FVC Membership Contest Round 3 (Text)

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VOTED@Dissizit™ vs @ILLoKWENT™VOTED
http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=443197
Dissizit™: Oversoul: 3 / roxyG: 2
ILLoKWENT™: Oversoul: 4 / roxyG: 4
Expo: Ok, both expos had their merits, but this is a competition. A running theme I'm seeing among voters is "Do this" without a "How you do that". Adding the latter differentiates a quality basic expo, from a quality FVC expo to me. "Change this, this and this" without telling how can fall on deaf ears, or eyes. An expo should educate and inform, and FVC should do that better than others. I felt Illokwent went into more depth and specifics in his expo, he also gave examples how to do things differently, which will have more impact on the battler. As for Dissizit, I thought you did very well in the expo, but I was just looking for a little more. This is Round 3 after all. I also felt a 2 for Roxy was a little low, considering they did pull off some decent work, it was just lacking. Props to you both.
Pick: Illokwent

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VOTED@Dissizit™ vs @ILLoKWENT™VOTED
http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=443197
Dissizit™: Oversoul: 3 / roxyG: 2
ILLoKWENT™: Oversoul: 4 / roxyG: 4
Expo: Ok, both expos had their merits, but this is a competition. A running theme I'm seeing among voters is "Do this" without a "How you do that". Adding the latter differentiates a quality basic expo, from a quality FVC expo to me. "Change this, this and this" without telling how can fall on deaf ears, or eyes. An expo should educate and inform, and FVC should do that better than others. I felt Illokwent went into more depth and specifics in his expo, he also gave examples how to do things differently, which will have more impact on the battler. As for Dissizit, I thought you did very well in the expo, but I was just looking for a little more. This is Round 3 after all. I also felt a 2 for Roxy was a little low, considering they did pull off some decent work, it was just lacking. Props to you both.
Pick: Illokwent