It's Not good, only thing good about it is the Instrumental and chorus,, the bars were Unintelligable ,you went off topic and made no sense,.. They're all lying to you in the comments and ratings for whatever reason.. You might be cool, you might vote for them,.. but they're not helping you,.. Keep Trying bro.. if this is what you Love, that;s all i can say, i would rate it lower but it wasn't mixed that bad with a ok Mic..
C'mon now.... these Kats think that's you on the hook...rofl. That's the only think that's good is the not you person. No hate but you should give up son. Ya voice isn't meant to rap.