Rock Bottom Remix

I have to agree on one thing G Kool said, the rhyming ending in -ing so often really brings it down. I never liked it and that's the idea you focused on, so lyrically it lacks to me. The emotion is all right, but could use a little more anger. I can see that you meant that but I never quite got the teeth gritting image throughout, so just try and add some more of that into pieces like this. The wording was good and mostly the flow was on point. I didnt like the ending as it seems like random religion is added in. Keep working and stay active.

I have to agree on one thing G Kool said, the rhyming ending in -ing so often really brings it down. I never liked it and that's the idea you focused on, so lyrically it lacks to me. The emotion is all right, but could use a little more anger. I can see that you meant that but I never quite got the teeth gritting image throughout, so just try and add some more of that into pieces like this. The wording was good and mostly the flow was on point. I didnt like the ending as it seems like random religion is added in. Keep working and stay active.