sorry I did a little more work to it, Figured I wanted the newest version on here. Had great feedback from listeners on the last version, not happy about losing the comments but this version is better so Ill deal with it!! appreciate all votes and feedback, ty
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Absolutely amazing piece of artistry...pleased that you decided to revisit this. Definitely was worth the revision. Plenty of relatable concepts and well placed transitions. Beat selection was wonderful, must be commended...very mellow and didn't overwhelm the subject matter, complimented the bars. Consistent flow; stayed in the pocket...didn't rush your delivery and a climactic timeline...the build was fantastic!
Note worthy bars/concepts: You ain't got no fuckin time for your MAN NOW, but Every time of eating good, you got your HAND OUT/ What the hell is going on in the LAND NOW? It's like I'm trying to find faith but it RAN OUT/so what the PLAN NOW, before I go MAN DOWN.
Very well put together construct here...and very relatable.
Most meaningful bars: It's different out here now, more war and LESS PEACE/ More drug overdose than I've EVER SEEN/ it's like a lose a homie ever other WEEK/Always on that Facebook with the REST IN PEACE.
This hit very close to home, definitely a subject that should be addressed! Bravo to you Twin, for making this a talking point!
Overall: This revision was great! Plenty of dope builds, ideas, experiences and climactic highlights. Keep up the awesome work my G!
The outro was killer! Made logical sense and wasn't overbearing... subtle and wasn't trying to sale a point. Very well down also. "Why do you assume, there is two roads?" lol, nice. 10s across the boards on this one Posted By: GodTheReptilian - 2019-07-07
hard as fuck and very relatable "more war less peace and more drug overdoses than I've ever seen" thank you for sharing Posted By: You Are Not Better - 2019-07-07
hard af and very relatable "more war less peace and more drug overdoses than I've ever seen" thats real midwest shit, thank you for sharing Posted By: You Are Not Better - 2019-07-07
shit reminded me of immortal technique dude :O
this was hard as fuck man, loved that old school underground story telling gangsta style this had!
not to mention lyrically this shit is legit poetry in motion man! loved every bit of it
Posted By: The Saaxxx Baba - 2019-07-07
This is dope twin, dope message and beat selection, flow was in pocket. Best shit I've heard from you. Posted By: Kompz - 2019-07-08
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