Wordplay Realization

[The Law]

Ima "monster at killing", Phe's dead once i TRACE HIS HOME when i spot the "crib he in? I land bombs" but wont HATE HE'S GONE!!! (Monserrat Killing, Caribbean Island Bombs, Haiti's Gone). .. #learnrealbars

No hate to @RULE.. Just one I noticed upon reading that is like this. All the voters will be like nice shit, nice wordplay dope line.. But really check it out.. (Obviously, not in this battle because it was a tournament, you just get fv and concealed)

When I spot the Caribbean Island Bombs, But won't Hait's Gone??
Tell me Does that shit make the fucking least a bit of sense to you..

I see this constantly.. I mean all the fucking time from the top heads on the site.. and the voters either never catch the shit, or just think the shit works when half the time the wordplay only works one way or is only relevant one way.

But check the difference here because the other two wordplays did work however..

Ima a Monserrat Killing, Phe's dead once I trace his home when I spot the carribean island Bombs

^ You get the difference. I mean with the exception of punctuation, It reads grammatically correct.


Just wondering why voters don't ever take this into account.. Even some of the best voters on the site would be like damn nice wordplay..

Again, to clarify that I am just using this bar as an example. But I see the shit all the time. I swear 9 times out of 10 the wordplay doesn't even read grammatically correct if you read it the opposite way.

[The Law]

Ima "monster at killing", Phe's dead once i TRACE HIS HOME when i spot the "crib he in? I land bombs" but wont HATE HE'S GONE!!! (Monserrat Killing, Caribbean Island Bombs, Haiti's Gone). .. #learnrealbars

No hate to @RULE.. Just one I noticed upon reading that is like this. All the voters will be like nice shit, nice wordplay dope line.. But really check it out.. (Obviously, not in this battle because it was a tournament, you just get fv and concealed)

When I spot the Caribbean Island Bombs, But won't Hait's Gone??
Tell me Does that shit make the fucking least a bit of sense to you..

I see this constantly.. I mean all the fucking time from the top heads on the site.. and the voters either never catch the shit, or just think the shit works when half the time the wordplay only works one way or is only relevant one way.

But check the difference here because the other two wordplays did work however..

Ima a Monserrat Killing, Phe's dead once I trace his home when I spot the carribean island Bombs

^ You get the difference. I mean with the exception of punctuation, It reads grammatically correct.


Just wondering why voters don't ever take this into account.. Even some of the best voters on the site would be like damn nice wordplay..

Again, to clarify that I am just using this bar as an example. But I see the shit all the time. I swear 9 times out of 10 the wordplay doesn't even read grammatically correct if you read it the opposite way.