B - SLEAZY: RULES AND SIGNUP - Lets Beef

**customadepoetry** · #1 09-18-2018, 02:35 PM

Hi guys, I won't be a part of this battle, I don't like the topic. but check out my rap example. Its 12 lines but tell me if it fits in four bars, and if it follows all the rules.

brayne ded's girl got the cutest butt dimple
she had it all in mah face. shoot! she coulda busted a pimple
I said girl where you from? she said "i live in Nebraska,
n I can make my cheeks clap for you like you was winnin as oscar"
I said " Girl I'm not an astronaut but i'm about to take a trip to Uranus,
cum with me, i'll show you so many stars you'd think u were famous"
The night was clear and out came the full moon
she jumped on mah rocket and quaked the whole room
nearly came, she nearly pushed me over the top, had me dancing within a thin a line
What a dame! she was so rough! mann, this was skin on skin crime
2 hours later... blastoff! your girl- she was screaming
Jus kidding, I only jackoff. mans a virgin, I was dreaming

**customadepoetry** · 09-18-2018, 02:35 PM

Hi guys, I won't be a part of this battle, I don't like the topic. but check out my rap example. Its 12 lines but tell me if it fits in four bars, and if it follows all the rules.

brayne ded's girl got the cutest butt dimple
she had it all in mah face. shoot! she coulda busted a pimple
I said girl where you from? she said "i live in Nebraska,
n I can make my cheeks clap for you like you was winnin as oscar"
I said " Girl I'm not an astronaut but i'm about to take a trip to Uranus,
cum with me, i'll show you so many stars you'd think u were famous"
The night was clear and out came the full moon
she jumped on mah rocket and quaked the whole room
nearly came, she nearly pushed me over the top, had me dancing within a thin a line
What a dame! she was so rough! mann, this was skin on skin crime
2 hours later... blastoff! your girl- she was screaming
Jus kidding, I only jackoff. mans a virgin, I was dreaming

#2 09-18-2018, 02:37 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by customadepoetry

Hi guys, I won't be a part of this battle, I don't like the topic. but check out my rap example. Its 12 lines but tell me if it fits in four bars, and if it follows all the rules.

brayne ded's girl got the cutest butt dimple
she had it all in mah face. shoot! she coulda busted a pimple
I said girl where you from? she said "i live in Nebraska,
n I can make my cheeks clap for you like you was winnin as oscar"
I said " Girl I'm not an astronaut but i'm about to take a trip to Uranus,
cum with me, i'll show you so many stars you'd think u were famous"
The night was clear and out came the full moon
she jumped on mah rocket and quaked the whole room
nearly came, she nearly pushed me over the top, had me dancing within a thin a line
What a dame! she was so rough! mann, this was skin on skin crime
2 hours later... b4lastoff! your girl- she was screaming
Jus kidding, I only jackoff. mans a virgin, I was dreaming

Uh... Hard pass on that.

09-18-2018, 02:37 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by customadepoetry

Hi guys, I won't be a part of this battle, I don't like the topic. but check out my rap example. Its 12 lines but tell me if it fits in four bars, and if it follows all the rules.

brayne ded's girl got the cutest butt dimple
she had it all in mah face. shoot! she coulda busted a pimple
I said girl where you from? she said "i live in Nebraska,
n I can make my cheeks clap for you like you was winnin as oscar"
I said " Girl I'm not an astronaut but i'm about to take a trip to Uranus,
cum with me, i'll show you so many stars you'd think u were famous"
The night was clear and out came the full moon
she jumped on mah rocket and quaked the whole room
nearly came, she nearly pushed me over the top, had me dancing within a thin a line
What a dame! she was so rough! mann, this was skin on skin crime
2 hours later... b4lastoff! your girl- she was screaming
Jus kidding, I only jackoff. mans a virgin, I was dreaming

Uh... Hard pass on that.

**customadepoetry** · #3 09-18-2018, 02:52 PM

Nah dawg, you can't reply. you're the one the rap is aimed at

**customadepoetry** · 09-18-2018, 02:52 PM

Nah dawg, you can't reply. you're the one the rap is aimed at

#4 09-18-2018, 03:01 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by customadepoetry

Nah dawg, you can't reply. you're the one the rap is aimed at

:hellno:

I'm not replying to that piece of shit. Fuck outta here.

09-18-2018, 03:01 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by customadepoetry

Nah dawg, you can't reply. you're the one the rap is aimed at

:hellno:

I'm not replying to that piece of shit. Fuck outta here.

**customadepoetry** · #5 09-18-2018, 03:08 PM

I'm new here but Dawg, can't you see I was trolling myself. I'm such a piece of crap.. how can we battle directly and let a crowd judge? If you beat me I'll delete my account.

Topic: How lame the other person is.

**customadepoetry** · 09-18-2018, 03:08 PM

I'm new here but Dawg, can't you see I was trolling myself. I'm such a piece of crap.. how can we battle directly and let a crowd judge? If you beat me I'll delete my account.

Topic: How lame the other person is.

#6 09-18-2018, 03:34 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by customadepoetry

I'm new here but Dawg, can't you see I was trolling myself. I'm such a piece of crap.. how can we battle directly and let a crowd judge? If you beat me I'll delete my account.

Topic: How lame the other person is.

Go on with your two hour old multi account ass

09-18-2018, 03:34 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by customadepoetry

I'm new here but Dawg, can't you see I was trolling myself. I'm such a piece of crap.. how can we battle directly and let a crowd judge? If you beat me I'll delete my account.

Topic: How lame the other person is.

Go on with your two hour old multi account ass