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Unread 07-07-2014, 05:36 PM
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Overall I liked this, I thought both gave a good account of themself.

Writer 6 - nice flow, the story progressed throughout moving on nicely and really came together at the end - making everything previously read a lot more meaningful. Thought that was a great touch.

Writer 14 - I liked your flow/multis. Sometimes people can get too involved in making a topical too deep and meaningful thinking that is all there is too it and forget that we're still trying to rap about it, so I liked your approach. You just didn't have a story to it. There wasnt any progression throughout. Still a decent verse with a good basis to work from in my eyes.

Vote - writer 6, real nice touch at the end to make you rethink everything you had just read and overall a good job
Unread 07-07-2014, 05:36 PM   #7
 
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4 Won / 6 Lost
 
Join Date: Mar 2010
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Mentioned: 68 Post(s)
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Overall I liked this, I thought both gave a good account of themself.

Writer 6 - nice flow, the story progressed throughout moving on nicely and really came together at the end - making everything previously read a lot more meaningful. Thought that was a great touch.

Writer 14 - I liked your flow/multis. Sometimes people can get too involved in making a topical too deep and meaningful thinking that is all there is too it and forget that we're still trying to rap about it, so I liked your approach. You just didn't have a story to it. There wasnt any progression throughout. Still a decent verse with a good basis to work from in my eyes.

Vote - writer 6, real nice touch at the end to make you rethink everything you had just read and overall a good job
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