eyes open wide, gaze TRAPPED ON A PIC, my daughter...has school tomorrow, kids LAUGH AT THIS SHIT,...I wont do it today, I cant put, THAT ON THESE KIDS/.... I go through the day, while I'm WATCHING THE RAIN, think of the ways of STOPPIN THE PAIN, my siblings dont see me, like LOST IN A MAZE, fb bubble "pop up" and I TOSS IT AWAY, whether I'm alive or dead, they dont see me, so the COST IS THE SAME,..they call, and I cough, "can't talk", "we'll talk later" or "ill CALL, RIGHT AWAY", they know their bros weak, like ALL MIGHT IS SLAIN, they dont know he stays up, alone, ALL NIGHT AWAKE/...its Wednesday, its hump day, but I WILL-NOT-MAKE-IT, guns loaded, all cocked, if IM-NOT-MIS-TAKEN, I'm hot, strip off, "red-hot" like a HOSTILE ENGAGEMENT, tears off, clear cough, and I'm LOST IN MY BRAIN AND, pull the trigger slowly and say sorry to everyone I hurt that is STUCK ON THIS PLANET./....when I got to HEAVENS STATE, mes-mer-ized by this PLEASANT PLACE, thought I got high, like sat-el-lites, like KEVIN GATES, a voice in the distance, rang high, like SEVERAL RANKS, light shine,.. pitch high, said, " please, LET ME EXPLAIN"/...(high pitch voice)..you said they couldn't read between the lines, but it was you, WHO COULDNT READ, you said you were stuck in the house, but it was you WHO COULDNT LEAVE, I wanted what was best for you, I wanted you TO STAND IN PIECE, but it wasn't I that left "you" alone, no, YOU, ABANDONED ME./ you never answered calls and you left YOUR MAMA LONELY, you did drugs and hit licks, and kept YOUR PROBLEMS GROWING, I know exactly what you need, but you're too mad at life, TO FATHOM KNOWING, so you took it upon yourself to get rid of all YOUR BAGS OF LOATHING/.....one more thing.... ya children?, whos gonna GUARD YA KIDS THROUGH YOUTH? whos gonna CAR YA KIN TO SCHOOL?, teach them the ART YOUR MEANT TO DO? this next PART YA CANT REFUTE, All You did, was, what your FATHER DID TO YOU.

**TKtheGREAT** · 10-17-2018, 12:37 AM

I call this one "which lines should I read between". I mistook seuls signature as a pic to follow(kinda ironic) so this touches on two subjects. I hope y'all enjoy it.

My girlfriend she sees me, I know she BEEN WON-DER-IN, whats wrong with her man...why he SEEM SUF-FER-IN, she sees threw the distance, but she can't seem to ease, what's BEEN BUG-GIN-HIM but she knows that his habitual life of SINS TOUGH-ON-HIM/ my homies dont see me, believe me, I'm RECLUSIVE... I'm tired, been working, who cares what THE TRUTH IS, I live in my shell like trying BE USELESS, I go to my house, walk through the door and under lock in THE ROOM IS, a rueger duece duece, load the clip with THE BULLETS, but its only Monday, so I decide not TO PULL IT./...I wake up early from the sack, CUZ IM EMPLOYED, I put up with their shit, BUT IM ANNOYED, all this running around, liftin has been TOUGH, ON YA BOY, they say I'm "disgruntled" now,.."hate my job", "BUT, ITS MY CHOICE"?, I dont work with urgency, I'm careless, kickin boxes... UP IN THE STORE/....my mama called me twice, but I watched her CALL THE FIRST TIME, I know she wish I would "straighten up" and COME TO CHURCH DRY, she knows somethings wrong, but alones HOW I WORK MA,..black shoes, black pants, hood up LIKE A BURKA/..back to the crib, where my DAUGHTERS ASLEEP, smoking my weed like their FATHERS A FIEND, I tiptoe to the room like dont BOTHER THE BEAST, and put the gun to my head, cuz the pain, I HARBORS TO DEEP,/...but I opened my eyes and PAUSED ON THE CLICK, eyes open wide, gaze TRAPPED ON A PIC, my daughter...has school tomorrow, kids LAUGH AT THIS SHIT,...I wont do it today, I cant put, THAT ON THESE KIDS/.... I go through the day, while I'm WATCHING THE RAIN, think of the ways of STOPPIN THE PAIN, my siblings dont see me, like LOST IN A MAZE, fb bubble "pop up" and I TOSS IT AWAY, whether I'm alive or dead, they dont see me, so the COST IS THE SAME,..they call, and I cough, "can't talk", "we'll talk later" or "ill CALL, RIGHT AWAY", they know their bros weak, like ALL MIGHT IS SLAIN, they dont know he stays up, alone, ALL NIGHT AWAKE/...its Wednesday, its hump day, but I WILL-NOT-MAKE-IT, guns loaded, all cocked, if IM-NOT-MIS-TAKEN, I'm hot, strip off, "red-hot" like a HOSTILE ENGAGEMENT, tears off, clear cough, and I'm LOST IN MY BRAIN AND, pull the trigger slowly and say sorry to everyone I hurt that is STUCK ON THIS PLANET./....when I got to HEAVENS STATE, mes-mer-ized by this PLEASANT PLACE, thought I got high, like sat-el-lites, like KEVIN GATES, a voice in the distance, rang high, like SEVERAL RANKS, light shine,.. pitch high, said, " please, LET ME EXPLAIN"/...(high pitch voice)..you said they couldn't read between the lines, but it was you, WHO COULDNT READ, you said you were stuck in the house, but it was you WHO COULDNT LEAVE, I wanted what was best for you, I wanted you TO STAND IN PIECE, but it wasn't I that left "you" alone, no, YOU, ABANDONED ME./ you never answered calls and you left YOUR MAMA LONELY, you did drugs and hit licks, and kept YOUR PROBLEMS GROWING, I know exactly what you need, but you're too mad at life, TO FATHOM KNOWING, so you took it upon yourself to get rid of all YOUR BAGS OF LOATHING/.....one more thing.... ya children?, whos gonna GUARD YA KIDS THROUGH YOUTH? whos gonna CAR YA KIN TO SCHOOL?, teach them the ART YOUR MEANT TO DO? this next PART YA CANT REFUTE, All You did, was, what your FATHER DID TO YOU.