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Originally Posted by Erupt
Its slant rhyming bro. I figured you'd know the depths of slant lol. It works.
ANKle LOCK -RAIN is DROPPED VERy BIG -BARREls TIPPED. this ones hella slant but VERY is pronounced VARY and BARE. It all works man.
In text you have to take into account accents, and all that too. Nothing wrong with those multis. Reef was the king of slant rhymes
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Firstly, being the "king of slant rhyming" is like being the king of hitting the post from field goal. If it can rhyme perfectly, that's ALWAYS better than slant rhyming.
Second, slant rhyming has to sound somewhat similar. These is absolutely no conceivable way that those rhyme. Let's take what you did:-
ANKle Lock - RAIN is DROPPED
Ank and Rain rhyme? Ank would rhyme with stank and tank. I'm sure you can deliberately say it weird if you want to rhyme it, which would be as stated, weird, but if someone's reading through that they aren't saying "AYNKLES".
VERy BIG - BARRELLs TIPPED
Is this one even a question? VER / BAR rhymes with one another? Not even close.
In text you have to take into account accents for sure....as the writer. Not as the reader. It's the writers job to make it flow and rhyme for the reader.
I slant rhyme like fuck and half the time people don't click to it because of my accent and that's entirely on me.