lmao @ this place, wtf... seriously?! how do they judge this stuff?

[DrummerInaRockBand]

am i missin sumtin?

http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=399429

me

it aint the same when I say that the POUNDS SPARKIN YOU/
Im talkin bout my "CLICK" in ur face when I MOUSE TARGET YOU/
my ROUNDS DART INTO space & they BOUNCE PARTICLES/
to put you in a black hole, son & SOUNDGARDEN YOU/
jump into that fight klub like I'm EDWARD NORTON/
MURK YA MOTHER, TURN YA BROTHER to a HELPLESS ORPHAN/
hit me up, I'll save you money on your NEXT ABORTION/
I'll turn the logo on your polo to a HEADLESS HORSEMAN/

challenger

Been gone for awhile now i'm BACK IN YA VIEW, BACK TO GET SCHOOLED? i'm the beast boy, i came BACK TO THE ZOO... Now take ya PICK BOY, wat u want me to DO?..is it TRUE?, new user?, battling YOU? i aint sposed be this good, don't even got me a CREW! WHOO!(pause) ... my lines are OUTRAGEOUS, CONTAGIOUS sick-flows, quick-blows to the FACES. you bout as boring as big-hoes (no love) and MYSPACE IS, you bout as good as D.Rose is in late game SITUATIONS (= 4th quarters )! dang, did he just diss the MVP?, COULD IT BE?, somebody else that i can ENVY? POSSIBLY? FINALLY? some real competition here on LETSBEEF?

first thing i thought was "hmm, thats more than 8 lines/4 bars..."


but then someone says this?

"Thug, try to fill up the whole box next time."



lmao, do these people have any idea about writing ?

thats the correct structure for 8 lines/4 bars like it asked for. so we just fit as much we can in the box?





so far all 4 votes went to this other dude, am i missing something? if so please explain



dude has NO MULTIS, ZERO... wtf?!


and his last line


"did he just diss the MVP?, COULD IT BE?, somebody else that i can ENVY? POSSIBLY? FINALLY? some real competition here on LETSBEEF? "




how did any of this rhyme with anything?!

[DrummerInaRockBand]

am i missin sumtin?

http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=399429

me

it aint the same when I say that the POUNDS SPARKIN YOU/
Im talkin bout my "CLICK" in ur face when I MOUSE TARGET YOU/
my ROUNDS DART INTO space & they BOUNCE PARTICLES/
to put you in a black hole, son & SOUNDGARDEN YOU/
jump into that fight klub like I'm EDWARD NORTON/
MURK YA MOTHER, TURN YA BROTHER to a HELPLESS ORPHAN/
hit me up, I'll save you money on your NEXT ABORTION/
I'll turn the logo on your polo to a HEADLESS HORSEMAN/

challenger

Been gone for awhile now i'm BACK IN YA VIEW, BACK TO GET SCHOOLED? i'm the beast boy, i came BACK TO THE ZOO... Now take ya PICK BOY, wat u want me to DO?..is it TRUE?, new user?, battling YOU? i aint sposed be this good, don't even got me a CREW! WHOO!(pause) ... my lines are OUTRAGEOUS, CONTAGIOUS sick-flows, quick-blows to the FACES. you bout as boring as big-hoes (no love) and MYSPACE IS, you bout as good as D.Rose is in late game SITUATIONS (= 4th quarters )! dang, did he just diss the MVP?, COULD IT BE?, somebody else that i can ENVY? POSSIBLY? FINALLY? some real competition here on LETSBEEF?

first thing i thought was "hmm, thats more than 8 lines/4 bars..."


but then someone says this?

"Thug, try to fill up the whole box next time."



lmao, do these people have any idea about writing ?

thats the correct structure for 8 lines/4 bars like it asked for. so we just fit as much we can in the box?





so far all 4 votes went to this other dude, am i missing something? if so please explain



dude has NO MULTIS, ZERO... wtf?!


and his last line


"did he just diss the MVP?, COULD IT BE?, somebody else that i can ENVY? POSSIBLY? FINALLY? some real competition here on LETSBEEF? "




how did any of this rhyme with anything?!